mayur ff-never wnt dis 2 hpn NOTE-pg 149 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awesome yaar . waiting for the next part . plezzzzzzzzz update the next part soon .

thx dear....i wll post as soon as possible
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
Hey,
You r really good-i'm in love with the story so far.
Please update it fast. Cant wait to know what happens next.
Thank you very very much and please update it as soon as possible.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: adefgh

Hey,

You r really good-i'm in love with the story so far.
Please update it fast. Cant wait to know what happens next.
Thank you very very much and please update it as soon as possible.

thx for ur luv with the story dear......sure i wll try to update within 2 days....i will make
a little longer one....keep on reading....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Hey,

i am adefgh -this is my other id.
Jus wanted to say-waiting 4 the upadate.
Hoping to read it 2moro.
Can't wait.
i think i'm addicted to mjht.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: luv-myur

Hey,

i am adefgh -this is my other id.
Jus wanted to say-waiting 4 the upadate.
Hoping to read it 2moro.
Can't wait.
i think i'm addicted to mjht.

ur name???sure am updating 2day around 7.00 have a look at it....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

My name is Sareena.

From U.S.
Edited by luv-myur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
great sareena i will update 2mrw mrg....sorry for delay...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48

Hai friends this part is more filmy in style I think so read it and I hope so u guys will enjoy reading it…..

Chapter three:

Gunjan asked her mom to relax…..shilpa who came there seeing her friend worried went near her and pressed her for a support to overcome her fear and to be confident….she gave a look as if all will end up in good way……and with confident….. see all were coming near mandap…..hearing a voice they looked at the door…its rahul coming with their parents…..all were relieved of their arrival…..

gunjan thought how disgusting rahul is…..he doesn't even care to say sorry…..and all were smiling whole heartedly…..but he didn't even care about their feelings…….during the encagement ceremony itself she was annoyed of him he was flirting with all girls when he was standing outside the house…..even with he was showing his sheepish smile….and when he joined all inside the ceremony….he was like the only boy who is so good……she thought of that moment and said to herself how disgusting he is…..gunjan know that rahul is a great actor…..she talked to her sister…..she knows nupur was also not in study mind…but it was her parents forcing her….oh god this nupur also just nodded her head just because the happiness of her parents….why cant she think that's her life…..its she who will find difficult later…….she loved her sister a lot…she had been with her sister in all her decision nupur makes, but now gunjan couldn't make up her mind….she find something wrong inside her heart….the only onething in her mind was stop this marriage…but how could she do it…..now its really high time…she prayed god for some miracle to happen….and to save her sister…

Rahul is actually not interested in nupur…but the more he was interested in their richness…he don't have any choice of looking at her for once….but yes I will defenitley act like a good son in law for sometime and get all the wealth using nupurs name it was the target of him… he was cruel fellow…..now none know his aim…he was smiling of joy…as if he will achieve something really great within some hours….he took a promise to leave nupur after his aim had been successful…

Shilpa smiled and went to their family members were all are seated….samrat looked around and he couldn't sit in one place just said mom I will be back…don't search for me I will join you after the marriage is over and he went……..all were so interested in watching the marriage and when shilpa turned towards mayank he was busy with his mobile messaging….she just patted his shoulder and ask mayank what are you doing???she told mayank hey that rahul looks really good…..he is a good pair for nupur….he asked oh….so the bride name is nupur ahh…..and looked up and was shocked to see the guy seated as a bridegroom……

Samrat who was bored standing alone without any company was pleased to see gunjan….with no more intension he raised his voice hey gunjan…gunjan also was surprised to see her best friend in her sisters marriage came there with a loads of smile saying hai samrat….ur here u told you have some other important function…..and samrat stopped her and so am here for that important function…gunjan smiled and asked your alone here huh….samrat showed his mom and his family seated…she raised oh shilpa aunty is your mom….samrat noded with a smile….both were friends for a short period but nearly very close as friends…..so this rahul was the one your saying about????gunjan said yes samrat….he the one…I hate a lot….

there rituals were going on…..full speed ,they called for the bride to enter…nupur who was fully adorable was coming near with some scarity on her face was just stopped of a horrible voice coming ……she saw a handsome young man shouting at rahul…..all were shocked including mayanks family….suji was like what happened why was mayank shouting at him is anything wrong and gave a look to her husband purab who was also looking at her for the reasons,….mayanks mom stood and asked him mayank why are you shouting???dont you know whats happening and your ruining it all just calm down….mom how can I calm down…

Mom Its rahul????mom couldyou imagine he had been here for the second marriage he shouted as per he cant control his anger towards him…...Mayank relax which rahul your talking about be clear of what you blabber…..mom am not blabbering……he is rahul my college friend and he married dia who may be now suffering seeing him like this…he was married during the college days itself….now how dare he came here to marry another girl and spoil her life too…..nupur and her parents who was hearing mayank who was nearly shouting couldn't even imagine his words….gunjan came holding nupurs hand as a great support……..mr.bushan came near mayank and asked but how can we all believe in you???you have enough evidence…mayank who gave a dirty look…yeah I have more and just gave call to dia….and if you want I can get more evidences….am just saying it all to save your daughter….but you still believe in that culprit and gave his mobile to talk to dia…

Mr.bushan was shocked about the information yes "he is married"..he just holded mayanks hand for great support….

rahul who is standing there with a shock on his face that he had been caught….

Nupurs parent were thinking about their stupidness what would have happened to their daughters life if mayank had not been there…all the crowd who had been there started murmuring a lot……

nupur looked at rahul for an explanation,and how dare he came here to marry her…she was not in any mood to be there she just tried to move from that place slowly was caught by the strong and dangerable hands of rahul….rahul shouted with a strange look yes he is righ ….am married…but now I will marry her no one can stop me…..nupur was schoked…she was really having a hard time,she couldn't help her hand to take away from his….

Nupur shouted for help…they all couldn't give a glance of whats going on…they got up with mayank beeting rahul with full force as if he may kill him……rahul who was pulling nupur towards the mandap, didn't care of anything and he haven't noticed mayank coming there fully angry on him….mayank who got an idea of rahul was there now helping for nupur…..mayanks brothers Sammy and purab got their senses went and hold rahul ….purab gave a call to the police….

Rahul shouted hey if your not here all would have been done and now I would be the king …..i will not leave you and defenitly I will get her….nupur was really dumb….nupur was like am I the one who agreed to marry this stupid????cant he guess what he is talking…cant get through his words…she actually wanted to give him a tight slap and was satisfied to see the man who helped her to to done through her feeling had a smile seeing him slapping rahul…….

Rahul who was in high stupidity said now you may help her future I will see what to do????after that I will not leave you too…..hearing this mayank shouted and said you cant do anything and just in a anger overflowing him couldn't even control him just took the mangalsutra and placed it on nupur and placed her mang with sindhoor and said holding her now you cant do anything rahul she is my wife not only now but for my life time…..nupur was looking at the man she didn't even know who is he but now she is married to him….mayank too got his sense little later and realized what stupid thing he has done….he was like why was he feeling so much for the girl totally unknown to him….he thought to help her….oh god is that me who loosed the whole sense….he couldn't face all….nupur and gunjan were not in a state of realising whats going on still now nupur cant realize that she is married but she doesn't know who is she married……rahul couldn't even talk anything seeing the police…..he had been arrested…he shouted I will revenge you for what you have done……..mayank who holding nupur were standing there like statue…..

now what will happen next……hold on….hope you enjoyed…just leave a comment…..

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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
gr8 yaar
awesome one ...loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
hey!
nice part. very filmy style, I must say. 😆 but it was too good. 😊
continue soon.

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