If it was meant to be-(Update 2/10/10pg107) - Page 55

part 8-

thank god i hope samrat finds out the truth soon............
nupur asking did ramu kaka like the room.......... lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

part 9-

love it yaar.........
simply fantastic........
so mayank is falling for nupur.........
hope he finds out about nupur soon.........

part 10-

no mayur.........
glad samrat is recognizing gunjan.......
and benji's talk........... lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

part 10 (continued)-

wow.........
red for walls........... interesting...........

part 11-

dia and r.v scene was nice.......
glad samrat recognized her.........

part 11 (continued)-

mayank loves nupur yay................
he asked her for dinner...........
can't see nupur in tears.............

part 12-

glad gunjan told samrat the truth...........
hope mayank finds out about ocd soon..........
mayank and bollywood- can't wait for it............

Originally posted by: Neha_S

Sitting surrounded by all the greens and red vegetables that were in my house,I could not wonder at being called a freak.The refrigator door was wide open and empty as though calling me to organise it.I picked up the the packet of beans and put in the vegetable cabinet.The cumcumbers were next in line...no wait...carrots.

CA comes before Cu.Cursing myself I diligently sorted through the neatly tied packs.It was pathetically ironic that I was resorting to measures which screamed COMPULSIVE to forget one's outburst calling me the same.
Compulsive housewife!!!compulsive...C-O-M-P-U-L-S-I-V-E!
I swallowed hard.I couldnt let myself cry.I couldnt let my mother see my tears and face her questions.Vaguely I wished Gunjan was here.She had called this morning but since Ma was near I couldnt bring about Mayank.She had sounded upset too.My hyperactive mind suddenly filled with worry about my little sister.What could possibly be wrong?Could her boss be ...
DRING!The loud ring startled me.I closed the fridge door and wiped my hands in the apron.I had reached the door when I saw Ma had beat me to it.She opened the door with a very assured
"Yes?"which turned into a O of astonishment.I peeked in from behind the door and gasped.Mayank was standing in the doorway,dressed in a striped white shirt,looking somewhere between nervous and sheepish.That was all I could manage to see as my treachorous heart had started racing.I closed my eyes resting my head in the wall.
Why was he here?Maybe Diya had told him about me...told him that I was compulsive.I curled my hands into fists fighting the near hysteria threathening me.No!I couldnt face his pity.
The overflow of emotions was very near to inducing a anxiety attack when Mom started speaking and I noticed a problem that didnt occur to me before.
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Standing at Nupur's step was probably one of the hardest thing Mayank had ever done.Saying sorry was not his forte and saying sorry in the filmy way was a definately not.All in all he felt like he was standing examination hall of advanced level Greek when he hadnt even read Greek in his highschool.
Quickly he ran over Diya's to-dos.
"This are all the movies you need to see.It has all SRK movies and do something borrow a line or two from DDLJ.Its Nupur's favourite."
He had done as she had instructedWatched painstrikingly every damn movie paying specific attention to oily-doily dialogues.But try as hard he can he couldnt imagine saying them.
bare bare desho mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hain.
oh no!!he would look like a prat.
how about....
tumhare ankhon mein ansho ane se pehle mein apni jaan de doonga..
who says these stuff?
Hence he stood tongue-tied and unsure as a lady opened the door.There was a minute of silence in she looked at him from head to toe and then gasped,her mouth in a perfect O.
"OH MY GOD!YOU ARE...you are..you are..."
Mayank was jolted from his preoccupation.He couldnt imagine what could cause the lady to exclaim the way she was.Had he forgotten to wear his trousers or something.?He looked down to check he was properly clad as the lady kept on gushing.
"You are ...you are,arent you?"
"What?"he asked.
Thankfully at the moment Nupur decided to intervene.
"Mayank...You are Mayank."she said,nodding at her mom.
Mayank smiled unconsciously as he looked at her.Dressed in a blue apron and her hair tied back in a stern ponytail,she looked adorable.
"Hi nupur."he said in a voice which seemed to belong to someone else.
She coloured barely nodding.
"My mother-Devika Bhushan."she said softly.
"Namaste aunty."he said stepping in.
"You are-you are-you are so tall.Last time I saw you reached my shoulders."
He smiled.
"I was only 16 then.You have a really nice house Aunty."he said eyeing Nupur who was steadfastly staring at her hands.
"Its nice isnt it?My younger daughter Gunjan is so very good with such householdly stuff.She is the one who decorated the entire house.She is brilliant too,always a topgrade student.You must have met her at the party.I always tell people that anyone who marries Gunjan would be so lucky."
Mayank nodded,his eyes following Nupur as she went slowly to the kitchen.Apparently Devika was following his gaze.
"The garden too has been done by Gunjan.How she manages to do all the stuff I dont know.She has recieved distinction in her undergrad you know.She has done her undergrad in finance."
Mayank smiled duly impressed.
"She sounds delightful.What has Nupur done her studies in?"he asked.
Devika blew her hand as though squatting a fly.
"Fashion designing.I know its not a very academic subject but Nupur was never even in Gunjan's league.She is just not as good as Gunjan."
Mayank stopped smiling.Somehow the statement hurt,much more than it should.He could feel how the statement must have hurt Nupur though he couldnt see her face and curiously that made him angry with Devika.Not quite understanding the reason he said roughly.
"Fashion designing can be tough too.Academic achievement isnt the only means of measuring brilliance.If so we wont exactly call Rabindranath Tagore brilliant would we?"
NuPUR turned around to look at him.Devika opened her mouth and then closed it.Mayank smiled slowly at her.
"It is a nice day.I think I would like to see the garden Gunjan so lovingly did.Maybe you can come with me Nupur.Can she come aunty?"
"Of-ofcourse she can."
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The anger was still there when Nupur and he reached the garden and he had started to question why it bothered him so much that he had even forgotten his purpose of coming to see her.
He stared at the neatly cut bushes before spatting out.
"Does she always act that way?"
Nupur seemed taken aback by the question.
"What way?"
"Like you are a supporting cast material.Its Gunjan this or Gunjan that.She seemed to have forgotten that you are also her daughter."he said without thinking.
A variety of emotions passed through her face before she answered.
"Its nothing like that.Gunjan is perfect so saying she is perfect is only fair and you have no right whatsoever to question it."
Mayank took a deep breath and said.
"I know I have no right but .."
"Why are you here mayank?"Nupur said.
That was a million dollar question!

fantasic part...........
simply love it..........
glad mayank spoke against nupur's mom...........
simply love each and every second.........

absolutely....absolutely fabulous... beautifully written !!!!👏
Lovely update

Originally posted by: Neha_S

Thank you so much!!!I love reading the comments...here is the continuation of the last part!!

"What do you want Mayank?"she repeated slowly

Mayank stood there feeling incredibly nervous.Unfortunately his anger hadnt faded and his nerves were still knotted.It wasnt the best time to come up with rehearsed cheesy lines.

"I know you are hurt..."he began
She looked up and then down.

""I have hurt you ..badly!It was unintentional.I dont even know what I did wrong..."he trailed off.Nupur was resolutely staring at the ground not moving at all.

Clearly his apology wasnt working.

Damn!Diya was right!He would have to do this the filmy way!!

What was the line again?
baare baare desho mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hain.

But could he really say it?Maybe he could modify it a little,make it a little less cheesy.

"This is a small issue..."he started trailing off when Nupur shot him a glance -hardened glare actually.

He took a deep breath and started again.
"'India is a huge country...""
She looked up,her brow clouding.
"It is very huge.I mean from Kashmir to Kanya kumari it stretches a long distance and even ...""
What was he saying??

Frustrated he ran his hand through his hair.
"What am I saying?""

Nupur said softly:
""You are talking about the geographical properties on India."

""NO!!"he said loudly.

""Huh?""

""I mean I am talking about that but I dont want to say that.""

Nupur inquired politely

""What do you want to say?""

Mayank grimaced.
""How do you say baare baare desho mein aisi choto baatein hoti rehti hai in a slightly different manner.?""

She smiled and then she laughed.The sound made his heart race.Radiant and happy-Nupur,his Nupur.
The thought confused him but it faded into inconsquential when she spoke again.
""You dont have to say that actually.You dont have to say anything.""

""I do."he protested.""I have hurt you unintentionally but the deed was done.I dont know what I said wrong.Maybe I shouldnt have asked you out.I know its too early for that.""

"No!No its not that.That didnt upset me at all."she said trying to pacify him.
She suceeded and raised his hopes too.

"You dont mind if I ask you out.??""The question was casual and the smile in his face increased as colour rushed to her face.
"I-I..."She stammered.

"Come have dinner with me tomorrow .""he said

She shook her head,her eyes downcast.

He sighed.
"Nupur if you dont come I will think you are still angry.Are you angry with me?""

She looked up.There was no trace of anger there.She shook her head again.

"Then we are going on a date tomorrow."he announced with finality.

This time she turned maroon.To his consternation his cheeks seemed slightly hot too.

""I meant dinner..""

She nodded once smiling slightly,her eyes still downcast.Her blushes were somehow controlling his pulse rate.They accelerated with her growing colour.
that wasnt a good sign!!

one of your best updates yaar.........
can't wait for mayur date...........