mayur sajan ff- once upon a lifetime-note+promo=54

part 2- mayur ff- once upon a lifetime-

introduction- pg 35

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1198762&TPN=35

part 1- pg 46

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1198762&TPN=46&#22701289

part 1- mayur ff i just wanna spend my life with you-

this is the link to the previous thread-

LOVE

SINDHYA

okayy here goes part 23-

Mayank- nupur im realy sorry-

Nupur- you should be. Just look at you mayank, fully drenched. Agar zukaam ho gaya to? To kya karoge? Hun?

Mayank slowly kept his hand on nupurs hand, and suprised her by saying- agar mujhe zukaam ho gaya to tum mera khyaal rakhogi na?

He said giving her the butter flies in her stomach.

Nupur- mayank main... woh...-

Mayank- mera khyaal nahi rakhogi?

He said trying not to sound too dissapointed.

Nupur nahi main-

Mayank- to matlab rakhogi.

Nupur- par main-

Mayank- matlab nahi rakhogi.

Nupur- mayank!

She said in a slightly stern voice, while mayank flashed her his winning smile.

Meanwhile nupur, quicklly sat down beside mayank and took both his feet and placed it on her lap. Slowly and calmly she took off his shoes and socks and rubbed his feet to make him warm.

After around 5 minutes, she got up and said- upar waale kamre mein jao, aur change kar aao. Tab tak main tumhaare liye soup bana laati hoon.

***

Joel- mujhe jaisa uske liye feel hua na aaj, kisi ke liye nahi hua hai yaar. Seriously it was.. it was so...

Kashi- connecting?

Joel- right!

Kashi- to tu use prupose kab kar raha hai?

Suddenly the smile which had been playing on joels face vanished.

Joel- PRUPOSE?

Kashi- haan, prupose. Kyu tu use prupose nahi karne waala??

She asked with a puzzled look on her face.

Joel- nahi yaar, main kaise?

Kashi- excuse me. What do you mean main kaise?

***

Uday- ek main hi kunwaara reh gaya.

He said in a pitiable yet humorous tone.

Anna- arre koi baat nahi ud.

Akhil- haan yaar. Wo motu keshav bhi to abhi single hai.

At which both anvita and uday shot him menancing looks.

Anvita- aky ka ye matlab nahi tha ud. Iska matlab tha ki ye tere liye koi na koi dhundwa dega yaar. Bharosa rakh.

Uday- aww tum dono ko mera kitna khyaal.

Saying this he hugged anvita.

Akhil who saw them hug, felt his knuckles clenching and murmured- very good uday. Dhekho mauka maro chauka!

***

Gunjan and samrat who were sitting at samrats place, watching love actually, were deep in conversation.

Gunjan- tum.. tum meri madad kyu karna chahte the?

Samrat- main....

Gunjan- bolo na samrat. Jab tumhe sab kuch pata chala... to tumne sach sach sabko bataya kyu nahi.

Samrat- kyun ki agar main batata to....

Gunjan- to....?

Samrat- to.... chodo na. Big deal.

***

Mayank who had changed and come down to have his soup was stopped in his way by nupurs hand. He slowly looked up and asked- kya hua?

Nupur- kya hua? Mayank sharma ka dimaag kharab ho gaya. Aur agar aise hi chalta raha to unhe zukaam hone mein zyada waqt nahi lagega!

Mayank-(with an innocent confused expression) par nupur, maine to change kar liya.

Nupur- aur baal?

Mayank gave her a deep-in-thought expression, and then decided to tease her.

Mayank- nupur, kya hai na, wo yeh sab mere liye maa hi karti hai. To maa to yahaa nahi hai.

Nupur- to main kar deti hoon.

Mayank- lekin nupur-

Nupur- ab tum khud to mujhe bologe nahi. Tumhara ego jo hurt hota hai, to maine socha main khud hi kar deti hoon.

***

Hope you like it!

Plzzz comment!

first of all...CONGO ON THE NEW THREAD sindhya...🥳🥳🥳

now..the update...

it was AWESOME.....👍🏼

hmm i wonder ab kia hoga..😉.
but sindhya im a bit confused..yaar hasnt nupur gone??
is it mayankz flashback still??
plz clear my confusion..

but this part was very sweet..esp the baal sukhaane wala..soo cute..keep it up...😊

loads of luv..aisha....

hi sindhya!

ohh congo for ur 2nd thread....

Originally posted by: anurikita

ohh congo for ur 2nd thread....

nice update....i luv mayur scenes.....

ok not much comment on it....

let me comment more on next...

thx for the update....wen is ur next update yaar???

cindy
really cute yaar
now i m all set for ur next super romantic update

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hi sindhya!

it was a really sweet part. all the couples were cute.

update soon.

Y is nupu acting like nothing ever went wrong??? Laykin I liked mayur shooo cute!! And I'm not hatin sajan as much as I did before lolz!!

Originally posted by: shinella

cindy
really cute yaar
now i m all set for ur next super romantic update