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jennie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

the last two parts were great!!

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Hima

@k_anjali12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#162

hai Lena😊

u know this is the first time u left me withh no words for ur update😊a very nice part yaar😊u beautifully descrided AR emotions😊n ya . . they both need each other in their lives😊happy to see that fhalak words made some sense in Riddhima😊great😊n now she is waiting for him😊a weird but a great thing😊hope their relation would turn for best sooooon😊continue sooooooooooon 😊

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#163

Wow ... superb. So much meaning into their silly fights now. Amazingly written.

Cheers,

Suvarna

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nikita

@ammy_furor

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Posted: 16 years ago

#164

Now dis was one of da required post... U made us understand da reason for ammy's behaviour aptly... U wrote dis part brilliantly...but ar r really hillarious....tying ur wife on da 1 st night of ur marriage...god heavens...save dem...

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Wordy

@Wordy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

hai Lena😊
u know this is the first time u left me withh no words for ur update😊a very nice part yaar😊u beautifully descrided AR emotions😊n ya . . they both need each other in their lives😊happy to see that fhalak words made some sense in Riddhima😊great😊n now she is waiting for him😊a weird but a great thing😊hope their relation would turn for best sooooon😊continue sooooooooooon 😊

hey thanks for the great comment, im glad you liekd the part. lol i dont know what else to say any more😆 but i absolutly loved reading your comments its always long and it makes me smile 😃

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Wordy

@Wordy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: ammy_furor
Now dis was one of da required post... U made us understand da reason for ammy's behaviour aptly... U wrote dis part brilliantly...but ar r really hillarious....tying ur wife on da 1 st night of ur marriage...god heavens...save dem...

thanks for the great comment 😆 lol someone gotta help them. they fight like crazy 😛 will continue the next part soon. im gald you liked the part and the part before it also 😃

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flaming_saphire

@flaming_saphire

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Posted: 16 years ago

#167

hey....... da parts were amazing.

really enjoyed it.

wonder how ar will b able 2 stay 2gether.

well i always used 2 wonder dat y did armaan used 2 behave like dat with ridz. but u made it clear.

u r an excellent writer.

continue soooooon.

n thnx 4 sendin da pm.

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sasi

@ksasi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#168

ch-5: its just hilarious.

ch-6: its some wat emotional.

Thanks for pm.

Update soon.

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#169

Lina thanks for quick update .It was a bit emotional .Its tough to see from other POV & now she knew all about him but the question is u like possessiveness ,protection ,attention to some extent when its exceed too much ,It will seems like a cord in ur neck .Now she knows the reason behind it.Armaan should also take steps with her not far or behind her .
let's see what come next.

thanks for pm .
loads of love
ritu