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kkanthan

@kkanthan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#221

Wow! Wow!Wow! Really cute!

You bring out the sequence of events so nicely! Their little kissing hide-in-seek was sooo

cute! Thanks for such a wonderful part! LOVED it!

Do continue as soon as you can..👏

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aspatel2

@aspatel2

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Posted: 16 years ago

#222

Wow, really cute.... I really liked how they shared their emotions with eachother.... pls cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#223

Wonderful parts!!

Thanks for the PM..

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maryam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#224

grt part really good love it plss continue sooon

tnx for the pm

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Swap-Arhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#225

read all ur parts gr8...lovd the last part...a lot especially armaans backgrnd...too good...continue soon dear...

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Mariam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#226

awwwsssssssssuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmm update yaar very good................continue super soon
loads of love
SHWEeT29

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Ruhee

@night girl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#227

good part

Edited by night girl - 16 years ago

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Wordy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

hai Lena😊
it's time for the best comment yaar😊I just loved this part😊n to mention it's not annoying ok😊so Armaan is seducing her to not have a fight😆😆but I really liked him yaar he just behaved like a perfect husband by not forcing her😊really if he take the future step it will ruin their relation for worst than now😊it's great that he is going to give a try to this relation😊hope his try may work sooon😊waiting to see AR to be in LOVE sooooooooooon😊continue soooooooooon😊

thanks for the best comment 😃 glad to know you liked the part😊 i guess i found it annoying because i wasnt really in the mood to writte 😆 yup didnt want to show Armaan as the bad guy 😊 AR will soon enough will have to learn to love 😛 and i will continue the next part soon😃and again thanks for the great comment

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Wordy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: ammy-ridz

hey....Wonderful part.
Oh Ridz n Jeleous! wow! n Armaan tried to Seduce her???He is very cheeky.he always has his way😆 But it was so nice of him to not continue n withdraw or else that would have again put them to Square one. Loved them Confessing each other about their life.
AMAZING!!! Plzzz continue soon.

Thanxx 4 d PM.

thanks for the great comment 😃 gald to know you liked the part, i will continue the next part soon. 😃 lol yup Armaan always has his way 😛 again thanks for the great comment, i will continue soon 😃

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Wordy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: simi2
hey lina
now this i what i call a perfect .....supercool and fabulous part .........i truely and seriously loved it all

oh armaan a true and a perfect gentelmen lovely one

loved it

and haa finally they r getting in some emotional bounding thats soo sweet loved it

oh now cant just wait for few hours to read what next

hope more ar bonding comimg ahead and haa thanks for the pm

love you lots

simi

aw thanks for the great comment. lol i wanted Armaan to be the gentalman in the story, i dont want him to be the bad guy in the fan fic😛 yup AR getting closer a little 😊 again thanks for the great comment, i will continue the next part soon 😃