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Posted: 16 years ago
longing more for ur upd...plz jaldi update karo yaar....
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Posted: 16 years ago
plz update.........i m too waiting for it...........i just read ur parts today..........they r awesome........do update and send me a pm ragrding them.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
If it was meant to be

Part 12
Samrat's POV!

The moment took on a dreamlike quality.I stared at the slightly flushed face of Gunjan-I mean Nupur-I mean the girl who had haunted me all these days and I couldnt believe I was holding her.
Her eyes were downcast and she seemed to be going through a turmoil.Her fists were clenched and her jaw set.

"We should go."she said in a strong soft voice.I lost myself in her voice.It was so beautiful!Why hadnt I noticed it before?What hadnt I seen Cinderella's face in Gunjan ever before?
She firmly loosened herself from my grip and stepped away.
I stared at her face for the first time seeing beyond the features.She was angry.

I cursed myself.I could be so careless!I had her wrapped in my arms.A simple girl like her wouldnt like it.Was that she hadnt said she was Gunjan.?

"Why didnt you tell me?"I demanded.

She sighed.
"This is not the moment to discuss this.We have work to do."

"To hell with work.This is way more important than work."I insisted.

Something shifted in her face.
"We will talk about this later."She said moving away.I clutched her wrist.

"Nupur..."

She pulled away sharply.
"My name is Gunjan.Why cant you remember that?"

"Because you lied-lied to me about your name.Why did you do that?Why did you run away from me?"

"Samrat please-I -I dont want it this way."she said her voice suddenly vulnerable.

I felt my heart clench.It was unfamiliar.Why was heart reacting to every change in her face,her tone?Was this merely attraction?

"You dont want what?Gunjan tell me."I said my voice doing nothing to hide my deperation to help remove the pain in her voice.

She took a deep breath.
"The only reason I lied was that I-I dont want you to feel the way you do about me.Samrat this job is very important to me and I dont want any complications about it.I have my family to think about.I -am asking-no-requesting you not to do this to me.Please..."she said unshed tears glinting in her eyes.

Job...work!She might as well have been speaking Greek for all I could understand.How was her job related to us.?

"I dont understand."

"Samrat-my life isnt like yours.I have responsibilities..."she began.

I almost smiled.
"Relationships doesnt mean that you cant have responsibilities."I began then stopped.She had blanched at the word relationship.

"No..no please No.Samrat I dont want to be another of your conquests."she said shaking her head.
I moved towards her.She backed away.
"Gunjan you have no idea how I feel for you..how much I care..."

She raised her hand.
"It doesnt matter."

I stopped in my tracks.
"Doesnt?"

"Not to me.I dont think of you as you think of me.I dont think I ever will.'she said.

Something was closing in on me.I had seen rejection before but this was hurting worse than ever.Maybe because I never cared for someone so much before.I clenched my fists.

"Samrat you can never be the person I love.We are way too different.I am begging you please dont make this difficult."

I stood staring at her not knowing what to say and something sharp splintered within my heart!
A very big sorry to my readers for being so very late!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey awesome part
just simply loved it
plzzzzzz update soon
i was waiting for ythis part like from ages.
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks zoya
Diya's POV

I stormed into Mayank's so-called office.Life was going so horrible!Sammy hadnt called me for weeks,the partyfood caterers were still in operation.I had developed a zit in my right cheek and now stupid Mr.Bose had slammed the door in my face.Grinding my teeth I slammed open Mayank's door.

My brother was sitting with his head on his hands.Maybe he had a headache.I was too angry to get worried.

"MAYANK...What the hell were you doing?That stupid Bose is well- stupid.He says ....that he wont take my case,Can you believe that?"I stopped shouting when I realised he wasnt listening.

"Mayank-mayank sharma...mayank-.."I went to stand infront of him and he looked up.
"What happened?"he asked.His tone was sad,worried.Instantly I knelt down beside him,forgetting my woes completely.

"Mayank ..whats wrong?"I asked slowly.

He stared at me then sighed.

"I cant talk D'doll."

TALK!hE COULDNT TALK!I was feeling frantic.
"Maybe I should call the doctor."i said frantically.

He sighed shaking his head and I felt better.It was an exasperated sound ,one that I was familiar with.

"Diya..I think..I think I acted too impulsively."

Impulsive and Mayank!!Somehow I could place both the words in the same sentence.

"What are you talking about.?"I inquired.

He seemed to be struggling within himself when he said.
"Nupur.."

My eyebrows raised and I stepped forward almost giggling.What had my brother impulsively do to my best friend.?I couldnt wait to find out.

"What did you?"

His eyes narrowed.
"Why are you so excited?"

"Excited?I am worried."I said trying to arrange my mouth in a frown.

He ran his hand through his hair.
"What ever !I cant tell you what I did."

Possibilities ran through my head,getting more colourful as they went.

"MAYANK-DID-DID YOU KISS HER OR SOMETHING?"I said more dramatic than usual.

I would have loved to have a camera on me.Mayank's face was worth being captured.He looked like he had been hit very strongly on the head.
"No-no/...How can you even..?"
"You seem so pensive..."I provided.
"I asked her out and she got upset.I think she was crying."

My smile faltered.Poor Nupur!This must have meant a lot to her.

"Why was she crying?What did I do wrong?"Mayank asked me.

I almost told him about Nupur's OCD.Almost!But something stopped me.Maybe she should be the one telling him.

"I dont know."I said uneasily."But there are ways you can make her feel better."

"There are?'he asked.
"You want to say sorry dont you.?"I asked.

He nodded.
"Do some research then."I suggested.

'Research?"He looked dumbfounded.

I shrugged and said.
"Bollywood movies Mayank.Only way to Nupur's forgiveness."

He looked disgusted.I smiled then stopped.

"Mayank Sujoy bose is...."

"Brilliant.I know."he said

"I was actually thinking of a word like prat."

Mayank sighed.
"Diya he is one of the best lawyers in the city."

"Who cares?"


"Fine!I will find another lawyer."he said shaking his head.

"No!"I said planting my hands on my hips."He dared to say no to me and now he has to say yes.I dont know how Mayank-I want you to make sure Sujoy takes my case."

Mayank stared at me.I smiled for is benefit.
Nobody slams the door in my face Sujoy Bose and gets away!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome! Story brewing between Sujay and Dia? I hope so. I think it'll be interesting, and I hope Nupur is the one to point it out.

Cannot wait for more!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing Neha, am so so glad u updated...I loved both the parts..so amazingly written.. I still cant get over than Mayank nupur part in the garden thou.... 😍
pls update more often!!

Cheers!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey great update
loved it
plzzzz this time continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
great updates..
Why didnt dia tell mayank abt nupurs condition?

Ahhh.. Filmy sorry from mayank cant wait...

Missed nupur though.


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Posted: 16 years ago
grt updates.........they r mind blowing and stupendous........i love u for them......thanks for writing them.......thank u sooooooooo much........these r the nicest i have ever read........but i love mayank and nupur more so do update abt them.........u see i m a mayur fan...........but thanks for the update......it was the best.... 👏 a big hug for u for this.......🤗

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