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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

awesome yaar......... continue soon.....

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do look at my mayur ff.......

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1265202

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nupurvj23

@nupurvj23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

awesome yaar
pls add me to the pm list as well!
thnks!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

I likey the first part, Radzi.

I give you ashirwaad, you're an amazing writer! I'm so jealous (the good kind of way, me not gonna be evil)

And the title 'Kyunki Maa Ka Laadla Bigad Gaya' made me laugh for some odd reason. Great start. I'm gonna read it little by little until i catch up! :)

Edited by reya. - 15 years ago

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Rinki

@~Rinki~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

I READ IT!!

*claps*

Be proud.

Now ill say this only, i loved it all. The characters are all portrayed so perfectly, i can just picture this all happening. And why do i have a bad feeling abt Nups stating "im dating Mayank" *shakes head*

Its that Sheena witch aint it? *huffs* what i wud do to her...*narrows eyes and mutters to self*

I love Benji. He's the best. And Diya is so cute.

Nupur and Gunjun's relationship is one to envy.

Mayu and his mommy....too cute for words, really.

And udayyyy! He hasnt done much, *ahem* but still cool. 😆

Sammyyyy.....*grins* what can i say abt him? Love him brushing off the shee-witch. :P

Now gimme more. =P

Luv ya,

-Rinks

Time to sleeep! My shoulders hurt. *siiigh* Massage anyone? 🤔

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Radz....! *hugs*
I am so sorry abt this horribly late reply, esp after having pestered you for a quick update. So sweet of you to think of such an interesting return gift. This was a gift indeed, a fabulous start to a Sat I have off after long. :D

"Main Mayank Sharma ki girlfriend hoon obviosuly!" God. Awesomeness. I cant get over that part. I can so picture Nupur giggling while declaring that, all to an amazed Benji. And the figure who overheard her. Oops. Ooh. Cant wait till the revelation.

I also liked that little discussion abt untold feelings - Sam, Gunjan and Benji, Dia. It so goes wid ur siggy line - if its meant to be, we'll be together some day. I am in a romantic mood this morning. LOL
You have a thing for getting things across in a very subtle manner.

Update soon na Radz. Dont give me that look. Now, that's a sweetheart. *hugs* Take care!

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

Ok I had to read it again since I reserved this post like last year! Literally I did, Happy New Year btw!! 😛 😆

BUT OMGGGGGG!!! SO EXCITEDDD!! :D

OK PLEASEEE don't take years to update this time!! This part ended MUCH too excitingly! YAYYY Mayank and Nupur meeting scene is comin' soon. 🥳

Ok I gotta tell you, I love how thoroughly you've written this. I mean you've taken care of everything! First employing Gunjan in Mayank's office so that she would leave a file and then run off. SO that's why she went off to Shimla. Very convenient. 👏 When I read that part earlier I didn't think there was a purpose to it, but BOY was I wrong!! 😆 And then Mayank needing that file urgently so having to contact Nupur the sister of his employee!! PERFECT scenario yaar!! I was wondering how you were going to carry out their ghajni type situation but I love how you've written this. 👏

And YAYYY Nupur's boss heard her! And your whole scene makes sense too..I mean I love how you showed Benjy and Nupur kidding around with the phone and all and Nupur being Nupur of course says dramatically that she's Mayank's girlfriend. 😆 LOL And the boss hears it just in time! Yayyyy!!

And so now I'm guessing the boss will tell everyone about this and everyone will be super nice to Nupur now. lol And then Mayank finds out and...........AHHHH their meeting where Nupur goes on and on about how they met....well I'm just guessing anyways, you always manage to surprise us so let's see what happens. I wonder if you're going to have the whole Mayank hiding his identity until he's sure Nupur loves him angle in your story.

GAHHHH I'm SOOO excited to read on!! I'm so glad you're writing this story and basing it on Ghajni!! I love you for writting this, and that too SO WELL!! 🤗🤗

And now get updating missy!! I shall pray ki the next update comes before next year. 😳

😛

P.s. I missed you!!! 🤗

Edited by cute2stay - 15 years ago