Tanha Dil-AR Mini FF [Last Part pg 82) 17/09/09

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Riddhi

@Riddss

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Posted: 16 years ago

#501

heyyy dear,
awsoem part
thanks for PM.

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plzzz don't end this FF now
plzz
after 2 or 3
parts then ok but with epiloug

love
Riddss

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mansibharti

@mansibharti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#502

hey rucha..

sorry for commenting so late yaar had some problem you see.. and about the part this was sooo nice... finally baby got her mommy... and what's this you are ending it already i thought it will go on for a while.. but if you wish it then an epilogue would be good 😃...

excellent work dear... really got to see some nice heart felt emotions...😃

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cutie_shalzy

@cutie_shalzy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#503

hey rucha sweetie wow yaar it ws emotional to but happpppy tooooooooo i lvd it soooooooooo much finally wth lots of courage she got her mom awwwwwwww ar got sooooo much angry whn she didn't acceptd her as her mom aw nd poor ridz cried soooooooo much nd yeyyyyyyyy i am sooooooooooooo happpppppppppy yaar finally family togthr aftr long 3yrs seperation to never be seperatd yeyyyyyyyyyyy i wnt to dance yaar i jst lvd it their luv making sooo much romantic hayeeeee ahana soo sweeeeeet yaar sleeping on her stomach hhehe lvd tht yaar neki or puch puch hehehe we wnt 2more updates waise to never wnt to end it but it has to be some day 2 more updates are aise kaise yaha pe end abhi us khoosat shanky ki akal thikane lagani hai fir their so calld gang waiting fr tht
cont sooooooon
thnksf r dpm
luv yachna

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aarora

@aarora

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Posted: 16 years ago

#504

hey very nice update sweety..amazing..loved their family moment.. obviously want more updates from u..so ll go for two parts n then epilogue..lol..PLEASE dont end here..continue soon..cant wait to read more..
thanks for PM...
love ya...

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coorg.japan

@coorg.japan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#505

Your story is so different and its awesome. Please don't end it now.

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#506

wow!!

dis was a wondeful ff!!

i luved each and every bit of it.....!!

u wrote it so well, it was so natural...and awwww!! choo-chweet!
dis was thr perfect end..though i don't want u to end dis ff ever!!

angel's insecurities were so well portrayed!

and they way she was behaving wid ridz in the beginning and felt that her dada would go away...

and i was seriously damn shocked when riddhima said dat she would go back..away from all of dem!
but finally...everything is back to normal..as it should be..the perfect happy family!!

i luved the camera and tickling session...and riddhima's trademark to cry on every occassion!! lolzz..luved dis dialogue!

i want u to write more..and not end dis plzz...ever!

thnx a lot for the pm..

update asap!!

-Sanjana

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kshanikaa

@kshanikaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#507

That was a splendid part....a lot happened....Aahana was at her cutest.....seriously its hard to understand what goes into a kid's mind? Aahana's fears were sooooooooo innocent. I loved family's re-union. Aahana was tooooo sweet. Loved AR with their love symbol, Aahana.....😊
I'll like to read more from you....so part 10.
Thanks for d pm.

Edited by kshanikaa - 16 years ago

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#508

awesum story Rucha just fabulous
I'm speechless.
part 7 was soooooo sizzling.I had goosebumps while reading it.
u have written an awesum story
plz post a few more parts be4 writing the epilogue plz yaar
lust luv ur creative skill.
Why not cumin 2 star forum???

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#509

hey rucha
a big sorry for not being able to comment on previous two parts
but was super busy with my exams(internals)
which are finally over :) yippie
omg i missed out sooo much dear
the turning point of their relationships
n then ahana-ridz scenes were truly outstanding dear
just loved them
will be regular from now (till the next set of internals:(
update soon