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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjht_fan

hi

i was kind of surprised 2
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i added u 2 the pm list

thanks huni!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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BTW wish a many happy returns of the day!
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Part 1

It was an beautiful early morning in Mumbai and Samrat, Diya, and Nupur spent it unpacking suitcases because they had just come from Morena the last night.

On the other side (in Mumbai), Sharma Mansion:

Gunjan as usual is the first one awake and then as usual rushes 2 mayank's room.

g- utho kumbhkaran!!!!! (hitting a pillow on Mayank's head)

m- stop it, it's just 6:00

g- r u mad, it's 8:00 and college starts at 8:30!!!

m- ur not my mom!!

g- ur not my son either!!

m- thank god, now good night

g- tikh hain!! Be late 4 college!!

m- OMG!! IT'S 8:00

g- wat the hell!!!! U think I was yelling at u 4 nothing!

m- sorry, ab chale, college ke liye late ho jaayenge, aur college ki ladkion ko bada dukh hoga

g- woh kyun??

m- kyun ki Mayank ki smile dekhe bina excel ki ladkiyon ki subah nahin hoti

g- What ever!

Bhushan Mansion:

Uday- hi my new cousins

n- hi uday bhaiya

u- it's Uday, btw does bhaiya mean stupid

n- no it means brother. Aap ko kyun laga ke main aap ko stupid kahu gi

u- actually, maine notice kiya hain ke often log mujhe stupid kehte hain, anywayz main aap sab ko neeche bulane aaya tha ta ke aap kuch khaa sake, today is ur first day in excel college

n- hum bas abhi aate hai

s- I understand ke log isse stupid kyun kehte hain

n- stop it samrat bhaiya, yeh humahra cousin hai

s- so what nupsi, cousin hone se kya fark padta hain

d- ok! Let's end the conversation and get ready, college nahin jaana kya

n and s- ok mom!

Dia made a face and walked away.

Gunjan goes in her car and Mayank as usual goes on his cool bike.

Uday, Nupur, Diya, and Samrat all go in a car. The car stops midway.

n- driver ghaadi ko kya hua

driver- sorry ghaadi kharab ho gayi, fix karne me time lagega

u- (after a long while) oh no hum late ho jaayenge

s- tumhe ab pata chala, hum yaha khare khare lift ki hi wait kar rahe the

Suddenly a car stops by them.

(gunjan's car)

g- hi aap logo ko lift chahiye kya, kyun ki agar aap excel college jaa rahe hain then hop on.

d- thanx so much

g- lekin ek problem hai

u- kya

g- tum mein se sirf teen logon ke liye jagah hai

n- tum sab jao, main auto mein aa jaoongi

s- tikh hain but u better be careful.

Nupur is waiting 4 an auto rickshaw but there isn't even 1 coming.

And then humahre hero Mayank ki entry hoti hain.

Mayank sees her and stops his bike.

He takes his helmet off.

m- mayank ke hote hue koi ladki kaise pareshan ho sakti hain

Nupur makes a weird face at him, and he is amazed that even after seeing his smile she was behaving so rudely.

m- waise mujhe dekh kar har ladki ki pareshani door ho jaati hain

Nupur was getting mad at him 4 his non-stop flirting.

n- will u stop flirting!!!

Mayank was taken back.

M to himself- aaj tak kisi ne bhi mere saath aise baat nahin ki hain

m- waise agar aap rickshaw ki wait kar rahi hain, toh main bata doon ke iss road pe rickshaws kabhi nahin aati (he lied)

n- kyun, yeh road tumahre baap ki hain jo tumhe yeh sab pata hain!

m- waise tum jaa kaha rahi ho

n- excel college, now will you just get lost!

m- chale jaata hoon but I'll feel bad kyun ki main bhi wahin jaa raha tha

n- I don't care, now please go (she tried 2 sound polite)

m- meri khatir nahin toh late hone se bachne ke liye toh chalo

n- main apne aap chali jaoongi

m- college start hone ke liye, sirf 5 minutes bache hain aur 5 minutes mein toh bike upar bhi pahunch na mushkil hain

n- (after a pause) tikh hain

m- to chalo

After hesitating for a few seconds Nupur finally gets on the back seat trying to create as much distance from Mayank as possible.

During the ride:

m- BTW I'm Mayank, naam toh sunna hi hoga

n (to herself)- wow! Kitna filmy hain lekin kitna flirt karta hain

n- nahin, maine toh kabhi nahin sunna

m- ab toh sun liya

n- whatever

m- apna introduction toh karo

n- kyun! She yelled as she was so annoyed

m- tikh hain

Mayank was about 2 say something:

n- I think agar tum na hi bolo toh acha rahega!

m- as u wish, princess

n- Nupur was about reply but stopped

n to herself- agar maine reply kiya toh fir se iski stupid baatein sun ni padengi

They were both silent for a while.

m- Kuch hi der mein bell ring ho jayegi aur abhi college yahan se bahut door hai. Par tum chinta mat karo, impossible ko possible banana Mayank Sharma janta hai. Bas tumhare liye ek sallah hai.

N- Kya?

M- Zod se pakad na!

And before Nupur can do anything Mayank starts riding on double speed scaring the hell out of her. Her hands automatically go around his shoulder and she closes her eyes praying:

N to herself- ganpati bapa please mujhe is pagal se bachao!

Mayank smirks to himself. After all how long can any girl resist him?

Right when Mayank parked the bike near the college Nupur quickly got off the bike. Nupur said thank you and went inside the college be4 mayank got time 2 reply.

m- badi ajeeb ladki hain

Meanwhile in Gunjan's car:

G- so, tum saab Mumbai naya naya aye ho?

U- Yeh dono aye hai, par mai to kab se Excel me hi hoon

G- Oh haan. Isliye to mai soch rahi thi kai maine tumhe pehle dekha hai, I think koi larki ko chase karte hue.

Uday blushes and says- Aur ye hai mere pyare se cousins jo kuch hi din pehle Morena se aye.

S- Mai hoon Samrat aur ye hai meri unidentical twin Diya.

D- Hi.

g- Morena? Let me guess koi small town.

Samrat was pretty annoyed with this comment.

s- chotta hain, lekin Morena ke rehne walo ke dil bahut bade hai

Gunjan was quite impressed with Samrat.

G to herself- acha hain, but not good enough 4 me.

B4 they knew it they had reached excel college.

g- bye, have a good day

s and d- bye

Mayank then enters his college.

Benji- hey yaar Mayank, kaha reh gaya tha

m- aaj raste mein badi ajeeb ladki mili

b- matlab

m- woh akeli ladki hain jis par mera charm work hi nahi hua

b- r u serious

m- han, ab chale mujhe koi shaunk nahin hai Shukla sir ki class ke liye late hone ka

b- aur agar kisi ko hain phir usse guiness book of world records mein hona chahiye

they laugh and enter the class

After Nupur entered the college:

n- by god! I hope yeh ladka second year mein ho kitna stupid tha

second year mein hi hoga.

While walking 2 class she bumps into gunjan.

While Mayank was walking 2 class he bumped into Samrat.

precap- mayur and sajan's second meetings

*************

pms will be sent soon

Edited by mjht_fan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
gr88 update luved mayank and nupurs meeting
keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Jessica your bak babez!!!! thanxs for the pm!!! You have to add me 2 the pm list for sure!!! siggies and intro was awsome!!! this is the first ff which i have come across which is soooooo different... it would be fun and interesting 2 read!!! looking forward for the first update!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's so good!! i can't wait for what happens next with mayank and samrat..... pls update soon and pm me when u do :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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cool intro and love the frist part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
Awesome-Blossom! 😊

Add me to ur PM list.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome thing dear....lovd it....add me 2 da pm list plz....thanx....lovd it!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

Nupur and Gunjan bumped into each other.

N and g at same time: Sorry!

n- lekin fault toh meri thi na

g- actually fault meri thi

n- nahi meri

g- meri

n- meri

Then they both started laughing.

g- hey, tum toh samrat aur diya ki chotti behan ho right

n- haan, lekin tumhe kaise pata

g- yaad hain this morning

n- haan yaad aaya

g- btw is was really nice 2 let ur older siblings go

n- thanx

g- I hope tumhe auto mil gayi thi

n- auto nahi, mujhe ek bahut hi stupid idiot mila (she said looking at Mayank)

gunjan notices she means Mayank.

n- I mean, stupidness ki bhi koi limit hoti hain

g- acha, aur kya kya kiya usne

n- he's just so stupid, maine usse kaha ke mujhe koi lift nahi chahiye lekin wo toh manta hi nahi, bas peeche hi par gaya!

g- sach mein main bhi usse stupid hi samajhti hoon

n- tum usse jaanti ho!

g- wo mera chotta bhai hain

n- sorry (she said embarrassed)

g- sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahin, I understand

g- waise tum pehle ladki ho, jis ko Mayank ne apni bike pe lift di, warna ladkiyan to bas uske peeche peeche ghoomti rehti hain

n- aaj kal ki ladkiyon ki choice kaafi weird hain

*laughs*

n- main apna naam batana toh bhul hi gayi, I'm nupur and u r

g- gunjan, friends

n- friends

They shake hands and turn 2 leave when'

n- ruko

g- haan

n- tum mujhe bata sakti ho ke Shukla sir ki class kis taraf hain

Instantly a smile appeared in Gunjan face because she found out that nupur is in Mayank's class.

g- uss taraf seeda ja ke left, pe jo pehli class hogi

n- thanks

g- no problem, class ke baad canteen me milte hain

n- ok

Mayank and Samrat:

m- sorry dude

s- no problem

m- tum naye ho kya

s- haan mein bas kal hi Morena se aaya hoon

m-oh, aaj tum doosre naye student ho jisse main mila hoon (looking at nupur)

s- pehle kaun tha (knowing he was talking about Nupur)

m- woh (pointing 2 nupur), bahut hi cute ladki hain right

s- acha

m- haan, actually aaj subah pehle baar maine kissi ladki ko meri bike pe behtne ki ijazat di lekin, woh toh mujhse lar rahi thi, maine usse bahut pareshan kiya, but end mein finally woh maan gayi, kyun ki zyaada der tak koi bhi ladki mayank ko na nahi bol sakti

s- lekin wo bahut hi alag hain, I bet wo tumse nafrat karti hogi

m- nafrat ko pyaar mein badal na Mayank ko aata hain

s- oh really, lekin meri behan bhi kuch kam nahi hain

m- oh, wo tumahri behan hain

s- haan, toh!

m- tumahri ijazat chah-

s- sochna bhi mat, meri behan ke aas paas, agar ghoome toh mein tumahra wo haal karunga, jo tum soch bhi nahi sakte

m- ok ok, sorry

s- main toh bas mazak kar raha tha, tum ache ladke ho

m- thank u

s- waise tumhe nahi lagta ke kuch log apne aap ko kuch zyaada hi samajhte hain (looking at gunjan)

m- wo meri behan hain

s- wow! What a coincidence!

s- lekin ek salah dena chahta tha

m- kya

s- tumhe nahin lagta, ke usse thode zyaada kapde pehne chahiye

m- wo meri baat kyun manegi

*laugh*

m- acha, main chalta hoon nahi toh class ke liye late ho jaoonga.

s- bye

m- bye

Shukla's class:

Mayank enters the class and sees Nupur sitting on the desk that he always sits on.

N to herself- hey bhagwan isse bhi yahi class mein hona tha!

He sits on the des in front of her instead of beside her 2 see if she feels bad but she's just interested in her books.

Just than Sheena comes and sits beside him.

s- hi mayank! (she said in her squeaky voice)

m- bye sheena

He goes and sits beside Nupur leaving Sheena, who's face turned red in anger. She was looking like a tomato.

n- tumhe ye hi seat mili thi

m- sorry lekin mujhe sheena kameena se bachna tha

n- whatever

she gets up and sits at a different seat and mayank also gets up and makes the boy sitting beside Nupur get up and he sits beside her again.

When she turns her face'

n- tum!!

m- Haan main

n- tum chup chaap ek seat par nahi beht sakte

m- waise tum ne bhi to seat change ki

n- tumahri wajah se!

m- maine bhi tumahri wajah se

She just sits there with an annoyed look on her face.

Mayank sits there with his feet on his desk to annoy nupur more.

Shukhla sir enters the class and sees Mayank sitting with his feet on the desk.

Precap- sajan's second meeting

*************

I hope u guys enjoyed reading part 2 and 1, and I'm really sorry 4 not pming any1 4 the first part that was posted yesterday.

Plzzzzzzzz comment

And let me know what u thought about both the parts.😃

Edited by mjht_fan - 16 years ago

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