mayur ff-never wnt dis 2 hpn NOTE-pg 149 - Page 72

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Posted: 16 years ago
Ur updating on Wed or Thurs
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Cant wait so long
U said u'll update on Mon na but
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Posted: 16 years ago
thats for u adi....afsha plz wait.....
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no preethi...on wed i gues or thurs
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Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

no preethi...on wed i gues or thurs

OMG long wait.... 😭😭😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
am gonna upd now!!!!within 15 min...but a short one...tomorrow i couldnt do so....am doing it now....
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love ur ff
please pm me next one!
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Posted: 16 years ago

chapter seventeen....
with the continuity of the last part....
nupur-hey its ringing.....
mayank-mmmh.....
nupur-leave me....she moved as soon as his grip loosend....with her face full of red went and attended the call...hello
otherside it was shilpa-nupur beta,so u guys had no time to call us huh....ok how are you both?
nupur-mom we are fine here...how are you all....just then when she was talking mayank came and hugged her.....nupur said mayank what are you doing?
shilpa-is mayank disturbing you a lot huh...
nupur-not like that aunty you talk to him here he is giving the reciever she tried moving away but mayank didnt let her he kept her arms around her continued to speak to his mom...
mayank-mom how are you?(as if not knowing her uncomfortness)
shilpa-we are all good over here...take care of you and nupur....dont trouble her....
mayank-acha mom i will take care of ur bahu...i willl not trouble her a lot...she is the one to trouble me....bye mom
shilpa-bye....
nupur-who was trying move now was in a damn angry on him hearing what he had just said....raised her voice am i troubling you...
mayank-ya nupur thats 100%percent true...now you were the one troubling me to move away from me...isnt it...
nupur-blushed with him saying that...mayank just stop it....
mayank-where to stop...i havent started yet...smiled at her smiling deeply....moved forward looking deep into her eyes...
nupur-took her path backwards putting her head down...she stoped him brininging up her whole strength....she holding her hands on his chest talked....mayank please don't play....we have planned to go out for shopping...so lets move ,we are already very late...she felt really hard to look at his eyes...
mayank-haan nupur lets go...but we can change the plan too....what do u say?he winked at her asking......
nupur-mayank,she was turned red yet couldnt control blushing...
mayank-enjoyed teasing her like that...let's go nupur....
both mayank and nupur went out for shopping.....they both left...but nupur doesnt know that mayank had great plans inorder to surprise her,....


they were travelling in a car...both were so silent...it was mayank to start up with...


mayank-nupur,
nupur-raised her eyebrows....
mayank-is this the first time you visit switzerland?
nupur-yes mayank,first time...you?
mayank-me too first time...but you no what i guess...he smiled at nupur...
nupur-she really admired him smiling and asked what do you guess....
mayank-we are the only couple going out....see around we can hardly find people...he kept his face sad....and said...
nupur-who didnt get him said,hey its shivering like anything then how can people roam frequently....
mayank-with his hands hit his head....saying oh god..
nupur-whats wrong with you mayank?
mayank-in his mind all are wrong nupur.....let me clear that....he moved a bit close towards her holding her with his arms around her waist...said you really dont get what am i talking about?
nupur-seeing him holding her...smiled,didnt dare to answer him kept her mouths tight enough to open.....
mayank-he said in her ears you know coming to honeymoon...no one go to see round places like us....
nupur-kept on blushing.....couldnt face him....
mayank-really admired her.....

the full day they hanged out with each other holding each others hands....both never had any hatred....both loved each other a lot...but in between some of the time mayank left her alone reasoning he had too make a call officialy...she was little bored without his company......the whole day he was teasing her....she too loved him teasing her like that....

on the way back mayank was smiling enough...they were now back to the hotel room....nupur and mayank entered their rooms...both got freshened up....just when nupur came back to their room she couldnt find mayank anywhere around....she just looked out room was locked...just then there was a knock on the door....she opened the door,there was a waiter holding a message on a paper.....please come to room no 356....

your's mayank.
hey whats wrong with him....she took that paper asked the direction to the waiter how to go to the room no 356...she went and knocked the door.....it was mayank who opened the door with bunch of flowers in his hand......with his smiling face....
(mayu holding this bouque specially for nupur)
next part on friday, wait for more mayur scenes.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
How sweet ! 😳

why didn't u PM me? :-((
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi anu!
very romantic part. loved it. waiting for the next part eagerly.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanky

How sweet ! 😳

why didn't u PM me? :-((

just now upd it kanky...

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