MAUSAM- sajan and mayur ff.

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SAJAN AND MAYUR -FF😊

Hi, guys I no that I make boring ff's but still I am working on my writing skills and hindi so want to know that if I'm doing it good or bad. Please feel free to comment, criticize and do give your ideas, also a request to silent-readers please comment. And most of all guys I will make a list of those who want to know whenever I update this ff. keep smiling.

Story:

This story will be continued after the track of sheena-samrat date 2, but I change one thing that dia and uday are not gunjan and nupur's cousins, but sister and brother.

Nupur- the eldest.

Dia- Second eldest

Uday: Third eldest

Gunjan: Youngest

Characters: initials

Samrat: S

Gunjan: G

Mayank: M

Nupur: N

Dia: D

Uday: U

Benji: B

Ranvijay: RV

Sheena: SH

Part One:

Samrat returning from Sheena's house thinking about what she said.

Flash back:

SH: Main jis friend ki baat kar rahi hoon WO hai "gunjan".

And when he came to present his eyes were moist. Suddenly his cell phone rings; he cuts it without seeing who is it, phone again rings but he switch it off.

It was none other then Gunjan.

G: Samrat mera phone kyon kaat raha hai, shayad abhi bhi Sheena k saath hoga.

Then she looks at the clock its 12 midnight.

G: Magar iss waqt to 12 baje hain, phir kyon phone nahin utha raha.

She then puts her cell and went to bed.

N: Kya hua gunjan tu ne phone nahin kiya?

G: di, shayad WO abhi bhi sheena k ghar par hai isliye phone nahin utha raha.

N: kya? Tu pagal ho gayi hai, iss waqt, adhi raat ko, gunjan bhelehi Samrat jitna bhi modern ya broad minded ho magar usse itna pata hai k kissi ladki k ghar wo bhi akele adhi raat tak nahin therna chahiye.

G: haan di yeh to maine socha hi nahin, main benji ko try karti hoon.

N: kya ab tu usse bhi tang kare gi! Chal theek hai kar le par please bahar jakar, agar kal main late hoi to kal wo Mayank ka bacha mujhe kacha chaba jayega.

G: tum bhi kya kya bolti ho di. Acha tum so jao main bahar ja rahi hoon. good night.

N: hmm.

She smiles and went outside and call's benji.

Benji is sleeping and dreaming:

Everyone is cheering and calling his name and boys are holding him on there shoulders, because its because of him excel won the match. Then a girl call's his name:

Girl: Hi, benji tumne aaj to kamal kar diya, amazing performance, well can we go on a date?

Benji: su' he was about to say something when suudenly his cell phone rings.

Present:

B: kaun hai yaar is waqt ye log mujhe sapne mein bhi date par jaane nahin dete.

When his eye's struck on the name of the caller.

B: mar gaye, agar jo main abhi keh raha tha sam sun raha hota to maar dalta after all uski best friend ka jo phone hai, magar mere paas, wo bhi is waqt?

Benji picks up the phone.

B: hello, hi gunjan itni raat ko kyon, I mean kaise phone kya?

G: Sorry benji, main tumhain jagana nahin chahati thi par Samrat phone nahin utha raha, wo sheena k ghar date par gaya hai.

B: dekho gunjan main tumhara aur sam ka friend hoon, mujhse please sheena ki baat ainda mat karna, I hate that girl! Well waise koi kaam tha kya, wo shayad so raha ho isliye phone off kardia hoga.

Then he thinks:

B: Magar sam ne phone off kia wo bhi gunjan k phone karne par.

When suddenly his door bell rings.

B: gunjan can you wait for two minutes, bahar koi aaya hai.

G: nahin tum jakar dekho kaun hai aur main rakhti hoon bas yahi kehna tha agar usse contact ho to batadena k tamana madam ne kaha hai k kal Jaldi pohanchna hai meeting hai, ok good night.

B: good night gunjan.

He put his phone aside and went to open the door.

B: najane iss waqt kaun tapak pada? Kholne to do bacho abhi batata hoon.

And then with his mouth open benjy stares at none other then Samrat.

B: Tu, mere bhai, na ye sheena ka ghar hai, na hi gunjan ka to tu yahan kaise?

S: benjy kya main andar asakta hoon?

B: dude! Anything wrong, sab theek hai na, tu aur mujhse permission maang raha hai.

S: main mazak k mood mein nahin hoon, benjy.

B: kya hua dude? tu to sheena k ghar date par gaya tha na!

S: haan, yaar wo actually sheena''.

Silence.

S: tujhe kaise pata main sheena k saat date par tha?

B: wo gunjan ka abhi phone aaya tha, usne kaha hai miss tam ne sab ko early bolaya hai, meeting k liye.

S: main soch raha hoon kal college hi na jaon.

B: kya? Tu aur college na jaye. Impossible, tu bhalehi classes na le par college zaroor jata hai.

S: benjy, kya tujhe bhi lagta hai k mere aur chashmish k beech kuch hai?

B: (he smiles) tumhain bhi se kya matlab hai, pora college jaante hai k tumhari aur gunjan ki friendship special hai, wo agar gunjan k style mein kahen to anmol.

S: (he smiles) Chashmish!

B: waise tu iss waqt yahan kaise?

S: (SAD) benjy, agar tumhain sheena aur gunjan mein se kissi ek ko chuna pade to tu kisse chunega?

B: main definitely gunjan ko chunon ga, isliye nahin k mujhe sheena pasand nahin bt isliye b'coz gunjan is different. Sab se alag hai, jisne mujhe mera porana dost wapas dilwaya hai, real Samrat, warna wo Samrat to tha hi nahin, hamesha girls k baare mein sochnae wala koi aur hi tha.

S: chashmish different hai, hai na? so januable!

B: acha sam gunjan tumhara phone try kar rahi thi par off tha, kyun dude? Tu nee gunjan ka phone nahin attend kiya?

S: maine dikha nahin kiska hai.

B: ok, so kya irada hai?

S: can I sleep over here.

B: sure dude, ja apne room mein soja, poochne wali kya baat hai, hum childhood se ek saat hain, tu ne pehle kabhi pocha nahin, and isliye tra mere house mein alag aur tere house mein mere liye ek separate room hai. Acha bye.

S: good night dude. J

Excel college:

Dia and Nupur were walking in the hall way, discussing about the play when Mayank bumped into them, dia got her control but Nupur was unable to control her balance and fall. Technically was about to fall when Mayank grabbed her by the waist and there was an eye-locking session. Nupur was totally mesmerized in mayank's eyes when Mayank thought.

M: Nupur aaj to main pata kar k rahunga k tumhare dil mein kya hai.

N: huh, kuch kaha tumne?

M: Tumne kuch suna?

N: Tumne kuch kaha kya?

M: nahin.

N: to bhala main kaise sun sakti hoon.

They were talking comfortably with Nupur in Mayank arms, when suddenly Nupur realizes that.

N: choro Mayank.

M: kya?

N: mujhe. Choro.

Mayank leaves her waist and she falls.

N: Mayank!

She said it so loud that Samrat and benji who were outside college in the parking area heard that too.

B: lo ji, Mayank to gaya, mujhe ek baat samajh nahin aati dude, yeh teenon behenein ek dosre se itni different kaise hain. Dia jo college ki diva hai, Nupur- chuk chuk gari aur gunjan- bilkul bholi.

S: Chashmish sach mein alag hai.

B: chalein.

S: yeah.

They both enter college premises.

Gunjan was walking towards the music room when she saw sheena, she went to her and.

G: hi, sheena tumhari aur Samrat ki date kaisi rahi?

SH: kyon? Tumhain Samrat ne nahin bataya?

G: sheena yeh tum kya keh rahi ho.

SH: nahin, maine socha k wo tumhain har baat batata hai o isliye shayad ye bhi batai ho, anyways tumhain fikr karne ki zaroorat nahin hai, Samrat kal mere saath tha to humari date bhi achi hi rahi hogi, after all we r made for each other.

While sheena was saying this dia was walking by with annie and heard that.

D: annie, don't you think ye sheena apne aap ko kuch zyada hi ooncha samajhti hai.

A: yeah babes, dekho to poor gunjan ko kis tarah tang kar rahi hai.

Dia felt bad for gunjan and was about to go and say something to sheena when gunjan ran towards the music room. Dia with a sad face.

D: gunjan don't worry sammy ko aanedo phir dekhti hoon k tumhain kaun tang karta hai.

When suddenly Samrat came behind her back and.

S: hey, candy, mujhe dhoondh rahi theen.

D: yeah sammy, I was looking for you, kuch baat karni hai.

S: bolo.

Dia told Samrat every single thing.

S: com'on I'm sure sheena aisa nahin kar sakti.

D: sammy, please apne dream world mein rehna bandh karo, aur reality ko accept karo, sheena hates gunjan and all of us besides you and Mayank.

Samrat become worried.

D: gunjan roti hoi music room ki taraf gayi hai.

S: main dekhti hoon.

Dia gives satisfactory smile J

Music room:

Gunjan is vociferating.

G: tu bhi na gunjan, tumhain koi zaroorat nahin thi sheena se poochne ki k Samrat aur uski date kaisi rahi, akhir wo unka personal matter hai, mujhe iss baat se koi faraq nahin parna chahiye.

S: correct!

PART 2

Music room:

S: Correct!

Gunjan turns and saw him, staring at her with a weird look, neither anger nor happiness, something she never saw on his face.

S: correct, gunjan tumhain koi zaroorat nahin thi sheena se poochne ki humari date kaisi rahi.

G: sorry Samrat, really sorry, mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiye tha, ye tum dono ka personal matter hai mujhe iss mein nahin parna chahiye, sorry.

And headed towards the door when, she thought her dupatta has stuck to the table, but no it wasn't stuck but Samrat was holding it, she realizes that when Samrat came infront of her.

S: chashmish tumne aisa soch bhi kaise lia k main tumse iss baat par naraz honga k tumne meri sheena k saat date k baare mein poocha, main tumse kissi aur wajah se upset hoon.

G: koi aur wajah hai? Kya?

S: tumhain nahin pata?

G: nahin.

He comes near her, and took a deep breath, he holds her shoulders, Samrat was feeling something different, butterflies in his stomach and then he pushed a strand of her hair which was falling on her face to the back of her ears.

S: batadon!

G: haan.

S: pakka!

G: haan Samrat bolo.

He comes more close to her, that much close that they could hear their heartbeats, gunjan closed her eye's and Samrat smiles, and then his head took another direction, his head was next to her ears and his lips were moving with perfect synchronization to her heart beat.

S: gunjan, tumne mujhse ek wada kiya tha, k tum mera har pal saat dogi, to mujhe tumhara saat chahiye.

Then he smiled and at the same moment her eye's were opened and he moves backwards.

S: mujhe tumhara saat chahiye chashmish, rehearsal mein.

A sigh of relief came in gunjan's heart and heartbeats slowed down.

G: Samrat, tumne to mujhe darahi diya tha, main samjhi k tum''

S: k main?

He took one step close to her.

G: choro, rehearsal's k liye late horaha hai.

S: topic change karna allowed nahin hai chashmish, batao kya samjhi theen?

G: wo' Samrat'.

Suddenly someone came'.. It was vatsala.

V: Gunjan, tumhain miss tamana dhoondh rahi hain, Jaldi chalo.

Gunjan taking an opportunity to escape ran towards vatsala.

When she was gone.

S: hmm, kuch to baat hai, jo chashmish keh nahin pai, wo to natural hai magar yeh butterfly wali feeling unusual hai, kissi se iss k baare mein pata karna padega, magar kis se?

Then it struck him''..

" MAYANK!"

Corridor:

Nupur was with uday discussing something when it struck her'.

N: arre uday bhaiya, ye sab choriye, ye bataiye Mayank kahan hai?

U: Nupur tum bhi na, dekho Tami ne bola hai k play mein sirf kuch din bachaye hain isliye no garbar.

N: uffo, uday bhaiya aap bhi na! arre benji'

When she saw benji, benji was taking a door prop to somewhere, when he saw her he hid himself behind it.

B: oh no, subah subah morena express, mar gaya dude.

N: benji!

When suddenly with fear he drop's the door over his leg.

B: aaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Everyone gather's around, uday put the prop aside and help benji to the seat.

B: mera pare, Nupur tumhain bhi aaj hi mere pare mein fracture karwana tha, jab k aaj miss aha wapas arahi hain.

N: oho benji, tumhain kaise pata k fracture hua hai, tum doctor ho? Kya? Miss aha wapas arahi hain.

B: haan

N: ye to bohat achi baat hai. Magar maine tumse kuch poochna tha, Mayank kahan hai.

B: mujhe kya pata! Apni favorite place par hoga ya sam k saat.

N: library ya Samrat k saat seedhe seedhe batao.

When sheena comes from behind.

SH: Nupur, Mayank abhi abhi canteen ki taraf gaya hai.

Waise ye miss aha kaun hain?

Nupur murmurs. "wohi jo tumhain seedha kardengi."

Uday and benji, laugh's and gives a high five to each other.

SH: kuch kaha tumne?

N: nahin to, thanks for the information sheena, bye.

Nupur went towards canteen.

Canteen:

Mayank was sitting there talking to himself.

M: Mayank usse ignore karo, kyonke girls un guys ko hi pasand karti hain jo un hain ignore karte hain.

Samrat comes from front.

S: wrong dude! Girls un boys ko like karti hain jo unhain like karen aur handsome hoon, humari tarah.

M: jaanta hoon magar, main morena girl ki baat kar raha hoon aur ye morena sisters to.

S: I know different hain, I wonder gunjan and Nupur came from morena after dia and uday got settled in their new house here, approximately 2 years hogaye hain dia ko aye huay morena se and they came few month's ago, right! But still all 3 of them are totally opposite to each other and weird too.

M: opposite to theek hai weird?

S: weird isliye kyonke unke qareeb jaane se ek ajeeb si feeling hoti hai.

M: kya? Mujhe to Nupur k paas janne se ajeeb feeling banti hai magar tumhain kis k paas jaane se wo feeling hoti hai.

S: kya tumhain bhi hoti hai, kyon? Tumhain reason pata hai?

Before Mayank could answer.

A loud sound of panic.

V: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Whole college went to see what happened.

G: kya hua vatsala?

Vatsala was found opposite to principals office infront of notice board.

V: ye dekho.

Pointing towards the board.

Samrat, Mayank, gunjan and uday saw and gasp.

S: Call back's for re-auditioning.

M: tomorrow!

U: by miss aha.

G: contestants;

Nupur, Mayank, Sheena, benji, vatsala, Raj, sameer, Ranvijay, dia, Samrat and

S: Gunjan!

Precap: re- audition by miss aha, as miss tamana will no longer be in charge due to miss aha's sudden return and miss tamanna's phuppi's illness. She'll only help her in play and rehearsals.

part 3:
😊

Everyone was stressed, when at that time Samrat laughed.

N: Samrat yahan hum sab ki jaanein ja rahi hain aur tum Hans raheho.

S: Nupur, relax tum log to aise ghabra raheho jaise exams ki announcement hoi ho, re- auditions hi to hain, aur wo bhi miss aha lengi.

M: right, ms. Aha to bohat lenient hain.

S: haan yaar.

N: main to dar hi gayi thi by god!

U: magar incharge to tami theen na to ms. Aha kahan se tapak padeen!

B: oye, kya bola tu ne.

U: sorry yaar benji wo tami incharge nahin hai isliye main upset hoon.

While everyone was chattering gunjan was worried that how will she be able to audition, she don't even know how to act, when Samrat saw her and'.

S: kya hua chashmish?

B: haan gunjan kya hua?

G: main aur audition, nahin mujhse nahin hoga.

S: chashmish se koi kaam na ho ye main nahin maansakta.

B: gunjan just relax , miss aha hi to hain, aur tumne talent parade mein bhi to unka dil jeet lia tha.

S: unka hi nahin humara bhi, aur ye to sirf ek play hai.

G: yahi to Samrat, ye play hai, talent parade nahin, yahan sirf college k log hi nahin bahar se dosre colleges bhi honge.

When sheena suddenly comes'.

SH: Samrat, gunjan theek keh rahi hai, yeh uske liye different hoga, aur waise bhi miss aha jitni bhi lenient kyon na hon magar ye play hai iss mein wo sirf best performers ko hi lengi aur ''.

B: sheena, miss aha humare liye lenient hain kyonke humain achi tarah jaanti hain, magar tumhain nahin ye mat samajhna k agar tumhain miss tamana ne le lia tha to miss aha bhi le lengi, wo different hain.

G: benji, tum khamokha sheena ko dara raheho.

S: nahin chashmish benji theek keh raha hai, yahan shayad bohat se logon ko jo new hain haar ka saamna karna pade.

He said this referring to sheena but meanwhile Ranvijay got there, so gunjan thought he was saying this to him.

While talking peon came.

Peon: Samrat baba, gunjan ji, aap sab ko saxena ji ne apne office mein bolaya hai.

All headed towards office.

Office:

Ms aha will be indicated as A and principal as p.

A: hello students, I hope all of u are fine.

S: welcome back madam

B: yeah madam welcome back.

Benji gives her a rose.

A: thank you benji, well aap sab ko pata chal chuka hai k re auditions honge so aap sab mujhe 15mins mein auditorium mein milen, ok, good luck.

G: madam, mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai.

A: gunjan pehli baat agar tum ye audition nahin dena chahateen to I'm sorry but auditions compulsory hain aur agar koi audition nahin dega uske 20 percent marks har subject se deduct honge, sorry gunjan.

G: but madam main acting nahin karsakti.

A: gunjan, tumhain acting nahin karni hai, just be yourself, ok, now go.

All left the office.

All excelians in auditorium;

A: ready everyone, lets start it.

U: madam there is a tiny problem.

A: yeah uday tell me.

U: madam play parson hai, aur sab ne lines already yaad ki hui hain, agar aap characters change karaingi to problem hojayegi.

T: uday, don't worry, aha aur main soch samajh kar hi yeh sab karahe hain.

A: yeah uday, so guys lets start.

T: sab se pehlae hum musical performance k liye auditions lenge.

A: tamana, musical performance k liye to humare two sensational hain na, Samrat and gunjan.

T: no aha, gunjan Samrat k saat play mein nahin hai isliye wo nahin ga sakti.

A: auditions le kar dekhti hain.

T: ok, to sab se pehlae aap sab teams mein divide hojayen.

At that moment Samrat give his hand for gunjan but sheena grabs it. Benji comes and ask gunjan to be his partner. While Nupur was standing there waiting for Mayank to ask her, he asked dia instead, dia was shocked, and so was Nupur. Before dia could say something Ranvijay comes and ask Nupur to be his partner.

N: aye bhagwan mujhe kis musibat mein phasa diya.

RV: kuch kaha tumne?

N: nahin to, chalo.

T: alright to teams ban chuki hain to sab se pehlae Nupur tum apne partner k saat aao.

RV and Nupur went to stage.

A: mere paas kuch chits hain, in mein songs k names hain jo song nikle ga gana padega, aur nahin ga paye to partner change.

T: chit uthao.

Both Nupur and RV put their hands in the bowl.

RV takes the chit out and gives to miss Aha.

A: hmm, marjani.

RV: madam wo to sab humain dekh kar yahi kehte hain, ye bataiye song kaunsa nikla hai.

T: Ranvijay, marjani song ka naam hai.

A: lyrics board lao uday.

Uday brings lyrics board.

T: start.

Music starts, RV was sweating.

N: kya hua gaao na!

RV: humain tune nahin aati.

N: kya?

Everyone stare them.

T: RV kya hua?

RV: humain yeh song nahin aata, humara matlab hai tune.

A: ok, tum side par khade hojao, Mayank tum aao.

M: yes madam.

A: tumhain to yeh song aata hai na?

M: yeah madam.

A: start.

Both Mayank and Nupur sings the song, in the middle when guys track comes again, Mayank looks in nupur's eyes and sings. They come closer to each other, when suddenly Nupur hairs started to come on her face, Mayank looks at her, he felt a strange fragrance blocking his path, he realizes it was coming from Nupur's hair. A extremely pleasant fragrance. He was so mesmerized in that, that he didn't even realized how close both of them were, their eyelids touched each other's. when suddenly Samrat interrupted with an applause, and everyone started clapping, Samrat with a crooked smile on his face.

S: awesome dude.

A: amazing performance.

T: now Sheena and Samrat.

They both went upstairs, while Mayur returned.

A: chit.

Sheena picks the chit.

T: Khuda jaane.

SH: great!

They both proceed towards the lyrics board.

Samrat started to sing, when girls track came Sheena took the lead and changed the sound, totally different, she made it hip-hop. Tamana and aha started to smile, and aha giggles, when Samrat started laughing and all the participants laughed apart from gunjan, she just smiled.

B: Sheena humne iss play KO rocking banana hai, flop nahin karwana.

A: sheena agar tum nahin ga sakti theen to bol deten, ya atleast kisi aise k saat gaathen jo tumhare jaisa gata ho, Samrat to singing''

All: star hai.

T: sheena next to Ranvijay.

She went and stood next to Ranvijay; at the same moment vatsala informs gunjan that shukla sir is calling her.

A: gunjan, c'mon up.

G: madam mujhe shukla sir ne bolaya hai.

A: uday shukla se keh do k main auditions le rahi hoon.

U: yes madam.

T: aao gunjan.

Gunjan goes on the stage, Samrat smiles and gives a short wink to benji.

A: start!

SH: madam, gunjan to play mein hai hi nahin to wo kaise ga sakti hai.

T: yeh humari problem hai Sheena, you don't worry.

N: yeh Sheena ki bachi Na, isko KO Nupur dose Dena hi padega.

B: haan Nupur, yeh kuch zyada hi uchal rahi hai, isko ek morena dose de hi dete hain.

M: nahin sirf morena dose se kaam nahin chalega, isko excel dose bhi dena padega.

B: good idea dude.

Gunjan and Samrat sings, Samrat asks gunjan for a dance and they dance along the song. In the end when the stop, Samrat pulls her towards him and eye-lock.

All give a huge applause, with cheering and whistle's.

"Gunjan- Samrat! Gunjan- Samrat!"

S: "Wow, Maine kabhi ye kyon nahin socha k mera aur chashmish ka naam ek saat kitna cool lagta hai."

When benji comes from behind.

B: dude naam hi nahin balke tum donon bhi saat mein awesome lagte ho.

M: hmm, agar sam ki language mein bolen to "januable".

S: thanks dude but januable to''

M: chashmish hai, jaante hain, ab please chashmish katha se pehle miss aha k results sun lo.

Samrat smiles.

A: results kuch iss tarah hain k na sirf musical play balke non musical mein bhi yahi couples honge.

T: Leads Mayank and Nupur ki jagah''..

N: kya? Hum leads nahin hain, yeh sab uss Mayank ki wajah se hua hai.

A: koi aur nahin le sakta.

N: kya?

A: leads Mayank aur Nupur hain, yaani- varun aur esha- Mayank aur Nupur hain.

N: yeahhhh.

She hugs benji, dia and gunjan then went to hug Mayank but realizes he is Mayank so instead hugs Samrat who was standing next to Mayank.

Mayank smiles and winks Samrat.

S: congrat's Nupur.

N: thank you Samrat, main to dar hi gai thi by god.

A: and second leads jhanvi and rahul.

T: jo k maine Samrat aur sheena ko banaya tha, aha ne usse badal kar'..

A: Samrat aur gunjan ko de dia hai.

Everyone applaud and whistled.

B: three cheers for sajan.

N: sajan?

Everyone looks at him.

B: Samrat aur gunjan ko combine karke, nickname sajan.

N: wow benji.

B: three cheers for sajan'..

Hip-hip- hooray,

Hip-hip- hooray,

Hip-hip- hooray.

Three cheers for Mayank and Nupur'.

Hip-hip- hooray.

Hip-hip- hooray.

Hip-hip- hooray.

T: and last lead bhi wohi rahegi, Ranvijay and dia.

A: aur haan, iss baar Samrat aur gunjan ko main supervise karungi, Mayank and Nupur ko uday and tamana will supervise Ranvijay and dia.

T: back to work now.

Precap: last rehearsal and Samrat feelings.

At night;

Bhushan mansion

Nupur was memorizing the dialogues and uday was helping her, dia was sitting on her couch filing nails and gunjan was not around when it started to rain outside.

U: Nupur, dekho bahar barish horahi hai.

N: haan, chalo bahar chalte hain, dia tum bhi chalo.

D: nahin doll, tum jao maine abhi apne nails file kiye hain, mess up hojayenge.

U: deeds nails hain koi baal thodi hain jo mess up hojayenge.

D: dodo!

U: sorry deeds, chalo ND.

D: ND?

U: maine Nupur di ko short form karke ND kar dia hai, kaisa hai?

D: whatever!

N: chalo uday.

Both of them went outside and dia went to sit beside the window to see the rain.

Guys i will continue this from samrat and sheena's breakup, if that is ok with u all then reply.
guys i seriously want your comments please! good or bad but atleast tell me. please.😭

Edited by demi lovato - 16 years ago

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Anjalika Khanna thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesum start..........
continue soon............. and PM me when u do...............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome continue soon and pm me ,if u can :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great start👏
Uhh i too hate that sheena
Wo sammy ko phasa rahi he
yeh sam benji ke ghar 12 baje benji ko bahut doubt ho raha tha
I agree with benji ..Gunjan ko choose kar yaar
pata nahi yeh sam ..Dhakkan kyun ban raha he
Awwww benji aur sam ke paas alag room he😳
He yeh mesmerised eyelock session dia dekh rahi thi😳
Arrrgh sheena pe mujhe itna gussa aa raha he😡

Aww so sweet dia gunjan ko protect kar rahi he
Hey yahan dia gunjan se jealous nahin he kya?😊
awwwwwwwwwww,sammy ne kyun correct bola😭
Fab update
looking forward for the next one
Luv
Lipsa

Edited by Lipsa_mjht - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww so sweet😳
mein to dar hi gayee thi usne jo correct bola😆
Hey gunji kya samjhi
Mayank bingo
par wo reasonpata ne hi wala tha par yeh vatsala ko toh mein
loved the benurday scene
was hilarous
Miss aha?kyun wapas aa rahi he?
oh nupz wohi jo tumhain seedha kardengi. almost died laughing
Bilkul sahi
yippee miss aha to gunji ko hi choose karegi na shayad
Yeaaaaaaaaa re-auditions
Who s raj sameer
No uday in auditions😛

Well loved ur update😊
eagerly waiting 4 next one⭐️
luv lipsa

Edited by Lipsa_mjht - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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benji is so sweet .but sheena i hate her she is so mean
love it
soon update
Anjalika Khanna thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohhhhhh gr8 part................... n miss Aha returnig that would be awesum................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowowow i love your parts 1 and 2 its amazingggggg
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh! wow!!!!!!plz do cont soon...........waise uss sheena ko toh sirf nupur hi theek kar sakti hai.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyy!
its awesome yaar!
loved both the parts!
plzzz continue soon.....

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