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aanita12

@aanita12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#461

hey!!

kewl story...buh i feel u ended it too soon man...oh well i guess...good endin though...keep it up...jus luv ur stories man!!!... 😛 👍🏼👏

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aspatel2

@aspatel2

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Posted: 16 years ago

#462

Amazing ending.... really the whole FF was so touching, emotions were described well....

cant wait for another FF,

Axita

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rav

@-midnightsun-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#463

whhoooooaaaaa lina...... i totally love you yaar... hehe..... that was jus beyond words.... totally awesum!!!!!!! looking forward to the new one!!! mwwaaahhhzzzz....xx

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#464

oh wow that ended sooner than i expected... i thought another handful of parts may have ben due, but all's well for the maliks i see :)

ps: wondering what brought the names falak n anvil to your mind... ??

cheers,
nj

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#465

OMG! lovely update! Armaan and Falak oh wow! dat different! lol! tha epilouge was cute n so exicted 4 ur new FF! thnx 4 tha PMs/update! ❤️twinkle!

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

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Posted: 16 years ago

#466

wow....It's done already!? Just read the last couple ...lol I guess u really want to get str8 on the new FF.

Really a differnt one of a kind of FF. Enjoyed reading your work.

Natasha xo.

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@Megs.Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#467

hello really a nice one.

loved it

love

meghana

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aarora

@aarora

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Posted: 16 years ago

#468

hey um sorry..cudnt comment for last 2-3 parts..but seriously loved them all..AR wrestling..lol..that was too funny..n then armaan n falak.. totally unexpected..i thot they were always like brother n sister..but they realize this after doing it for dont know how many times..lol..n yeah never thot this ff ll end so soon..but happy they are finally together..they HAD to..loved the last line..Armaan ll always be THE SECOND in riddhima's live..beautiful ending..
thanks for PM always..love ya..

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 16 years ago

#469

that is so cute!!! i just caught up and u ended it:( o well.. but armaan and falak.. i reread that part cuz i thought i skipped something and i was like eww!!!so wrong.. but like he said he was 17...hey wait im 17, thhat doesnt mean im stupid!:P lol

wait for me, ,i'm gonna read ur new one too...i'm just bzy this week..

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268143

@268143

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Posted: 16 years ago

#470

i jst finishd readin da whole FF n it was fab 👏 👏 👏 hearin about Armaan n Falak was a shocker n thn he said thy realised dat thy were lyk bro n sis eww 🤔 nways i loved da story n even da endin was gr8 😛