~***Finally in love ak & ar fanfic- Part 2/pg2**~ - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

After a romantic session kripa moves out to resume her duties of a perfect wife ,a perfect daughter in law and a perfect bhabhi

Moving into the kitchen she turns on the radio out of which a sweet sound comes of a girl

"hello,Mumbai good morning and welcome to your own morning show uth ja India with your dost Rj so wake up sleepy heads and tell me about your schedule today and here is the song for all you out there from the flick new york"

Listening to her sweet sister in law cum friend kripa starts dialing a number "hello" a beaming rj picks up the receiver"hey kb,toh bhai ne chod diya""chup badmash"chal bata breakfast kiya ke nahi"kar liya kb kyun fikr karto ho" kyun na karo tere bhabhi hoon hak banta hai"ok ok so whats up subah subah'ceiling"kp"as usual aapke bhai saab ke liye nashta ban raha hai"aaj kya farmaish hai unki "chup kar kyun bol rahi hai abhi tak toh kuch nahi kaha janaab ne "kripaaaaa"aayi" chal rj phone rakhte hoon" bye kb llove you " me too".

Entering back she sees her handsome husband dripping wet "haan bolo"baby mere tie baandh do "itne bade ho gaye ho ek tie baandhni nahi aati" wrapping his arms around her slender waist "aati hai begum sahiba"looking at her confused expressions he continues "par nahi baandoo ga,kyunki agar tie baandhna shuroo kar diya toh tumhe is tara baahon me bhar ke romance nahi kar paaoonga ""who to tum waise bhi nahi kar paaoge"pushing him a little " office nahi jaana kya " making a depressed face angad replies back"tumko bilkul sharm nahi aati kya"shocked kripa slightly moves her hand asking why"apni pati parmeshvar ko bhooka bhejo gi kya,dekho aage hi patla ho gaya hoon" heading out kripa in turn "patle aur tum weighing machine laaoon kya" replying back with a wink"nahi mohatarama filhaal hume sirf nashta la deejiye"seeing him following her to the kitchen"kahiya mere pati parmeshwar kya khana chahenge aap " coming towards her with a smirk on his face "aap"seeing her face"aapke hath ka khana begum sahiba "acha acha thik hai jao " haan haan jaata hoon mere toh koi value nahi hai"

After bidding bye to her husband kripa starts doing her household chores as soon as clock strikes 11:00 kripa opens the door "aagayi rj" slightltly winning "how do you come to know always that its me "hugging her sher"because tum aur angad mere zindagi ho isliye tum dono ki kadmo ki aahat main pehchan lete hoon ,kyun ki tumahare kadmo ki aahat sunte hi mere chehre par muskuraahat aa jaati hai samjhe"with moist eyes and tears threatening to fall down rj enters her room and after keeping stuff lies ddown her head and closes her eyes feeling kripa's hand pressing her forehead."acha ridhima "realizing her tone ridhima gets alert knowing something serious is on her way ,because she calls her by her full name onle when its something serious ,replying in the same tone"ji bhabhi"slightly hesitating kripa finally reveals out "tumahare liye marriage proposal aaya hai"leaving a shocked ridhima.

Whats ridhima's reaction coming up in part 3.

Edited by richakumar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was lovely yaar...... tooo sweet......😳😳😳... waiting to see ridzzi's reaction.... you're a brill writer sweety..... duin a great job soo far!!! hugs........rav...xxx😊

Edited by lilsunshine_rav - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy! i really like ur FF!
love it!!!
sooo cute!!!
continue soon! and plz PM me!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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grt part really good plss continue sooon
plss pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank youn for commenting would be continuing soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very sweet part...thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
nice prt.
is tht proposal for Ridhima is frm Armaan?
continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey loved ur fic......
plz can u pm me wenevr u update..
cont soon

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