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GoldenPanda.

@GoldenPanda.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#1051

I know I sort of gave you a bit of criticism last time I commented here but now I just want to say that I take that back! There is NO better way you could have ended this FF! It was perfect! We got a closure to the whole mother thing (which btw she totally got what she deserved) and we also got a sneak peak of their after life and second child and all that which was GREAT!

This can't be the last time you write something, I won't let you! You're too good to stop! ;P

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#1052

Awesome story.I loved it.
AR suffered a lot but finally they are together.Ahana is sooooooooooooooo cute.
I loved the concept and the story line a lot.
U write beautifully indeed.

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@Rapunzzel

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1053

gr8 ff loved reading .....

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Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1054

Okkkaayy, temme something, is the story eve a LITLLE bit SAD ??

Cause i'm going to start reading..temme soon Steffzziiee :D

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1055

Originally posted by: vaish04
Okkkaayy, temme something, is the story eve a LITLLE bit SAD ??

Cause i'm going to start reading..temme soon Steffzziiee :D

You've read part of it Vaish, I saw the likes! 😆 ah, you'll get a happy ending, enjoy reading 😳

Originally posted by: GoldenPanda.
I know I sort of gave you a bit of criticism last time I commented here but now I just want to say that I take that back! There is NO better way you could have ended this FF! It was perfect! We got a closure to the whole mother thing (which btw she totally got what she deserved) and we also got a sneak peak of their after life and second child and all that which was GREAT!

This can't be the last time you write something, I won't let you! You're too good to stop! ;P

All criticism is welcome like I always say, thank you so much for taking time for this one! 🤗

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1056

I love ya Steffz! This is such a beautiful beautiful ending! I can't even begin to explain how beautiful it is and how much fun i had reading this. Thank ya for sharing your wonderful talent hehe and I look forward to your next new idea ;) I want to say more, but I know I will only just ruin the moment😆

Thankya for the pm

Aliya (yes my name is Aliya but you weren't wrong in thinking it was my previous name because my name changed only quite recently)

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Sangya Shrestha (Prefer to go by Soniya or Soni)

@kajenlover4ever

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1057

hey steff :)

OMG that was a greattttttt ending.. :) i wish this fic could go on a little longer since it was sooooo good .. but this ending was just perfect.. :) love yaa <3 :)

soni <3

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Misha Rai

@DMG4EVER

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1058

Steffz!!!!!!!!!!!! Im so sorry for not commenting all these days. Its just ive got married tho problem mein phas geya. couldnt get any time out for myself. So heres Misha apologizing.

Ok, loved all the parts-beginning to end. It provoked me to continue reading. Marvelous. And the epilogue just SMASHED it.

Love you loads

Misha