RM: Pyaar hai ya sazza...upd18/12pg48 LAST PART... - Page 16

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Posted: 16 years ago
Appu jaani! beautiful part! So she's in love with him but doesn't know it. Typical of Muskaan. And Rahul loves her but she doesn't know that either. Yeh Muski bhi naa. rofl!
Very nicely written jaan! Update soon and good luck with college!
komz
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Posted: 16 years ago
great part!!
thanks for the pm!!
continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey i just read part 10 yesterday!

dear thanks soooo much for this part! It was Awesome… finally we know what was the argument about… Poor muski her heart broke and poor rahul he's also broke because of a misunderstanding… shame! Btw I love Ammy's shayari. LOL aage bhul gaya!

Thanks for this part waiting for the next!

Luv ya

Nadz😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part 👍🏼...wating for more cute RM scene s❤️
Edited by sweetsugar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey i just read this part now and loved it... the flashback was so sad and sweet.. cant wait for more! sorry for late replies!

Luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
sorry 4 not repling dear
read the 3 parts that i missed
so..really nice
the flash backs were very cute...
loved them
dont worry updt when u want
good luck with college and GANPATI's preparations
see yaa
love uuu
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Posted: 16 years ago
Finally guys...i have a off 2day...i wasnt aware that our collge followed 5 days a week bt anyways...Thursday & Sunday we have holiday & so here is the next part....
Part 12:
Next morning:
Rahul woke up first...he saw around ....he was on the couch & had his hand in Muskaan's......He looked at her..she looked beautiful when she slept......She had a smile on her face........He slowly got up.....removed his hand 4rm Muskaan's picked her up in his arms & kept her on the bed so that she could sleep comfortably...............
After 3 hrs:
Muskaan woke up..saw around she was in her bed.....she smiled...Rahul always cared 4 her..if she would sleep that way on the couch her back was pain so Rahul as usual knew what is to be done......
She got up.....
M- Rahul??? KAhan hai??? Bathroom me hoga....
She knocked the door of the bathroomno response she pushed it a bit & it opened...
M- Rahul???
She searhed everywhere bt Rahul was no where...
M(panic)- Haiyoo Rabba..Rahul kahan hai tu???

She called the reception & asked him.....
Reception- Maam....early morning he went out.....must have gone jogging.....
M- Jogging??? Rahul??? Kabhi nahi...subhe subhe uthke bahar chala gaya mujhe bataya bhi nahi.....
Reception- Dont worry maam...he will come soon.....
M- Hmm.....
Cuts the phone.....
She gets freshen up & ready to leave as RM ahd a flight to board to go to Goa......
Its 2 hrs later still Rahul is not back....
M- Kahin usse kuch ho nahi gaya?? Nai...mujhe kya karna chahiy..haiii Rabba main ki kara??? Police ko bolu??? NAhi...mujhe toh kuch bhi nahi pata.....Nikki ko phone karti hu....nahi...woh kya sochegi??? Main Armaan ko puchu?? Par woh Indiase kya karega ?? haii Rabba...Rahul..........(almost in tears)
Muskaan had no idea of what is she supposed to do.....
M- Yahan paraye desh me mujhe kuch pata nahi hai...Rahul tu kahan hai yaar?? Mian..mujhe abhut daaar lag raha hai.....
Someone knocks the door.....
Muskaan opens it to find Rahul standing....
M- RAhul??? Kahan chale gaye the tum..pata hai main kinni daar gayi thi.
R- Muskaan main....woh....
M(hugss him)- Thank God tu theek hai..pata hai mere dil me kaise kasie khayal aarhe the...main...agar tujhe kuch ho jata toh main kya karti Rahul...stupid idiot....
R(surprised)- Muskii???
M(realsing whta she just said & why???)- Tu baahr kyun khada hai?? Andar aaja....
R- Muskii makn...
M- Kahan gaya tha???
R- Mian woh...wahan....
M- Kahan ???
R- Mree ghar....aur...
M- AUr???
R- Muskaa.....
M- & u took drugs......hai na???
Rahul looked at Muskaan & looked down his head down.....
M- Rahul???
R- Muskaan tu jaaa.....mujhse nahi hoga...maine 2 din bahut koshish ki...bt main drugs nahi chod paunga ...
M- Aisa tu kyun sochta hai Rahul?? Hum Goa jayenge...rehab me...woh tujhe sab samjha denge aur sab sahi kar denge.....
R- Main nahi kar apunga...plzzz....
M- Nhai Rhaul tu kar sakta hai...mujhpe bhasosa rakh...tune hamesha mera saath diya hai...aaj bhi dede...Yaad hai Rahul jab maine gharpe sabse kaha ki mujhe doctor banna hai kissine mujhope bharosa nahi kia..sabmne kaha tu nahi kar payegi...bt sirf tu tha jisne mera saath diya....Tuen mere bharose pe bharosa kia aaj ek baar phir mere bharose pe bharosa kar de Rahul......
R- Nahi Muskii aisa kuch nahi hoga...tu apna time waste kar rahi hai...
M- MAin apna time waste kar rahi hu??? MAin??
R- haan Muskii....kyunki ab yehi meri life hai tu ja aur apni zindagi jee jo Mumbai me tera intezaar kar rahi hai...
M- Main chali jao??? Tere bina?? Aur woh bhi uss zinadagi me jo mujhe teri wajahse milli hai??? Rahul agartu na hota main kabhi Mumabi nahi aapati....tune meri har baar help ki hai,...zindagi ki har mod pe tu mere aath tha..jab bhi mujhe teri jarurat thi tu hamesh tah mere liye aur jab mere best friend ko meri jarurat hai tu kehta hai ki main chali jao???Nahi..main nahi jaungi...Rahul...tu mere liye bahut important hai.....Main tujhe chod ke nahi jaungi.....
R(tears)- Muskii main......
M- Rahul.... plzz ek baar sirf ek baar tu mere saath Goa chal..hum sath hai toh sab sahi kar denge...humari team hamesha se jeeti aayi hai..iss baar bhi hum jeetenge....mujhpe thodasa bharosa rakh.....
R- Tujpe toh rabse bhi jyada bharosa hai bt khud pe nahi hai..agar main nahi kar paya toh???
M- Mujhe apne best friend pe pura bharosa hai....dekhna bahut jald drugs ka naam teri life se gayab ho jayega..sachi!!!!
R- Muskii......thanks yaarr...aaj 3 saalon me pehli baar kisine mujhse kaha ki usse mujhpe bharosa hai...thanks a lot.....
M- Tujhe kabse mujhe thanks kehne ki jarurat hai???
R- EK baat puchu??
M- Hmm....
R- Can I hug u???
M- Rahul.........
Muskii hugged him...Rahul felt very nice...confident that he could do it...he will do it 4 Muskaan who trusted him...he will get rid of drugs ...yess he willl......

After some time:
RM cheked out of the hotel.......
They caem at tyhe London airport.....
They were checking in...
R- Muskaan..aaj tujhe daar nahi lag raha ???
M(smiled)- Nahi...ab main abchi thodi na hu
R- Really??
M- Haan..
RM inside the plane...
M- Rahul..kuch bol na....
R(smiles)- Kyun???
M- Mujhe daaar lag raha hai..ab flight take off karegi na???
R(laughs)- Abhi toh keh rahi thi ki amin bachi nahi hu....
M- Woh toh aise hi...Rahul hum mar toh nahi jayenge...
R- HEy Bhagwan.,....abhi tak yehi teri gaddi ataki hai???
M- Aur nahi toh kay???
R- Seatbaelt band le.....aur relax kar....
M- Abhi take off???
R- Haan...
Muskii quickly holds Rahul hand......He looks at her surprised.....
M- NAhi...main mar gayi toh??? RAhul tu hai na???
R- Muskii main hamesha thodi na tere saath rehnewala hu ....
M(concerned)- KYun?? Tu kyun naho hoga mre saath??
R- Muskii...hum dost hai bt kabhi tere life me koi aisa bhi toh aayega jo bahut spl ho toh jab woh aayega toh meri exit ho jayegi na??
M- Nahi....teri exit mere life se kabhi nahi hosakti...
R- Acha kyun???
M- Main itne jaldi tera picha nahi chodungi...get it.....
R(laughs)- Ya rite!!!!

After 2 hrs.

..RAhul is reading a mgazine.....Muskii is sleeping...slowly her head falls on Rahuls' shoulder...her hand is still in Rahul's hand.....Rahul looks at her smiles....
BAckground music:
Kabhi an sukun aaya...
kabhi na karrar aaya...
jab se hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya...........
pyaar aaya....
An airhostess is passing by looks at RM....she comes near Rahul
Ah- U both make alovely couple......
R(surprised)- Huh???
Ah- Newly married???
R- Umm..actuaaly...
Ah- Anyways ...congarts.....
Airhostess goes away...Rahul simply smiles.......
Hope u like it.......Plzz comment.....
Edited by Love_RM_MAYUR - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG this was soooooooooooooo beautifully written! It was longer than usual thank god! and so lovely! She trusts him! So much subtle passion. MY god you made my day. Haiye mereya rabba, ainna sona part
love u
komz di
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Posted: 16 years ago

Amazing part!!!

Thanks for the PM.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome Part!!!

The last part.. where the air hostess complemented them... i read it like 10 times!!!

Big smile on my face now! 😃

Thank you for Update! and Thank You for Pm!

Continue as soon as u can!

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