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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#1021

Oh god !!!

how come am sooooo late !!!!

anyways....better late than never !!!

update was superrrrbbb !!!

So finally all the confusion betwwen Raj and Naina is cleared and they are very much togethr !😃

Raj's mom is backkkkk !!!! Her dial were as usual hilarious ....but Raj ki hassi ne toh unki bolti bandh kardi !

Oh god !! I was missing Raj's mom !! 😆 and Aryan too !!

both were cute !!

RN shopping scene and lunch were nicely written ! 👏

So now Raj gifted her a saree !! 😳

I want to read what's next...NOW !!!

Pleaseeeee update soon !!

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#1022

Awesome update. too good.loved it.
Loved the way raj wished new year to naina.
all the misunderstanding , confusion between raj and naina were cleared now.
Naina feel guilty about previous night but soon raj cleared all the confusion .
He is too good.
Wow, raj's mom is back. loved the conversation between raj and her mother. Conversation between,Naina and her mother in law and Naina and aryan...
loved their shopping.
continue soon dear.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#1023

Fab...Fab...Fab...

dekh maine apna comment change nahi kiya ...

Raj...itna sweeeeeeeeeet kyoun hai...??? kisi k paas yeh jawab nahi hai toh tere paas kahan se hoga ...hai na...???😆

naina ki ankhen khuli toh sab kuch us k samne tha...!!! ab itna pyar karnewala use kahan se milega...fics k alwa...!!! sach me yeh ek sach ka happy new year tha...!!!😛

raj ne math me degree li hogi...varna itna calculative kaise hota...??? khiar mera bhi yahi sochna tha ki naina ki tarah ki raj se jyada naina ko aur kuch nahi chahiye tha us waqt....!!!😛

raj k shirt me maam hairan hain...par hum nahi hain...!!! hum ne toh puri story dekh rakhi thi....matlab tune dekhaya tha...!!!😛

phir janab aaye...aur mera shaq sahi nikla...jo maine tujhe kaha tha ki...naina se raj kyoun dur hua tha...he he he...dekh...mera guess kitna sahi hai...!!!😃

phir dono ka voh romantic...scene...jise tu ding-dong kahti hai😆...awesome...!!! par sahi waqt par mummy jee ka fone aa gaya...pahli baar unhe bhi raj badla hua laga...!!! pyar ka asar hai...achhe achhon ko badal deta hai...aur yeh toh apne pyare se sweet se...cute se...rajveer sir hain...!!!😃

naina ne sahi insaan se raj ki shikayat kar di hai...!!! sirf vohi hai jo raj ko dara sakti hai...naina sirf pyar kar sakti hai...haan...kabhi kabhi biwi wali aatma ghush jati hai toh...voh thoda hyper ho jati hai...par chalta hai...😆

lo ab toh raj ne beti k sath sath apne in-laws ko bhi patana suru kar diya hai...!!! shopping scene baht hi achhe se tune likha hai...!!! main yahin se imagine kar rahi hun ki jab teri shaadi hogi toh tere husband ki watt lagnewali hai...!!! ab tu kisi ko story me itne achhe se shopping karwa rahi hai toh haqiqat me tu kya karegi....vohi imagine kar rahi thi...!!!😆

last scene k bare me kya batayun...voh toh main tujhe hamare adde par batayungi...!!!😉

cont soon nahi kahungi...kyoun ki mujhe pata hai ki tera next ud kab aanewala hai...!!! phir faida hi kya tujhe cont soon kahne ka...!!!

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#1024

👏 👏 👏 great part & ofcourse great fic.... its one of the sweet & simple RN fics... jaha raj naina ki life me zyada complications nahi hai..... so continue the story in the same way... thodi nok jhok aur bahut zyada romance 😳 😳 thodi si comedy 😆 😆..... bahut cum serious scenes... & of course continue soon 😃 😃.... kafi time ho gaya update ko ... approximately 15days 😃 😃...continue soon 😃

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#1025

Awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 part dear

Boquet of roses jo raj naina ke liye leke aaya they r lovely...naina is so lucky yaar, raj kitna caring hain...lime water bhi rakha naina ke liye

when naina found that she is wearing rajs shirt ...tab madam dimag pe jor dali to sab kuch yaad aagaya ki usne nashe main kya kya kiya..and she is feeling hurt n gulity...poor naina

Raj is sosweet..when he saw that naina is feeling guilty..he tried to lighten her mood..n raj hugging her n saying ILU ...its such a lovely scene n their kiss..everything so beautifuuly written

Raj to apni maa ke jokes sunke bahut hasa n his mom felt so happy...raj ki mom ki nauntanki n her dialogues...sab mujhe bahut accha laga..aryan to bahut gussa hain raj pe..dekthe hain ab raj kaisa manayega usko jab wo waapas aayega

Raj n nainas shopping scene is so nice...naina ka kehna kitne daante ho aap 3 saal ab meri baari...its too funny raj ne naina ki mom n dad ke liye bhi shopping ki..such a sweet son -in -law he is

Raj to bahut romantic hota jaraha hain...Raj aur naina ka wo ek dusre ko khana khilane ka scene is so cute..

Now raj gifted naina a beautiful saree...aur ab wo naina ko wo saree pehnayega....tumne aise point par kyun stop kardi yaar...jaldi next part post karna ...plz

Loved the whole part dear...n now waiting for the next part so eagerly

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sahaj

@jaimaliya

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#1026

very good written i am very impressed wih you

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#1027

Superb update dear. 😊 😊 😊
Mujhe aaj kal buri aadat lag gayi hai saare updates late padhne ki but don't worry "Better to b late than never". 😆 😆 😆
Lovely and so romantic. 👏 👏 👏
That was all i needed in RN's life from a long time. They started living their realtionship with their fullest now. 😉 😉 😉
Naina when woke up she was thinking the right thing, anyone can think like that. She was unhappy and shameful but she didn't know about Raj's feelings. She was thinking that she was forcing herself to him but Raj really loves her a lot.
Firstly nothing remembered to her but as she recalled all events she was feeling guilty and it's obvious. But thank god before all condition worsen Raj came back and he made her feel that as much she loves him he too loves her a lot.
Now Naina has proof that Raj loves her. Lovely chit chat by Raj's mom to Aryan, obviously mom n Aryan will be angry over him that he didn't call any one of them. Maa can understand but Aryan to abhi chota hai na. He misses his chahu so much.
Lovely shopping scene and liked the way Raj flirted with Naina there still not caring about anything. He thinks about everyone that's y he went to shop for Naina's parents too. Now only they look perfect couple.
Dinner scene was also sweet loved that. But most i like the last part of the update. Raj gifted Naina saari and now he was going to make her wear that. I would be impatiently waiting for that update and b/w that saari was pretty.
continue soon dear.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#1028

hey guys!!!!!!!!! how r u all??????? i hv read all ur lovely comments and loved it completely......now time for bad news.....i hv some personal work....soooo coz of that i will not be able to update till june😭😭😭😭😭....i know all of u want to smash my head ryt now but i really cant help it😭😭😭sooooo i'll ask u all after coming back and if u all will be interested in reading further then i'll continue....otherwise i'll be ending the fic in 2-3 parts....

till then take care and stay happy😊😊

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#1029

Originally posted by: rajeev fann
hey guys!!!!!!!!! how r u all??????? i hv read all ur lovely comments and loved it completely......now time for bad news.....i hv some personal work....soooo coz of that i will not be able to update till june😭😭😭😭😭....i know all of u want to smash my head ryt now but i really cant help it😭😭😭sooooo i'll ask u all after coming back and if u all will be interested in reading further then i'll continue....otherwise i'll be ending the fic in 2-3 parts....
till then take care and stay happy😊😊

bass isi ki kami rah gayi thi....!!! pahle toh itna late ud karti thi...aur ab tera yeh note...😭!!! khair main janti hun ki teri prob kya hai...aur tu kyun June tak UD post nahi kar sakti isi liye kuch nahi kahti...!!! 😭

parr wapas aa kar puchegi ki hum ise padhne me interested hain ya nahi...😲??? yeh baat kuch samajh me nahi....😡!! ab tujhe kya likh kar dena padega ki humain yeh fic kitna achha lagta hai...😡!!! hadh hai...mujhe pata tha ki tere paas dimag nahi hai...par maidan pura khaali hai is bare me pata nahi tha mujhe....😆!!! chup chap teri voh prob solve ho jane k baad aa kar Ud karna...ok....😡???? varna tujhe toh pata hai ki kisi bhi A1 pagal se ulajhna kitna mehenga padd sakta hai...!!!😡 😆 😡 😆 😡 😆

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#1030

ok firstly thanx 4 informing that u'll not update 😭 😭....
but no problem continue whenever u are free..... 😊 😊.... readers will wait 4u 😃.....
as 4 ending the fic in 2-3 parts 😡 😡...dont u dare 😡.....coz u given freedom we will come to break ur head 🤣 🤣..... so dont think about ending fic so soon.... throw that idea out of ur head... 😆 😆......
cant resist continue soon 😉 😉