Dhoka - A story;new link-pg147;pts 1-22 pg-148&149

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himalayanyeti

@himalayanyeti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Hey there, I m a new reader of this ff...n i must say it is very interesting...!!!👏
I m amazed at the way the plot is progressing n U hv a very beautiful style of writing...!!!👏
Put up the next part soon...!!!

Welcome to my story and thank you for your encouragement 😊

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

wowww...nice part.... its getting more interesting..
so huda n alekh r working for Raj ..cool..... !!!
Dr. mishra abb naina ko aur na fasa de... hope Raj aa jaaye waha pe... 😒
waiting for the next part.... 😛

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sania_58

@sania_58

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

awsome

too good yaar

brilliant update

waiting for the next update

plz continue soon

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

hey nice update dear!

must say suspense is taking it's toll!

i hope yeh mishra naina ko phasa naa de and Raj yaa koi bhi ho par usse bacha le!

yaar in ur fic naina is soooo innocent that usske saath ab kuch bura ho to achcha nahi lagega!

And you....Update JAL JALDI kiya karo yaar.....yeh suspense raato ki neend le jata hai😉

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: manatated
hey nice update dear!
must say suspense is taking it's toll!

i hope yeh mishra naina ko phasa naa de and Raj yaa koi bhi ho par usse bacha le!

yaar in ur fic naina is soooo innocent that usske saath ab kuch bura ho to achcha nahi lagega!

And you....Update JAL JALDI kiya karo yaar.....yeh suspense raato ki neend le jata hai😉

Bilkul sahi kaha. Aisa na ho ki suspense ka level badhta hi jaye.

Plz jaldi update kiya karo.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Hey i just read the first part.👏 That was brilliant and i loved the way u expressed about KMA and the importance of it 😊. Naina is so sober and sweet against her nature.😆

Par what happened suddnely , ki Naina ko arrest karna pada?😲 Us ne to kuch nahi kiya hai.

continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

that was wonderful

let see what happen next

plz continue soon

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Nice part. U wer ryt I got all my ans. But abhi iss situation se zyada mujhe Raj ki emotionless behaviour se bura lag raha hai. I'm missing his smile. I'm really eager to knw wat has happened to him. Lekin jo bhi ho I luv this character of his. When he said no innocent shud be punished-that was really nice of him n when he said-Good job cadets, I was feeling so happy dat he definitely knws to appreciate others.

Aalekh n Hudawer really nice. Specially Aalekh coz he understood Naina was not at fault. But that Dr. Mishra is interrogating Naina which is no gud thing. Now w8ing 4 the next part to cum up soon.

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himalayanyeti

@himalayanyeti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sweet_shona
wowww...nice part.... its getting more interesting..
so huda n alekh r working for Raj ..cool..... !!!
Dr. mishra abb naina ko aur na fasa de... hope Raj aa jaaye waha pe... 😒
waiting for the next part.... 😛

Thanks.. Yes, Huda and Alekh work for Raj, but because of their "brilliant" plan, Naina is now in a fix.. Now its Raj's duty to set everything right.. The question is - will he be on time?