My Journey-MayUr FF Part-16 pg-116, 5/dec - Page 45

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Posted: 15 years ago
when u r going to update
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heyyy frndz...i am really sorry for delaying d update but my semesterz are beginning from 14th of dec ...n itz not possible for me to updte then.....

As soon as the semesterz get over...i will defo try to update 😳

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ok ruchi am waiting with more patience for ur lonnnng upd....and all the best do well in ur sems....i will pray for u dear...
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i am gonna update this FF tomo....i am really sry guyzz.... hope i can do justice wid my nxt update,,.... sooo shorrrrrrrrrrrrrry guyzzz.....!
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Note : i am really sorry guyz for the delay...finally i updated. Its not that long , but this is wat i culd manage in the time i had ...
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PART-9

Recap- MayUr go for Dia-Rahul's engagement ceremony....
Mayank n Nupur were sitting together wid silent prevailin arund them evn wid loadz of buzztle arund in room...
Mayank was loookin at Nupur's peaceful expression as she was lookin at Rahul-Dia dancin to the song on Love.....so finally he decided to break the ice
''hmmm...i thnk ..sumone z sittin wid u nupur ''...mayank said wid a smirk
''umm..woh..'' nupur said tryin to justify when she saw teasin smile on mayank's face....n she decided to play along
''hmmm...yeah i can see sumone sittin besides me ''...she said smilin
''ohhh...great..i thought such handsome hunk like me went un-noticed'' mayank added...which unknowingly made nupur lower her eyes...
'' waise nupur...do u keep on gawkin at ppl when u cum to party ?'' as soon as mayank said this,...nupur's mouth was wide open n she slammed lightly on his shoulder
''wat do u mean ?''' nupur said narrowin her eyes
''i mean..cum'on ..like u were lookin at rahul-dia ..''
''shut-up mayank.....itz such a beautiful feelin to watch sumone so much in love wid somebody....''..as nupur said , a sparkle can be easily in her eyes.
''if i am not wrong , u love dancing..right ?'' mayank questioned
''nahin...woh..actually..not that much'' nupur replied at wich mayank smiled
''u are a bad liar''..mayank stated n nupur looked at him astonished
''there is nothing like that''
''really ???'' mayank questioned with raised eyebrows while nupur lowered her eyes as she found it difficult for her to answer with his intense gaze on her
Before mayank culd ask further , some of nupur's co-mates came n nupur took a sigh of relief , as she got busy with them yet stealin glances occansionally to mayank
Mayank nupur returned back home...the journey was not that silent as nupur told mayank abt Rahul-Dia n the way they fell in Love...Mayank was feelin something better as nupur was finally openin' up with him n maybe for sometime she forgot painfull memories of her past which was still unknown to him.
As soon they reached home , it started to pour down heavily
''thank god.'' mayank said out of impulse
He looked at nupur who gave him perplexed expression
''i meant , its good we reached home before rain started to pour..'' mayank explained , to which nupur slightly nodded her head.
They both went to there room .Nupur arranged the room which was messed up coz of mayank
''mayank cant u put ur watch on right spot'' nupur said as mayank was takin out his lower for him wardrobe
''what ?'' mayank looked at nupur who was fumin' in anger as well as keepin' everythng in place
''yes mayank...why dont u keep ur things on place ?''
''because i know u are there for me '' mayank answered with utmost innocence
Nupur opened her mouth to speack but she culdnt...his words echoed in her ears n blush crept up her neck
Mayank gave her the most appealin smile n went to change while nupur stood there like a statue
Mayank came after a while ...but he didnt find nupur in room...he searched in balcony but she was not even there...unknown fear crept in his mind..
he searched almost everywhere at home...he didnt wake up samrat n mom ..as it was almost midnight...while mayank was roaming to find nupur..he heard her laughter...n he instantly smiled n rushed to terrace
As he stood at the door of terrace ,..he froze , it was a moment to cherish..the time stood still for mayank as he saw nupur feelin' drops of rain on her creamy skin n invitin it with extended arms n eyes closed .
Mayank slowly went towards her...he was mesmerised by her beauty . Drops of rain ticklin down her face ...fallin for her eyelids n seepin in her from her soft lips. Her baby pink coloured night gown was hugging her body ...showing her femine curves perfectly
Nupur's POV

I was enjoyin the rain when i suddenly felt warm breath brushing my face . I opened my eyes to find mayank standing near me n looking at me without blinking his eyes.
I didnt know how to respond , my brain asked me to move away but my heart glued me to that very spot , making me drown in his hazel brown eyes , which showered love on me ...
''may..ank...yeh'' nupur stammered
''u love dancin' ..n that too dancin in rain '' mayank stated with the same intensity as his gaze
''but...'' before nupur could complete her sentence , mayank gripped her hand , n with other , he wrapped it around her waist n pulled her closer
Nupur looked at him shocked...
''can i have to opportuinity to dance with one of the most gorgeous lady on this earth'' mayank silently said making nupur to blush...she nodded her head
They both swayed to the music of rain water n there audible heart beats. Mayank unknowingly crassed her waist , which sent chills down her spine . Not even for a second , there gazes let each other ..they were conquering each other souls via eyes. Mayank slowly headed closer to him and brushed her face with his lips . Nupur closed her eyes , tring to seep in the moment .He kissed her passionately on her cheeks , making nupur clutch his shirt more tightly ... he moved n kissed on the side of her lips ...with his lips lingering more than usual ...with his hands crushing her body.
Suddenly nupur realised the situation n pulled apart
''yeh teekh nahin hai mayank'' she said breathing heavily
Mayank looked at her shocked...
''yeh teekh nahin hai'' nupur murmured to herself as she left from the terrace....making Mayank stand dumbfounded
Nupur went in her room n tears started flowing down her cheeks....n there mayank was still standing in the rain trying to make out things that happened
''kaise batayen kyun tujhko chahein , yaara batana payen
tu jaaane naa.....tu jaaane naa...''
hope u like it guyz... :)
Edited by ruchimayur - 15 years ago

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