My Journey-MayUr FF Part-16 pg-116, 5/dec - Page 82

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Posted: 14 years ago
Please Update this soon ! It sems years have passed ! 😆Pls Update it, If u r busy , try to give short update !!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank You Guys...i am really sorry for being so late in updating this FF...but next weekend ..for sure !!!

Love you guys..

Thanx a tonn

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Posted: 14 years ago

Ah! U nt updating! Not fair.
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Hi dear I like your FF so much Plz whenever u update it Plz Pm me.dont forget dear I am waiting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ruchi! When are u updating???
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey plz update this ff soon
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update was amazing!!!! please pm me when u update and keep up th good work!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART-15 PAGE-109
PART-16
I entered my room to find it totally haphazard , well not only my room but entire house was upside down after Samrat's wedding...a chuckle erupted inside when i thought about my lil brother's face. He was actually subjected to torture by my cousins who didnt allow him to enter his own room while he kept whinning for help from Nupur. ..
''Nupur'' the name which completed everyone's life ...Samrat's guide , mom's daughter and my lifeline. Wel thinking about Nupur was not new to me , it was quite often for me to drown in thoughts of most beautiful woman in my life . My eyes fell on pack of sarees which Nupur had almost selected after taking almost three hourns and now they were lying isolated ...must be cursing me , as i brought saree for her and she readily forgot the saree she brought. But i still remember her expressions , shocked followed by red cheeks and then feeling bad for her chosen saree..''nevermind , i'll wear it in Gunjan's wedding'' I giggled again ...but to God's grace it was not followed by angry glare.

I was about to clear up the mess when Nupur entered the room ...her face all excited , smiles all over and it over-shadowed the spread kohl and her messy hair bun
''Finally Samrat got an entry'' she chuckled and sat on couch..
''Poor soul !'' she glared at my comment
''Instead of helping him , you were adding fuel to fire.. He was pissed !'' I laughed off

She shook her head and went to dressing table ..
''Mayank you need to help me .'' she said after taking a look at her hair bun
''me and help ?'' i raised my eyebrow and stood at her back..''at your service madam''
''very funny ..please help me take out these pins off my hairs.. ''
one by one we both started taking off the pins..and trust me it was like ten packs of pins in her long hairs....whenevr i used to hurry with her hairs , i either recieved a smack on my hand or a shout . After 20minutes of patience ..her long burgandy hairs fell on shoulders.
''I am not going to hair-dresser from now on'' she said while digging her long fingers in hairs and massaging them .

After some another hour of chit-chat about the marriage , i went to fresh-n-up while Nupur preferred to take off his jewellery first and cleaning teh mess. I came back only to find her standing in her fav place- Balcony ..

I moved there ...and i held my breath. She was looking breath-takingly gorgeous.. Her hairs were left open covering her wheatish back while the dark burdany colored saree added beauty to already gorgeous woman . I stood next to her ...

''What happened ?'' i asked knowing something was cooking inside her mind
''hmm..nothing'' wel , this was something i was quite used to now
''Thanx Nupur'' she looked at me with questioning eyes
''you dont need to be shocked.. u changed my life to better. And Samrat , when both mom and me couldnt understand him , u came to support him and turned him to a gem''
''He was already a gem Mayank''
i let out a small laugh..
''Okk.. okk.''
''I love you mayank''
i looked at her surprised . We loved each other ..but it was not Nupur-types to confess it so openly
''i love you more than you '' i commented and she smiled
''I know...''
''You complete me Nupur ''
''I want to feel the completeness''
now she shocked me and i looked at her and she was still looking at moon without much change in her expressions

I placed my hands on her shouldera nd turned her aroud to face me ..and saw a lil tear trying to make out of her eyes
I rubbed it with my thumb before it could escape and she shuddered at my touch like always... I cupped her face gently and in response she closed her eyes. We kissed lightly and then soon it showed the passion
''I love you'' she whispered once we broke the kiss out of breath..
without a single thought and apprehension , i sweeped her off her feet and made her lie on the bed. Sitting next to her , she was staring at me ...just like an angel

I moved forward and placed a trailing wet kiss at her colar bone making her clutch my vest tightly....It was not long when we started enjoying the moment of love , joy of togetherness and passion of love ...and both souls inter-twined themselves making it into a beautiful heart ...

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''Mayankkk'' a loud shriek made him forget everything around ..he rushed to his room to find Nupur in pain and tears. He swiftly moved to her , followed by Samrat and Dia

''Bhaiya , its time'' Dia said and without wasting a minute Mayank took her in his arms ..while Samrat ran to his car

Mayank sat with Nupur at back-seat while Dia in passenger seat , while Samrat drove to hospital
''Nupur please calm..everything will be fine jaan ..'' Mayank kept chanting these lines while Nupur was holding onto him
''Its paining Mayank ..'' she fumbled
''Bhabhi just two minutes...''
Soon they reached hospital ..and Nupur was laid on stretcher to get her to labour room
''my kid wll be fine na ?'' Nupur asked as Mayank held her hand firmly
''everything will be perfect ...'' he said and bent to place a kiss on her cheeks as she was taking in .

Mayank sank in bench just praying for the two most important people to be fine ...Samrat and Dia was helping him to be fine . Soon Nupur's parents and Gunjan-Adhi joined them .


After an hour , loud cries were heard and tears flowed down Mayank's cheeks and Samrat hugged him tightly . Nurse soon came out with a bundle of joy and handed over to Mayank .
''Congratulations ! u are blessed with daughter'' Mayank gently took her in his arms .. his lil bundle of joy ! She was so small ..her lil hands , her closed eyes and thin lips..
Tears flooded in Mayank's eyes but a smile across his face
''My daughter''

Mayank moved to Nupur's ward to find her lying with her eyes closed and tiredness ol over her face..
''nupur..wake up sweetheart'' Mayank whispered in her ears and she opened her eyes lightly and found Mayank sitting next to her bed with their child in his hand
''Mera baccha..'' nupur squealed in joy
''Humari beti'' Mayank said while giving her their daughter while Nupur looked at Mayank with tears
Nupur looked at her and lightly kissed her forehead and tear flowed down her cheeks but a finger always there to wipe off her tears , wiped them off.

Both stared at their love for sometime
''Thank You'' both said at same time and smiled . Mayank leaned at placed a light kiss on Nupur's lips
The trio sat their surrounded by love and warmth .....looking for a New Journey to begin ..

Here is teh last part to My Journey ...
I want to thank you ol from the bottom of my heart ..the support and love you ol showed for me and this FF...i am speechless..
Thank You friends.. Thanks a tonn..
Will always owe you for making me feel that ''yes..i can write descent''..
This FF is closest to my heart and hope i did justice to it .
Will be thankful if you leave ur precious comments andhit the like tab !!
Till then ..C ya with update on BE ..and Take Good Care ..
Love
-Ruchi
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Posted: 14 years ago

whn i got ur pm ...i was jumping...bt i complete reading the update .i was 😭

it was perfect
lovely...whn one my favrtes
the love ...the purity ....esence of relationship...unconditional partner defining a husband....a devoted wife n bahu....everythng was my journey
it was truely defining relationshp how shuld b handled after marriage...
just loved ths update tooo...perfect it was
bless ya
fiza
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