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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: RM_lover

vrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ccccccccccccuttttueeeeeeeeeeeeee

grrrrrrrrrreaaaaaaaaat
awsem yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrr
thnks 4 opning new ff
was waiting 4 ths
thnks 4 pm me
pm me

Thanks 4 ur comments...those r really imp......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

wohoooooo new rm FF
nice part !
thanks for the PM
bt ek insaan hamesha mere saath tha jo aaj mere saath nahi hai...mera dost mera best friend Rahul.........oh where did rahul go???excited to read the next part!!

Thanks 4 ur lovely comments......Rahul will soon enter......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ibdt2004

hey nice storyline!

what happened to rahul?? hope he makes an entrance soon...

thanks😊

Thanks i am glad u liked it.....Rahul will enter in soon
Edited by Love_RM_MAYUR - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: reha_rm

Congo on new FF🥳

Lovely part and Thanks a ton for the PM...

Thanks 4 liking it ..i am glad u liked it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: i-love-dr.rahul

amazing storyline....thank u sooo muchhh for opening a new RM FF for us....loved the intro...👏..but where's rahul?..anyways..thank u soo much for the pm...please continue soon

RAhul will come in next part......Thanks 4 ur lovely commnts
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: imane568

Loved the INTRO...It's truly AMazing....
Keep me updated when you post the next part...
I am really looking forward to it...
And i hope Rahul is okay...

Thank u so much.....ur comments r really imp...Rahul is okay.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: _Monu_

SORRY EK BAAT TOH KEHNA BUL GAYYY MEIN

AND REMEMBER THIS:
Count your life by smiles, not tears.
Count your age by friends, not years.
4 UR NEW FF
KEEP IT UP!!
HOPE U LIKED IT!!
SEE YAAA
LOVE UUU

THANK U its really sweeeeet.....i really loved it...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: brainychild92

bohat hi acha shuruwat par rahul kahan gaya?? vaise dmg mein nahi ata.. aur ab fanfic mein bhi.........

continue soon!!!!

Thank u 4 ur lovely comments......RAhul aayega next part........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
yay yay yay yay yay

congrats on the new FF .... please continue soon .... and as always thanx for the PM .... keep it up!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PArt 2:

Mumbai Airport:

This is the last call 4 the passengers boarding flight to London........

M- HAiyoo RAbba..yeh toh meri flight ki annoucement hai......Muskaan..idiot....miss kar deti flight toh London kaise jaati.........
Mujhe na ji...flight se bahut daar lagta hai....Yeh dusri baar hai jo main plane me baith rahi hu...pehli baar tab tha jab main Punjab se Mumbai aayi thi internship ke liye par tab main akeli nahi thi Rahul jo saath tha......

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FLASHBACK:

RM get down to the Punjab airport.....

M- HAiiiiii..yeh toh airport hai...

R- Toh??? Tujhe kya laga...

M- Phittey mooh..hum plane shane se ja rahe hai kya???

R(laughs)- Shane se nahipar haan plane se jaa rahe hai....

M- Chup kar khote..faltu joke mat crack kar... ..par kyun train se jaate hai an RAhul....

R- Aree ajeeb ladki hai jab plane se jaane ka chance mila hai toh tu train se jaan chahti hai.....

M- Rahul..ab....aree...plane ka ticket bahut costly hota hai....

R- Kya????

M- Haan aur na...ab..plane se travel karna hani karak hota hai hum maar gaye toh???

R(laughs)- Tu sachi pagal hai.........

M- Kya???

R- Ab mujhe pata hai....tujhe daar lag rah hai kya???

M- Le..tujhe abhi pata chala....haan..hum train se chalte hai an...

R- NAhi..ab dekh hume Sanjevani bhi toh report karna hai ....look....hum plane se chalte hai..kuch nahi hoga....

RAhul takes her ahnd & both go inside the airport........

M- Rahul meri rashi me likha hai ki aaj ka din mere liye bhari hai....

R-What???

M_ HAan...aaj ke din kuch bhi ho sakta hai.....

R- AY rite......U & ur silly horoscope....

M- Oye...shut up...

RM inside the plane........

RAhul sits comfortably in his seat & takes a magazine to read....

Muskaan is looking around.........

M- Rahul..sunna...

R(smiles)- Hmm..bol....

M- kal na maine ek picture dekha usme na plane gir jaat hai aur sab log mar jate hai......

R- Are yaar kya karu main iss kudi ka......Muskaan aisa kuch nahi hoga....

M- Rahul par.......

R- Seat belt laga ..ok....

M- Haiyoo Rabba..matlab abhi take off????

R- Hmmmm....

M- NAhi.........

R- Aree MUskaan..yeh kya??(pointing to her face )''

M- Kya???

R- Tujhe raat ko neend nahi aati???

M- AATi hai kyun???

R- Dark circles Muskii....

M- Hai Rabaa..mujhe dark circles????

R- Haan...

M-Ab main kya karu???

R- Hum jab Mumbai jayenge toh cream le lenge ok???

M- KAunsi craem???

R- EK hai..Tv me dekhi thi...hum woh le lenge phir tu usse lagana OK???

M- Haan theek hai..phir dikhenge toh nahi na mere dark circles....

R- No..not at al.....

M- Changa.....

R- Muskaan..ek baat kahu???

M- Hmm....

R- Niche toh dekh...

Muskaan saw down..she could see plane was in air

M- Rahul...plane take off kar gaya???

R(smiles)- hmm.....

M- ISka matlab woh dark circles.......O Rahul...........(hugs him)Tu na bada aacha hai.....

R- Pata hai....

Both laugh.........

End of flashback.......


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Muskaan smiled & had a tear in her eyes.....while she was thinking of her flashback this plane had also been in air.........

Main bhi na bahut stupid hu....Kya karu?? Meri life ki bahut si cheeze Rahul se judi hai....bahut miss karti hu main usko........

Oye...Aap log kya sochne lage??? Rahul maara nahi ...zinda hai..bas kahan hai woh mujhe nahi pata......3 saal hue maine RAhul ko nahi dekha....

Pata nahi kahan hai??? Kaisa hai??? Acha hi hoga.....Best cardiac surgeon hai woh...award bhi mila hai usse....humari internship khatm hone ke baad Jab hum doctors baan gaye...tab Rahul ne case handle kia tha....Dr.Shubhankar jo Sanjeevani ke best Cardiac Surgeon hai woh Delhi gaye the aur Rahul akele ne woh case successfully handle kia tha...aur tab se bas uski kaamyabi ka safar shuru hua....Phir ek ke baad ek karke Rahul kamyabi ki sidi chadta gaya chadta gaya.....par woh succeess kabhi uski dimag me nahi gayi..hamesha downto earth tha jaise pehle tha....Hume humare dost me koi change nazar hi nahi aaya....Waise hi masti karta tha...mujhe irritae karta tha....

Usse Sanjeevani ke saare branches me se sabse best Cardiac surgeon hine ka award mila....

India ke best Cardiac surgeons me Dr.Rahul Garewal ka naam liya jaata tha aur woh bhi 2 saal ke andar......

Phir ek baar usse London jane ke chance mila..aur wahan jaane se pehle mera aur Rahul ka jhagda hua...haan galati meri thi maine khamakha uspe gussa nikaal...main usse kitna kuch keh diya ki RAhul itna narraz ho gaya mujhse ki usne ek baar bhi mujhe phone nahi kia.... London me specially usse India se bulaya tha ek surgery ke liye......Phir pata nahi kya hua...uske baad na Rahul ka koi phone aaya na koi mail...kuch pata nahi kya hua usse kahan hai...wapas bhi nahi aaya.....Hume laga ki wahan usne kiissi Hospital me join kar liya hoga.....Dollars me kamayega....Par jo aachank chala gaya....atleast ek baar toh aa sakta tha....Sanjeevani me phone nahi kia...bas apna registnation mail kar diya Dr.Shashank ko......Hume toh kissine bhi kuch nahi bataya...bas itna ki Rahul ne resign kar dia hai...thats it!!!!!!!!!!

Hope u like it....plzz comment...........

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