My Journey-MayUr FF Part-16 pg-116, 5/dec

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#821

OMG! Ruchiiiiiiiii..........did the story just end? You give such shocks I swear!!😲

When i started to read FF's...this was the first story I read...also broken ends..wow. That was an epitome of simplicity and beauty..gosh! Im so speechless. Im happy with the end..but im too shocked to say anything!!😭

His helping in her hair pins..😆 their kiss in the balcony..and finally their completeness..gosh! such purity..and then a daughter!😳awwww!!

Loveee youuuuuu Ruchiiiii for such an AMAZING story 🤗

keep writing more you amazing writer!!😃

-Mansi

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ardhana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#822

di wat an wonderful ending

love this ff

its beautiful

ps:thanks for the pm

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#823

lovely part.

awesome ending

it was really a true journey of life.

thanks for the pm.

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Senny

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Posted: 14 years ago

#824

Hey Ruchi,

When we spoke today, I kind of felt that you might as well wrap up the story and I am so glad that you pulled off another wonderful story for all of us to enjoy, love, laugh and cry with. The two most wonderful parts of the update were firstly when you said that there was always someone there to wipe off Nupur's tears, the way you blend it with the moment, so quickly yet so perfectly was just amazing and secondly when MN thanked each other together at the same time, i would have loudly said jinx and laughed hehe.

Its usually the father and family members thanking the mother, but here it was written soo beautifully with the husband and wife thanking each other and a couple of words carrying so much love and warmth.

A wonderful story by a wonderful writer. Keep it up Ruchi and God bless you always :)

Edited by Senny - 14 years ago

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Nikki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#825

This is definitely one of my favorite ffs, and it's so upsetting to see it end but I loved every part of this ff. Ruchi, you wrote this ff with such grace that a person would be awe-struck. You truly made this ff more than one would expect. I hope you continue to write such amazing stories, such as this one.