MayUr FF - You and I . . . (Last Part - Pg. 88)

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Short update....but that's ok...will wait for a longer one!

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hey really a fantastic ff...its sad that u r gonna end it really soon plz dnt n thanks for pm

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey guys!! 😊 Since, I dun hav any exam tomorrow, am free! So, am writing the last part now only. Else, I would have completed it in 2 short updates.This FF was the first FF I wrote and the response was overwhelming. Thansk a ton guys. Lov ya all. 😊

❤️ Last Part ❤️

The Pandita started perforing the rituals. And u know how long these Indian weddings are!! After 4-5 hours, it came to an end. Mayank and Nupur were now married. 😳 They both were on cloud nine. Everybody else was also very very happy for em. 😊

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After that, the bride and groom's families and some close relatives gathered together for the dinner. 😊 Mayank and Nupur had to share one plate. And were lovingly feeding each other. Nupur was a bit more busy in blushing. 😳😆

S - AHEM AHEM!! 😆😉 Hum bhi yahin hain, Nupur, please pass that bowl on please. 😆

Nupur was badly blushing. 😳 She passed it on.

G - Samrat, stop teasing her. Did she ever tease us?? 😡

S - Yes, she did, and still does! Ab meri baari hai. 😆

T - Waise, apne bhai sahab bhi kuch kam nahi hain. Dekho, phir sada sa chehra ban k baith gaye hain. Jaise, isse hum khane wale hain! 😆

M - Well Tam, it's better u ask RV about all this. Nahi?? 😆

Now, it was Tamanna who started blushing. 😳 Just then, a kid shouted, "Ye sab aunties ka sharamana khatam hua toh kya hum khana kha sakte hain??" 😕

Everyone started laughing!! 😆😆

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It was time to bid farewell to the bride. 😭 Nupur was terribly crying, so was Gunjan. Though, Sanaya was a Lil baby . . . even she didn't want to part ways from her Masi. 😭 Nupur's parents, especially her mother were sad but happy at the same time, as they like Mayank a lot. 😭😊

Nupur's Dad - (ND)

NM - Mayank, take care of her! She belongs to u now. 😭

Mayank held Nupur's hand firmly and said, "Yeah Dad, I promise I'll always take care of her, don't worry." 😊

Nupur said bye to everyone. And soon, the bride and groom sat in the car and left. 😊😭

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At Mayank's place :-

Mayank's cousins:-
Tanya (T)
Soumya (S)
Nicke (N)
Malika (M)

Nupur was sitting on the bed, feeling very VERY nervous . . . just then, she heard someone coming inside the room.

M - Daro mat Bhabhi, Bhaiya hasn't come yet. 😆

N - And before u ask where he is, lemme tell u . . . Rannvijay Bhaiya has taken him out, to wish him best of luck!! I heard him say so!! 😆

S - Aaj toh, Bhabhi. 😉

T - Stop it gals, just look at her face, it's growing redder. Bhabhi, aapke lehnge se zyada lal aapka face ho raha hai. Dekho! 😆

N - Stop it gals, hadd hai. 😡

All - Okay fine, sorry! Humara kaam khatam! Bye, good night! Sweet dreams, oops that's not possible. 😆 Bye.

N - 😳😳 Bye. 😳😳

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Nupur is Nupur, she couldn't sit at one place for much time. 😆 She stood up and opened Mayank's cupboard, from which she got a small diary and some old pictures.

Just then, Mayank entered the room. He saw his personal diary and his childhood pics in her hand. She was about to open it. 😕

M - Dun u dare, kholna matt! Mujhe do!!

N - Shut up Mayank, lemme read it. Here it goes, 18 Feb' 2008 . . .

Before she could read further, Mayank snatched it away from her. 😡

N - Koi baat nahi, I'm still left with these photos. 👏

M - Zyada der k liye nahi . . .

N - Accha??

M - Haan!

And he snatched em away. 😆

N - U . . .

She started chasing him, and he started running as fast as he could. 😆Within no time, they were having a GHAMASAAN pillow fight. 😆

N - Aaaaahhhhh. 😭

M - Kya hua?? Tumhe pillow se choot lag gayi kya? 😛

N - Shut up, ye necklace itna bhari hai ki meri neck pe rashes pad gaye hain. Aww, they are paining. 😭

Mayank went up to her . . . removed her necklace, caressed her neck and kissed her allover. He kissed her on the neck, on the rashes. 😳😳

M - Is it okay now? 😉

Nupur could hardly say anything. She said, "Hmm" . . . 😳

-Look guys, am still 13 . . . I dunno what more to write!! 😆 Imagine yourself- 😛😆

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After 16 years . . .

On 18th February' 2018 . . . it was Mayank and Nupur's daughter, Jiah's birthday, she turned 13. 😊

Sanaya who was 16 yrs old by that time was busy troubling her Lil sis. Mayank and Nupur were a bit too engrossed in the surprise party's preparation while, Samrat and Gunjan were playing with Tamanna and RV's newly born son. Benjy got married to Dia. And was now working with Samrat and Mayank in their company. Nupur was still a fashion designer, that a successful one. Tamanna and RV were architects. Jiah took birth 3 years after Mayank and Nupur got married. 😳

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In the evening,

S - Open your eyes Jiah! 😊

As soon as Jiah opened her eyes, she saw her parents, uncles and aunts and all her friends gathered in her house's lobby. The lobby was decorated just the way she liked and everyone was singing Happy B'day for her. She jumped in joy. She was closest to her dad, Mayank. She hugged him tightly. 😊

J - I thought u won't be able to make it Papa!!

M - Of course not, it's your birthday!! And how could I miss it. 😊

J - Thanks Ma!! and saying this she hugged Nupur. 😊

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After the party finished, everyone went back to their homes. Jiah was very very happy. She hugged her parents and went off to sleep. 😊 Mayank was watching a movie, yes he was while Nupur was reading Mayank's fave novel. Fancy! 😆 Nupur came and sat beside Mayank on the couch. 😊

M - Even after blissful and long 16 years of our beautiful relationship, the passion and love is still alive! I love u so much Nupur. 😊

She smiled and kept her head on his shoulder and he gently kissed her. 😳

❤️ . . . You And I . . . In This Beautiful World . . . ❤️

~ The End ~

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How's it guys?? I hope I haven't disappointed u. 😊 Please hit the like tab. 😊

Love,
Kanky 😳

Edited by Kanky - 16 years ago

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Lipsa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#614

yayyy !! i'm the first to comment !! :D

Ooh !! this is soo awesome part!! Just great !! it's soo lovely & Romantic.Anyways I luv the name jiah really !! and I liked all the parts !! Oooh !! You have to pm me the link to ur new ff will it be a mayur one? Ooh !! whatever this is awesome!!

Luv Ya lipsa

Edited by Lipsa_mjht - 16 years ago

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minalpink100

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Posted: 16 years ago

#615

yes yar its really nice part thanks lot u r ff is really beautiful so nice [B][/B]

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#616

wow yaar

lovely part

so cute teasing and blushing huuu

wow yaar ye sab itna redish color kaha se lata hein

muje samaj nahin aata

well now your exam is over so ur free for writing another cute and sweet story

and this part is so sweet and cute and the lovely pillow fight

love it

lovely and beautiful ending

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403848

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Posted: 16 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: Lipsa_mjht
yayyy !! i'm the first to comment !! :D
Ooh !! this is soo awesome part!! Just great !! it's soo lovely & Romantic.Anyways I luv the name jiah really !! and I liked all the parts !! Oooh !! You have to pm me the link to ur new ff will it be a mayur one? Ooh !! whatever this is awesome!!
Luv Ya lipsa

I'll PM u the link. 😊 Thanks!! 😉