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@-Cherry-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#261

awwwwwwwwwwww amazing lina di i really missed ur writing hehe do update soon this time my my, sex in a car that's new hehe do continue ASAP thnks for the PM swancy

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aanita12

@aanita12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#262

kewl part...luved it...jus felt a tad bit bad for her not savin armaan frm gettin beaten up by his galfrnd...i mean k she doesn't lyk him n all buh cumon she cld have @ least saved him afterall she has d right to she's not his gf buh his "WIFE"...d story seems to get interestin by d sec yo....really anticipatin d nxt part...update soon...😛 😊 👏👍🏼

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mansibharti

@mansibharti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#263

i read it !! i read it !! i read it !!!

god wordy really you almost killed me... i was dying to read the next and awww it was just sooooo lovely.... the last words of armaan that if they fall in love he would make love to her in the same car.... gosh soooooo romantic sooooo sweet 😍i wish that ridhhima sees his love too... and vice-versa....

and another thing DONT MAKE US WAIT SOOO LONG AGAIN you can be arrested for attempt of murder 😆😆

loads of love
Mansi

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nikita

@ammy_furor

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Posted: 16 years ago

#264

Ok an update after a longer time...not really but since u ve spoilts us...hence i jus cant deny it..! Ok a very good update...making love in car...oh la la...waiting for ur next part...

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@debby_11

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Posted: 16 years ago

#265

after 2 days...missed ur ff badly...

it was too gud

continue soon

love

debadrita

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Wordy

@Wordy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: brainychild92
eww ammy.. is that something to say.. now either she will blush or fight...lol

this was interesting.. but she didnt beg so ammy didnt really win..lolshe jsut said talk..lol but wat can u expect.. joru ka ghulam..lol.must listen to wat wifey says..lol

continue sooonn

lol 😆 yup yup yup must listen to wat wifey says, love that line 😛 i will continue the next part soon 😊

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Wordy

@Wordy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: Angelic_Swancy
awwwwwwwwwwww amazing lina di i really missed ur writing hehe do update soon this time my my, sex in a car that's new hehe do continue ASAP thnks for the PM swancy

thanks for the great comment😃 lol im not going to be able to update a lot of parts each day as i used to because of a lot of stuff happening and stuff lol, you know regular family troubles, but i will continue the next part tomorrow 😊

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Wordy

@Wordy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: aanita12
kewl part...luved it...jus felt a tad bit bad for her not savin armaan frm gettin beaten up by his galfrnd...i mean k she doesn't lyk him n all buh cumon she cld have @ least saved him afterall she has d right to she's not his gf buh his "WIFE"...d story seems to get interestin by d sec yo....really anticipatin d nxt part...update soon...😛 😊 👏👍🏼

aw thanks for the great comment 😃 im glad you find the story getting interesting 😛 lol yeah when i was writting i was also thinking it was kind of harsh that Ridhima would just leave but then again Armaan and Ridhima arent exactly friends or lovers its like they are between hate, friendship, and having feelings for each other 😆😛 talk about confusing...😛 im confusing my self and im supposed to write this fan fic 😆

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Wordy

@Wordy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: mansibharti

i read it !! i read it !! i read it !!!

god wordy really you almost killed me... i was dying to read the next and awww it was just sooooo lovely.... the last words of armaan that if they fall in love he would make love to her in the same car.... gosh soooooo romantic sooooo sweet 😍i wish that ridhhima sees his love too... and vice-versa....

and another thing DONT MAKE US WAIT SOOO LONG AGAIN you can be arrested for attempt of murder 😆😆

loads of love
Mansi

i was only gone for two days 😲 😆 lol im glad you liked the part and i will continue the next part soon, im going on vacation soon for a week, i wouldnt what will happen to you then 😛 but again thanks for the great comment and gald that you found it romantic 😛

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 16 years ago

#270

woah dear its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😍superb so cuteso Armaan GF come to see him & she still don't know about AR marriage😆 & he don't talk with her bachari Ridhima such a big tourcher with whom she fight😆😆😆 but cool to see he is taking her for shopping😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

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