Mere Saathi- AN FIC(DMG) part 21 pg 28 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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great part
cant wait to see what happens next
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Maddy and Javeria! Glad you girls liked it. Yeah I thought about how Nikita and Abhimanyu are like and how I would want it to be if I was married to someone and we kinda worked together. I am hoping to finish my degree in nursing next year. So we'll see in the future if I get in the same work/ personal life situation that Nikita is in.
I am glad you girls are enjoying the fic. I think it's very rare for a husband and wife to work in the same place and be successful unless they can seperate professional from personal life. I believe it's important to try to keep the sides seperated so there are less complications.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the PM It was really GOOD part!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Your welcome dear! Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this was amazing part... you are awesome.. pls continue soon.. cant wait to figure out what happened to niki and as everybody said loved the way they keep their professional and presonal life separate... thats the way i picture abhi and niki..... awesome :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww Thankz sweety👍🏼 thtz 1 awsome upd8!!!👏👏👏....I'm in lve wid Thiz Abhi!!!😳😳😳 + i loved d way Nikki told off Army!😉....Not bein mean or anyfin..but yaa....wen thinkin f tht pool scene, i think...wot she did is kk!😳😳😳.plzz post d next part soon....😳 or else i'll die f Curiosity!!lol😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for all the support will try to have a fresh part up soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey awesome part. Loved it. Pllzz continue soon waiting to see what happens next. Thnks for the PM!!!
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hey awesome f.plz PM me the next time u update.watitng to know how they both actaually got married AND acc to you why did abhi stop doing surgeries.cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for reading, here is part eight
She awakened in a bed with comforter covering her up. She got frightened for a bit. Where was she? The last thing she remembered was being on the street. She had almost made it home and then ..?

Nikita heard footsteps coming closer. She trembled with fear but then sighed in relief seeing Abhimanyu.

She frowned. What was he doing out that late? She looked at the time. It was now nearing four am.

" How are you feeling Nikki?," he inquired.

" Main theek hoon," she stated as she tried getting up.

" Relax Nikki. You got hurt. Kya tumhe yaad hai, kya hua tha?"

She swallowed hard. She knew immediately why he was concerned yet a bit distant.

" I wasn't raped," she muttered.

Abhimanyu sat down beside her and cupped her chin.

" Aaj ke baad tum itni dere akeli nahin aagoi," he said firmly. ( After today you will not go anywhere this late alone)

She nodded.

" Nikki tum meri sub se badi takat ho aur meri kamsori. I cannot lose you now or ever. Every sorrow and happiness we will share together. Can you promise me that?," he inquired.

She nodded.

" Main tumse vaada karti hoon Abhi. I will always share everything with you," she declared.

He smiled slightly.

" Good, now I want you to sleep," he stated.

" Leken mera ek saval hai. You haven't given me an answer of what I asked before.

Abhi sighed.

"If you are ready, I will tell you the story Nikki. If you rather get some sleep first…," he trailed off.

She looked at him firmly.

" If you are ready then so am I."

Abhimanyu took the next hour telling her how he was in love with this girl Alia back in med school. Her father was the dean at the teaching hospital nearby. Alia was only interested in being friends as she had her eyes on someone else. She ended up getting an opportunity abroad and returned two years later. She had married someone else but he had a heart condition which got complicated by his drinking and smoking habits.

" Alia brought him into the hospital I was working at. The damage was already done. Without surgery he could survive a bit longer. However Alia wanted the surgery done. She thought he could get better. We were able to remove some plaque but the arteries were already so clogged. He died within a week," Abhi said.

" Alia blamed you didn't she? I know she was grieved but her husband already abused his body," Nikita stated in disgust.

He nodded solemnly.

" My heart was shattered even further when she was diagnosed with stage one lung cancer. She didn't want my help. I still don't know if she got help. She crushed my confidence in myself and in what I thought I was born to do," he stated.

It was now five am.

" Abhi I hope you will continue to do surgeries. What happened in the past we cannot change. However from now I want to be by your side," she stated.

He smiled.

" I am so lucky to have you with me Nikki. I couldn't have done that surgery without you. Anyway how about you get changed and go back to bed? You have had a tough day. I'll be here with you in case you need to talk," he stated.

She got up and went to her dresser. She looked very pale and her head was aching now. She really needed some sleep and an ice pack. She turned to her husband.

"Pick something out for me," she pleaded.

He smiled slightly and picked out her pink pajamas. He always thought she looked cute in them, She wore them the first time he gave her flowers and the time she stumbled onto him from her window in Panchgani.

" Yeh lo meri pari," he whispered.

Her pain and sorrow from the past whole day seemed to vanish in that one moment as she took them from his hands. She locked eyes for a moment until she felt a pang of pain.

" Nikki! "

He quickly led her to sit down on the bed.

As he held her, she touched her white dupatta and saw the tear in it.

" I just want to forget what happened after you left the hospital. It was terrible. I am going to change then I want you to stay with me please Abhi!"

" Main yahan hoon na Nikki. I am not going anywhere."

She slept with his hand between hers. It reminded him of the first time he felt something for her. Holi had been the first time he felt something for this girl. Back then he thought he had been infatuated about something that could never become real. However now he was glad she was here with him. She hid her sorrows and pain so she could take apart his own burdens. A saathi like her was hard to find but here he had ended up with the needle in the haystack as his wife. Today Abhimanyu Modi truly felt like luckiest guy in the world.

He fell asleep beside her, his hand clasping hers.

(Haan Tu Hai plays in the background )

He stood there wearing all white and she appeared wearing a red sari. He gave her his hand and they danced. He twirled her around. She was all smiles and this made him feel elated. He whispered something into her ear and she smiled brightly. The next time she twirled around she didn't come back towards him but suddenly she crashed to the floor.

He awakened with a start. It had been a beautiful dream until his beloved had fallen like that. He groaned realizing it was probably after 10 am by now. He looked over quickly to see if Nikita was all right. She wasn't there. For a moment he got worried maybe they hadn't gotten married and her being with him in surgery and waking up with him had all been a dream.

Then she appeared in the doorway.

He sighed with relief as she stumbled back onto the bed. He got a hold of her and helped her lay down properly.

" I want you to relax. It's Saturday today. We will stay home today and I will make sure you feel much better by Monday," he promised.

She looked at him with concern.

" We must have so much to do. Do you think the covering doctors can take care of it?," she inquired.

" It will be all right. If not I will go see about the matter but you'll stay here and rest. We'll call your friends and they can stay over with you," he stated.

Nikita nodded.

" Leken kya tuhme khana banana aata hai?"

Abhi smiled.

" Well sweetheart before I met you I used to do everything myself. Now you are in my life so it will be more fun!," he declared.

She smiled.

" What would you like to have?," he asked.

" Hmm, mere pyare pati dev job hi tum bano!" ( Whatever you make my lovely husband)

" Ok I thought of something! I will be right back," he assured her.

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