Rahul-Muskaan/Atul-Anjali FF: Rishta IMP NOTE PG30

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

wow!!

dat was te best one so far...

so pure, so romantic!!
it was just perfect...had everything..

right from the lovely RM..

to KK scenes.....awww!! both of dem r choo-cute!!
dey r compatible..

i luved all d dialogues...!!!

too gud!!
duniya kitni advance hogaaye hai...dil ka connection...

and finally muski responded!! wow!
wat had actually happened to her?

y is she like dis?

and finally pyaar ki baaat aa he gaaye!!
wonderful part...!!
thnx for the pm..

update soon!!
wat is khushi gonna do now?

-Sanjana

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

Komalllllllllllllll!!!

It was awesome yaar!!!
The RM part cute as always!!
and awww.. Muskaan responded..
wonder where Rahul is.. 😕

and Rahul ki gandi soch.. ROFL.. rahul hai hi aisa.. lol

KK part funny!! lol..
Painting... WOW.. urs is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Finally update milla.. haha...
Thanks for PM!

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#153

HII KOMZIE

REAALY LIKE RM MORNING SCENE

WAS A SWEET PART!!

AND OF-COURSE KK!!

WITH THEIIR NOK-JOKS...LOL!!

LOVELY!!

NICE ENDING

WHEN MUSKAAN GIVE A SIGN...

MOVING HER HAND!!

AND IN CAFETERIA...

HUN KUSHI KI KARUGI??...LOL

CANT WAIT

CONTINUE WHEN AS POSSIBLE

SEE YAA

LOVE U A LOTT!!

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MrsMaanKhurana

@MrsMaanKhurana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#154

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Okay i know i know. Im commenting after a long long time but i was so busy lately. Sorry Komzie.

Now, lets see. You should really just get this story published because it is amazing!!!!!!!! I mean it keeps getting better and better. I mean you write the most perfect parts. I love all the Rahul Muskaan flashbacks you do but when is Rahul gonna show up? Oh, and Muskaan responded. That made me jump up and down on my chair. And kunal and khushi are the most cutest thing ever. I mean they just make me smile like when i smile at rahul and muskaan after a cute scene, kunal and khushi make me smile. God, i love them. Continue soon!!!!!

Edited by MuskaanGarewal1 - 16 years ago

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#155

Wow. Now that was a part..filled with all the elements. So beautiful and calm. Every scene so perfectly written. Be it the AA..or the KK one..the TACOS part 2...and sp. the Muskaan moving part..it really touched my heart. It was so sweet.

But as usual the RM part was the best, I mean..every word..she hugging him..he paitning..she watching him..their cute kisses. It potrays such innocent love..which i really love..awww..i loved it jaana!! :))

Laptop aa gaya hai..Ill be coming twice a week..just to chk on updates..and update my FF as well :)) TC:)) Love you.

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StarshineHues

@StarshineHues

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

Komzie, thank you so much for putting my name in your dedication. Squishy, squishy, squishy, jhappis. 🤗 🤗🤗
Seriously, you have no idea how much that means to me !!

Firstly, your painting looks gorgeous !! You've captured the sunrise so beautifully, its like I'm standing right in front of it and watching it. Truly, truly, truly magnificent !! 👏

And the part toh rocked as usual yaar !! I loved RM's scene on the terrace...........so perfect and so sweet. You've captured their bond so well.......I can totally imagine them right in front of my eyes.

KK were totally fab !! I love their little fights, so like RM, yet so uniquely KK. And Kunal was hilarious with his musical chor. Rofl !! Seriously, Kunal and Khushi have so much of spark, so much of spunk, its impossible to not love them.

And the Tacos reincarnated !! Sigh.........such a fabulously funny scene.......I miss Tacos so much !! Loved the trio, specially the bit in the end where Khushi gives them this weird look. Lmao. 😆

And the highlight for me was the part where Muskaan finally responds to Khushi. That was so, so touching !! I loved how you've shown this mother daughter bond between Muskaan and Khushi, even though Muskaan is unconscious. Seriously, seriously, amazing !! And I loved how you wrote sab ke reactions, right from Anji's emotional outburst to Atul's positivity and confidence, and Kunal was FAB in his way of handling Khushi. Super, super, super part !! 🤗

I think this is a bit too long.....I have a way of going on and on na ? 😆 Put up the next part soon, totally waiting for it !! AND MY QUESTION- where is rahul ? Jaldi, jaldi, jaldi !! I want the part and my answer !! 😆

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MelodiousDreams

@MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 16 years ago

#157

Gabbar!!!

This is a pretty prompt reply, na? Better than last time!

First of all...Muskaan responded!!! *does a happy dance* I'm SO happy! Thank GOD, yaar...I can't even begin to explain how relieved I am that Muskaan is finally gathering the strength to communicate with and support her daughter...

Backtracking now...

The Atul-Anjali part was lovely. A completely Awwww-worthy moment! I wonder how Atul manages to concentrate and drive properly with Anjali resting her head on his shoulder like that...It was so sweet...*smiles*

Every time these parallel RM and KK scenes happen, I always end up getting this huge smile on my face during the RM parts, and then I end up laughing during the KK parts! LOL! At least Muskaan sleeps normally on the bed...Kunal's sleeping position sounded so funny!

ROFL at his "BHOOT!!!" and "CHOR!" panic attacks! That was great!

Komz, you and your dialogues...Especially Kunal's...I was laughing so much! The "ice box" and "musical chor" lines were hilarious! MY room is like an ice box from time to time...I could understand Kunal's irritation perfectly! 😆

Khushi looking like a clown with all that paint sounds so funny!

*gasp* Hummingbird...I'm here, too! Aaaaaah, thank you SO much, Komzie!!! 🤗 🤗 I'm their neighbor, I sing, and I do yoga...How cool is that! I actually looove to sing, but I don't do yoga...Not yet, at least! I might take some classes sometime, though!

The sparks are beginning to fly between Kunal and Khushi! Or at least it is becoming harder to disregard for both of them...Ooooh! Can't wait to see what is coming up!

LMAO at TACOS part 2! 🤣 Too good! I hope to see more of the TACOS-2 interaction in the future!

Last but certainly not least...Your painting is BEAUTIFUL! *applause* I LOVE it!

Love you TONS, Gabbar! Once again, thank you soooo much for actually sticking me in this story...I was very surprised!

PS - The last time I speak in the Kunal-Khushi-Borna scene, it says Pari instead of Borna...Typo??

Edited by PaNa4ever - 16 years ago

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Anisha Sharma

@MrsMallikGrover

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#158

Hey Komal!

Wow your painting was marvelous! I loved it!

And well to the part! It was marvelous too! I loved the RM part..and i just love how you explain everything in such nice detail..I really cant wait till Muskaan gets better..She finally repsonded and i am sp happy about that!I cant wait till Rahul comes! Where is he! Its so sad man!..i will seriously be so happy that day! And lol..KK are the thing man..just the second version of RM..seriously and there perfect! Love their fights and their little touchy moments!

Lol BHOOT! Hilarious

Thanks for the PM

and please continue soon

Luv Anu

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

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Posted: 16 years ago

#159

reserving my spot b4 i get too late in commenting and btw i skipped ahead to look at ur painting and its just marvelous!!!

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Komal!!! U just wow me every time!!! i absolutely love the way u write!!! Both serious and hilarious moments are so well writted, like the details with which u describe the way Kunal is sleeping- man i can just picture everything. and just loved that scenes between the 3 guys and when Khushi walks in and man again that painting was just WOW!!!! Loved the RM scene with the whole painting and all, i think u chose a very good painting for Rahul. And man Kunal and Khushi are my favorites and the way their story is developing i am just loving it!! Can't wait till the next part u have left me in suspense!!! :)

Edited by desigirl_18 - 16 years ago