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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow yaar i loved it................its awesome .......please pm me😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey AMMY LUVZ RIDZ & bharathi aram,,
thnku!
I'll pm u guys as soon as i update =]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy
my name's nupur
please do add me to ur pm list !
ur ff sounds amazinggg👏
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sure nupur!
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hey dear....me gonna wait for ur update...so plz dont forget to count me in, in ur PM list.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely yaar so mayank and nupur had gone to Zurich.
good and gunajn went with them.
okk that was little saddening as samrat must have heart broken.
do contiue dear
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like ur FF very much
its so different.
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its awesome please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Okk.. Part 2 is here.. It mainly highlights how Gunjan is feeling, apart from how the family is getting ready to go back to Mumbai. This is the last part in Zurich. Next part they'll be in Mumbai =]

Part 2 --

Over the next 16 weeks, time flew by as everyone packed, packed & packed even more. Mayank had got a holiday of 3 months, as it had been 2 years of his job.

It was decided that, now Mayank would come for a month, and later when Nupur would have to deliver, he would come back for the other 2 months.

Meanwhile Nupur had done a lot of shopping. She shopped for everything from clothes to perfumes, from chocolates to jewellery. And she shopped for everyone, Samrat, Benji, CJ, Jacko, Uday, but especially for Dia. She shopped the maximum for Dia, knowing that she would be the happiest to get branded & expensive gifts. The chocolates were afcourse for Uday, but afcourse the others would get some too. Infact, there were two whole suitcases packed with nothing but chocolates, and Mayank was completely aghast seeing this.

"Nupur, tum agar aise Hi sabke liye shopping karti rahi na, toh mujhe yeh sab cargo se bhejna padega! Kya, tum bhi? Check in wale samjhenge ki hum permenantly shift ho rahe hai!" cried Mayank.

"Huh? Arre kash meri aisi kismet hoti. Aur Mayank, do saal baad ja rahe ahi, toh khaali haath kaise ja sakte hai? Kyun Maa?" Nupur shot back.

"Bilkul, Aur haan, abse agar meri Nupur ko kissi baat ke liye daanta na, toh tumhari khair nahi, Mayu!"

"Maa, yeh daantna tha?" Mayank replied.

"Aur nahin toh kya?" Nupur said, "Waise Mayank, kya phirse India transfer hone ka koi chance hai? Please try karo na! Phir hum Mayur ke saath wahi par settle ho sakte hai hamesha ke liye."

"Sabse pehli baat ' Mayur kehna bandh karo! Mayuri bhi toh ho sakti hai! Aur yeh bank meri nahin hai ke jab mann kiya tab chal basey!" he said, "Toh yeh bhooth tum dono apne mann se utaar do! Gunjan ko dekho'kitne chup chap apna kaam kar rahi hai. Woh bhi samajhti hai maine yeh transfer sabki khushi ke liya tha, kyun Gunjan?"

"Haan Mayank, main samajhti hoon ke tumhe hum sab ki khushi ka pura khayal hai." she paused to think for a second, "Par, actually, main bhi phir Mumbai jaane ke liyabohut excited hoon." She said as a small smile bloomed on her face.

What she said set her thinking. Deep inside, she was really pleased with the thought the she'd be seeing her old friends again. Not that she hadn't made any friends in Zurich. Alice, Jenny, Josh & Emily were all wonderful. But nothing compared for the love and affection she felt for everyone back in Mumbai. Benji, Uday, Dia, Jacko' They were all so close.

But most of all, she wanted to see that one face, that she had longed for the most. Not to talk to, but to make sure that face was happy after everything she had given up for him to have a happier life with Sheena.

Gunjan wanted to hear that voice, that she hadn't heard for more than two years, that once used to console her in the most soothing way. She wanted to see her special friend, the sweet, cute guy who a guitar in one hand & a basketball in the other' Samrat.

A few lines of her favourite poem crossed her mind instantly & Gunjan felt a tickling sensation of excitement in her stomach.

"Kal hum thein saath saath,

Toh humne hi chod diya apka haath.

Aaj jab beech hai melon ki doorie,

Toh achanak milna ho gaya zaroori,

Kash aap samajh sakey humari majboori,

Fasle kabhi kam bhi huye,

Toh shayad mit na paye.

Phir bhi faslon ko mitane,

Hum phirse apki zindgai mein chalein aye."

A tear trickeled down her cheek, as images of the good old days flashed past her.

I love him & there's nothing I can do about it, she thought.

She'd come to realize this in the past two years she had spent without him.

She sadly stood up with a start, not wanting Nupur to give her a shout about how they had hardly four days left to pack & afcourse shop.

Maybe this was how it was meant to be, she told herself for the hundredth time, & hopefully mera chota sa sacrifice uske kaam aya' she thought, not knowing how wrong her hopes had gone back in Mumbai'

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Okk.. Hope you guys liked it! Please comment! 😳

- Don't kill me if u find it short. 😳
Don't kill me if i forget to PM u. 😳
Remind me to add u on my list if ur name isn't already there.. 😳
And i know the poetry is a bit sucky.. but i guess it matches Gunjan's feelings..
I'll take a few more days for part 3, ok? It's still getting typed in..😳

--molii <33--

Edited by sugar.n.spice14 - 16 years ago

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