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Swap-Arhi

@Swap-Arhi

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#111

dont u dare say it was boring...it was very good...ridzie's emotions and her nervousness abt lvng evtng behind was too good...ditto with armaan...update soon dear i feel the next part is gonna be good one ;)

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kkanthan

@kkanthan

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#112

Waiting for the real fun to start! Great story!

Will you be updating the next part today?

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Wordy

@Wordy

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: kkanthan
Waiting for the real fun to start! Great story!
Will you be updating the next part today?

i might be just depends, because the next part its supposed to be really long so for me to get every thing down it might take some time

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Wordy

@Wordy

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: swapdmg
dont u dare say it was boring...it was very good...ridzie's emotions and her nervousness abt lvng evtng behind was too good...ditto with armaan...update soon dear i feel the next part is gonna be good one ;)

thanks, but as a writter i feel like i could have done better but im glad you liked the part i will continue the next part soon.

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aspatel2

@aspatel2

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#115

WOW just wow.... emotions were beautifully described.... what u mean it was boring... its was NOT boring at allllll. I simply loved it..

eagerly waiting for the fun..

pls cont. sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

-axita

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maryam

@mar-

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#116

grt part really good plss continue sooon

tnx for the pm

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#117

Hey ... thanks a bunch for PM and quick updates. Loving them. Very curious to know whats gonna happen next in AR life.

Cheers,

Suvarna

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Wordy

@Wordy

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

COMING SOON CHAPTER FIVE

"Put me down!" Ridhima screamed like a maniac. She screamed loud enough to where even Falak came rushing out of her room to see what was going on. "Armaan, what are you doing?" Falak questioned as she saw Armaan holding Ridhima's legs and her whole body thrown over his shoulder.

"Nothing dear, just a little role playing" He said with a grin. "Ew" Was all Falak said and headed back for her room as Ridhima screamed "Falak! Help! I'm gonna kill you both!" She said in fuming anger.

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Rani

@Rejected

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Wordy

COMING SOON CHAPTER FIVE

"Put me down!" Ridhima screamed like a maniac. She screamed loud enough to where even Falak came rushing out of her room to see what was going on. "Armaan, what are you doing?" Falak questioned as she saw Armaan holding Ridhima's legs and her whole body thrown over his shoulder.
"Nothing dear, just a little role playing" He said with a grin. "Ew" Was all Falak said and headed back for her room as Ridhima screamed "Falak! Help! I'm gonna kill you both!" She said in fuming anger.

chapter five seems like it will be very exciting, cant wait to read it

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Wordy
COMING SOON CHAPTER FIVE

"Put me down!" Ridhima screamed like a maniac. She screamed loud enough to where even Falak came rushing out of her room to see what was going on. "Armaan, what are you doing?" Falak questioned as she saw Armaan holding Ridhima's legs and her whole body thrown over his shoulder.
"Nothing dear, just a little role playing" He said with a grin. "Ew" Was all Falak said and headed back for her room as Ridhima screamed "Falak! Help! I'm gonna kill you both!" She said in fuming anger.

Quite interesting.waiting for their first meet.
chapter four was nice so don't say that.
love this ff too much.