MayUr FF - You and I . . . (Last Part - Pg. 88) - Page 48

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey just read all parts of ur ff....its just awesome....i think u should cont. from the precap....and add me to ur pm list....keep up the gud work.....
luv yaa....
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Posted: 16 years ago

waise.......enjoy urself......but plzzzz try and update soon.....i m dying to read the next part(from precap).......

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part - 20

Early next morning . . .

Nupur's parents and Mayank's mom arrive. Mayank, Nupur, Tamanna and Samrat greet em. Gunjan was still sleeping . . . so her mother helself made way to her room in order to meet her.
After some time, Mayank and Samrat left for the office but before going Mayank asked Nupur to get ready by 6 in the evening . . . they were going out for a movie.

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At 6:30

Nupur went to Gunjan's room where Shilpa and her mom were talking to Gunjan. Tamanna was watching TV . . .

N - Tamanna . . . am leaving . . .

T - Kahan jaa rahi ho bhabhi??

N - Mayank ke saath picture dekhne!! Aur main late bhi ho gayi hun, he told me to get ready by 6 and am already 1/2 late.

T - Tabhi main kahun . . . bhai neeche apni car k paas itni der se kyun khada hai.

N - Shit, SHIT! Ab main gayi kaam se, bye . . .

Tamanna giggled.

Nupur went downstairs and greeted Mayank.

N - Hii . . . am sorry . . . am late.

Mayank was very angry . . . he opened the car's door and said, "sit" . . .

Nupur & Mayank sat inside the car . . . Mayank started driving. He didn't talk to Nupur. she was feeling guilty.

N - I said am sorry Mayu.

M - Sorry for what??

N - For being late.

M - You should have informed me at least. This is not done. I missed such an imp. meeting only for u and u don't really seem to bother. Hadd hai.

He stopped the car cause of the red light. Nupur didn't reply . . . she uickly gave him a peck on his cheek and said, "am sorry!"

M - Nupur!

N - Hmmm??

M - Lagta hai mujhe roz gusaa hona chahiye!!

N - Mayank!

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They reached the theatre after some time . . . they walked in hand in hand. They took seats at the back.

N - Mayank! Movie konsi hai??

M - Batau?

N - Haan!!

M - Pakka? But tum mujhe bhi equal attention dogi.

N - Huh?? Bol to aise rahe ho jaise SRK ki movie ho.

Mayank nodded.

N - I love u Mayank!! Thanks so much . . . sadiyan ho gayi SRK ki picture dekhe!!

M - Dekha, I told u!

N - You are so cute.

M - Whatever.

The film began . . . Nupur kept her head on Mayank's shoulder and he held her hand . . . they were watching the movie very peacefully . . . more than the movie . . . they were busy staring at each other. They were just lost in each other. Just then, Mayank's phone rang. And it was Samrat's call.

M - Haan bol Sam??

S - Tu aur Nupur jaldi se City Hospital aa jao!

M - Kya hua!

S - Gunjan ko admit karvaya hai . . . she's in the operation theatre now! Critical hai !

M - Dun worry . . . we'll be there in 10 min . . . and Samrat . . . tension bilkul mat le kyunki complications toh aani thi and we all knew that. Sab theek hoga. Dun u worry. Bye.

S - Hope so, bye!

N - Kya hua??

M - Gunjan is hospitalized.

N - Wat? Di? Jaldi chalo . . .

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Mayank and Nupur got stuck in a traffic jam . . . al most an hour passed away . . . and by that time the operation had already taken place . . . Gunjan gave birth to a baby girl.

Precap - Gunjan gets discharged. Tamanna names the baby girl as Sanaya. And MayUr's wedding date gets finalized.

To Be Continued . . .

Guys, I would be updating the FF only once a week . . . my mom has all of a sudden become very strict . . . and I myself have to study a lot! With loads and loads of homework. But I'll make sure whenever I update . . . I provide u with a great update. Please use the like tab.

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Posted: 16 years ago
nawwwwww.. very cute part.. : ) gr8 work xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

cute part dear... loved it.. will wait patiently for next update.....

Study welll...
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Posted: 16 years ago
cute part girl thanx fr da PM
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi kanky!
very sweet part. I loved it.
and dont worry about updates. study comes first. all the best best for your studies. try to update once in a week.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh dear..concentrate on ur studies..
lovely part..we'll wait patiently for u ..no worries.. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
very cuteeeeeeee update........dear.............special thnxx a ton for makin them watch SRK movie.....🤗 🤗 🤗 .........

nywz w8in for ur next upd8.... 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey dear! very cute update! thanx for the pm! nd u study well! ok!

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