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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: uhima

hey fren wow nice update yaar wht a proposal luved it do post ur next part soon tc!



Awww Thank u😳 Im jst glad u liked it😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Thank You Very Much For Sharing With Us. Awesome Part I love The Way They All Ask Girls For Marry .

Thank You For Pm & This Part.



Awww U are welcome and actually Thank u for ur lovely comments😳 Im jst glad u liked it😃U are welcome😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
Nadzzzz awesome part, it was superb and very cute.
Loved every bit of it, u r such an awesome writer😃
I jst luv muskis friends, it was so funny when muski told all bad things abt her and her friends turned it into social work😆They do have brains😆
ohhh ranbir bhaiyya khud pyaar kiya aur hamere bichare rahul ko itne din tak confuse rakha,
but loved their convo toooo.
the terrace part was so cuteeee and lovely😳
it was jst amazing and also how AA pruposed their lovers.😊
RM jst were so cute in this part. loved their hugs😳
Thanx for the pm
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Originally posted by: pari_smile

Nadzzzz awesome part, it was superb and very cute.

Loved every bit of it, u r such an awesome writer😃
I jst luv muskis friends, it was so funny when muski told all bad things abt her and her friends turned it into social work😆They do have brains😆
ohhh ranbir bhaiyya khud pyaar kiya aur hamere bichare rahul ko itne din tak confuse rakha,
but loved their convo toooo.
the terrace part was so cuteeee and lovely😳
it was jst amazing and also how AA pruposed their lovers.😊
RM jst were so cute in this part. loved their hugs😳
Thanx for the pm
love
pari😊



Awww im just glad u liked it😳😳 OMG thats like a huge huge compliment! Thanx man😳 lolz yeah kya dost hain😉 and rannu bhayya ki to wah bhai wah😆😆
Im jst glad u liked the proposals😃 and hugs😃

U are always welcome

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: love_KYPH

awesum update
cont soon



Awww Im jst glad u liked it😃 updating now😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

Surprise... Suprise... update😉

Recap: Angad-Armaan and rahul propose there respective girl and they all say yes… all are happy! (page 101)

Ab aage

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yyi6dx9hiYI[/YOUTUBE]


AR- Purple

AK- Pink

RM- Red

Song- Blue


Part 23

Angad-Kripa

Kripa and angad are sitting outide at the terrace watching the stars, hand in hand…

Angad smiles at her talking figure "yeh chand kitna khoobsurat hota hai na?" she says and he smiles, she had been talking from the past one hour and he was just listening, she turns to look at him smiling "kya hua? Kabse baatein kar rahi hoon aur tum ho ke chup chap sun rahe ho" she says making a cute childlike face, he smiles.

"kya kaha Tumne? Chand khoobsurat hai? Hai lekin tumse zyaada nahi" he says and she blushes and lowers her eyes, he makes her look up by her chin, she blushes.

"kitna sharmaati ho" he smiles "kripa agar tum mujhe nahi milti to patanahi main kya karta" he says seriously, she looks at him.

"sam se shaadi" she laughs and teases "angad, kehte hain ke jodian rab banaata hai… bas apne uss special insaan ko dhoondna humpe chorta hai… one way or the other tum mujhe mil hi jaate kyunki we were meant to be" she smiles and he smiles and they hug.

"uh… kripa" he says in a teasing angad kinda tone (oh how I missh that)

"hmmm" she replies still her head leaning on his shoulder.

"main soch raha tha ke shaadi ke baad hum honeymoon ke liye kahan jaayenge"

"honeymoon… honey ke saath moonlight me behet ke baatein karenge" she says innocently and he gets up, she gets surprised by his reaction.

"baatein karenge??? What do you mean baatein karenge?" he gives her a naughty look and she blushes.

"Angad… tum bohot shaytaan ho" she says blushing and pouting, he laughs.

"I know… lekin seriously kripa honeymoon me to masti banti hi hai na" he teases "main soch raha tha paris… wat say?"

she smiles "wow paris… hmmmm acchi choice hai"

"to pakka?" he asks excited and she laughs.

"angad shaadi to hone do" she laughs.

"hojaaaegi na" he gets close to her "bohot jald" he whispers and she blushes.

"kripa… I love you" he says and she looks at him, they share a eyelock.

"love you too" she says.

They have a loooooong eyelocking session then he starts coming closer, she closes her eyes and they passionately ALMOST Kiss lolz Muskaan comes.

"kripa… kripa" she shouts and AK get embarrassed and get up.

"kripa wo…" she starts then sees angad and smiles "oops sorry hun, main baadme aati hoon" she rushes out and kripa shouts for her but she was gone, angad comes from behind and hugs kripa "wo gayi" he says he's face close to hers "ab hum wo karein jo kar rahe the" he says naughtily and she blushes.

"Kiss chahiye?" she asks in a naughty tone and he says yaa, she pushes him and runs… he runs behind her, they keep running for sometime, then finally he catches her from the back and goes round with her and they laugh.

"angad utaaro mujhe" she says laughing, he puts her slowly down, they stare at eachother smiling… he goes close to her and slowly kisses her cheek, she blushes, he kisses her other cheek and she blushes more.

"ab mujhe meri kiss chahiye" he says cutely, she looks at him smiling.

"kiss chahiye??" she smiles "okay" she says and goes close to him and kisses his cheek, he smiles.

"itni jaldi kaise milgayi?" he asks her.

"itna cute face banaoge to kiss to milegi" she laughs.

"Accha wait aur bhi cute ho sakhta hai" he says and she hits his shoulder and runs away.

"Wo waali due hai okay" he shouts and she turns and shows him her thumb saying no, he runs behind her and catches her hand "kabhi mujhe chorke matt jaana" he says and she looks at the passion and intensity in his eyes and blushes, they share a eyelock.

Armaan-Riddhima

Riddhima is sitting in her room, armaan sneaks in and closes the door, shes shocked to see him.

"armaan tum?? Koi dekhlega to??" she whispers he smiles.

"meri would be se milne se kaun mujhe rokega?" he says and she blushes.

"haan haan whatever, kya chahiye?" she asks with attitude.

"oye hoye meri sweet si riddhima me attitude? That's new" he teases and she blushes "ya that's the one im looking for" he says and comes next to her she blushes.

"armaan…" she says as he touches his nose with hers.

"waise would be wifey main soch raha tha humaari shaadi hone waali hai to kuch baatein discuss karlein?" he says in the end showing a serious tone and she gets worried.

"kaisi baatein?" she asks worried.

"dhahej ki" he says seriously and her face goes dull, he starts laughing "look at your face man… tumhe sachme laga main tumse dahej maangunga?" he teases and she blushes at her stupidity.

"mujhe bas apni riddhima chahiye, smiling and happy" he says and she smiles "waise aur bhi bohot kuch chahiye but…" he says naughtily and she looks at him in disbelieve.

"armaan…" she hits his arm.

"abhi ke liye installment mil sakhti hai?" he asks and she looks at him questionably "ek kiss yaar" he says and she smiles.

"kiss wiss sab shaadi ke baad okay" she says smiling and he looks disappointed.

"please ek… just one na, plz" he says and she laughs.

"armaan tum kiss maangrahe ho ya ek baccha lollipop?" she laughs and he looks annoyed.

"tum hamesha mera mazaak uraa ti ho, mujhe nahi baat karni tumse" he turns away annoyed and she smiles at his cute childlike angry look.

"armaan" she calls but he makes a face and doesn't look at her "armaan.. armaan, suno na" she says but he acts really cute childlike, she goes next to him and kisses his cheek and he looks at her shocked and blushing.

She laughs "tumhaara chehra to dekho, bilkul ek cute se bacche ki tarhan" she says pulling his cheeks and he smiles.

"thanx" he winks and she smiles.

"ab jaao"

"Itni jaldi? Nahi abhi to mujhe tumse bohot si baatein karni hain" he says and jumps on her bed, she smiles and nodds her head.

"kya baatein?"

"general haaw"

she laughs "haaaw… wo kya hota hai?" she teases and he gives her a funny look.

"waise riddhima aaj tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho" he says and she blushes.

"thanx"

"ab isme thanx ki kya baat hai? Kehte hain dosti aur pyar me no thank you no sorry" he says and she smiles.

"accha, aur kiss ke baad tumne kya kaha?" she asks and he realizes.

"Oops, so… I mean dash dash samjh jaao okay!" he laughs "next time nahi hoga" he says and she smiles.

"Armaan ek baat poochun?"

"poocho"

"tum hamesha mujhse itna hi pyar karoge na?"

he smiles and gets up, he goes close to her and cups her face "isse bhi zyaada till the end of time" he says and they share a passionate eyelock.

Rahul-muskaan

Muskaan was sitting in the lounge watching tv with sum of her cousins there, rahul comes and calls her from one corner, she indicates she cant come but he insists so she sneaks out… they go to the garden.

They stand silently for a while then rahul takes her hand in his slowly and kisses it, she blushes.

"I love you" he says and she smiles.

"thori der pehle hi to kaha tha"

"I know but ab itne time baad kaha hai to kehte jaane ka jee karta hai" he says and she smiles.

"I love you too and always will" she says and they share a long eyelock session.

All three:

AK- "kabhi mujhe chorke matt jaana" he says and she looks at the passion and intensity in his eyes and blushes, they share a eyelock.

AR- he smiles and gets up, he goes close to her and cups her face "isse bhi zyaada till the end of time" he says and they share a passionate eyelock.

RM- "I love you too and always will" she says and they share a long eyelock session.

You and I

Will be together til the end of time
I promise I ll never let you go
Now that i know you love me

AK- he holds her hand and brings her back out to the terrace.

AR- Armaan sees tears AGAIN in her eyes, he rubs them and tells her with love.

RM- Muskaan breaks the eyelock and looks down which causes a strand of her hair to come on her face so he strokes it with love and passion.
Chalun mein teri peeche peeche
Baki sare bandhan tod dun
Jo tere tak na jaye
Us raste ko chord dun

RM- there was a little fire in the missle of the garden, the workers were feeling cold so probably warming up then left it there, rahul takes her there with his hand and goes round the fire promising to always be with her, she just stares at him with love.
Har khwab mera Umeed meri
Mein tujhe jod dun

AK- he pulls her close to him and they sway as he tells her everything with his intense eyes.

Sab Riste Naaate Haske Tod dun
Bas Tujhse Dil ka Rista Jod dun Jod duun

AR- He kisses her hand and she hugs him.
Sab Riste Naaate Haske Tod dun
Bas Tujhse Dil ka Rista Jod dun

RM- muskaan gets really emotional at his vows, she mutters a "I love u" and hugs him, very passionately, they feel eachother.
You and I
Will be together til the end of time
I promise I ll never let you go
Now that i know you love me

AK- Sit hand in hand and talk about the future.

AR- He carries her in his arms and they share a eyelock.

RM- They sit on a swing and recall all there moments.

Jud gai jud gai
Tujhse yeh meri zindagi
Mene to paai tujh mein
Meri har khushi

AK- he cups her face and tells her… she blushes.

Keh gai keh gai
Mujhse khud yeh baatein teri
Aksar Khayalon mein hoon
Tere mein kahin

AR- sit by the window and look at the moon, she keeps talking and telling him how always she dreamt of her dream man, he stares at her with love.
Dekhun mein tujhe
Lamha lamha Har pal
Apne sene mein rakhun
Har subhah tujhse milne ki chahat mein jagu
Ek tu hi to hai hothon ki hasi
Chehre ka noor tu

RM- He looks at her face and she blushes, he caresses her face and she feels something weird… he goes closer to her and she closes her eyes not able to keep her heart in place with him so close, he kisses her cheek and she blushes (there first kiss)

Next day;

(Angad and armaan had already arranged for there marriage aswell, they called shashank, atul, anjie and her nani and abhi-nikki, angad had informed kripz family, his mother and sam aswell… naina was still not so up for it but for angad she decides to cum)

Ridzi is excited to see them shocked aswell…

"Anjie? Papa// tum sab yahan/' she asks confused but excited and hugs her sis.

'haan ab meri iklauti behen ki shaadi ho aur main naa aaun?" she teases and ridzi looks shocked.

"what?' she looks at armaan and he smiles, she asks him 'reli?" distantly and he nodds, she's shocked but happy, she blushes till she turns read and then they take her away saying she cant meet him for a day.

Kripa sees her mom-dad and bro and is also shocked when she learns that she was getting married, she pulls angad aside.

'tumne mujhe bataaya bhi nahi/'

'surprise tha" he says and she looks at him with pierced eyes.

'but main… itni jaldi…" she says and he looks worried.

"kripa plz aisa matt kaho, I love you" he says and she starts laughing.

"apna chehra to dekho, anyways maine kab mana kiya? Waise tum kaafi chupe rustam nikle" she says when girls come and take her away, she cant meet him now.

Sab Rishte Naaate Haske Tod dun
Bas Tujhse Dil ka Rista Jod dun Jod duun

AK- He stares at her putting mehendi and blushing by his gaze..

Sab Riste Naaate Haske Tod dun
Bas Tujhse Dil ka Rista Jod dun

AR- armaan stares at her lost like he was the first time, again he was mesmerized, they keep looking at eachother.
Bas gai bas gai
Mujh mein abb hai yeh bas gai
Saanson se aaye har dum
Khusboo jo teri

RM- Rahul was passing by when he sees muskaan chatting and laughing, he hadn't seen her doing that for a long time, she was showing her friends the ring he gave her… he recalls the time she hugged him when he proposed, her smell, her touch everything always mesmerizes him.
Chaa gai chaa gai
Mujh per Yeh jo hai chaa gai
Badli hai shayaad yeh to tere ishq ki

AK- Kripa looks at him and asks what happened and he tells her she was looking very nice and she blushes, he imagines him close to her blowing her hair, he smiles.
Yehi hai mere dil ki hasrat
Pheron tujhse baatein mein karun
Ho sari baatein tujh pe khatam
Aur tujhse ho shuru
Phir waqt bhi yeh ruk jaye wahin
Ho jab bhi saath tu

AR- He imagines sitting and chatting with her at the seaside… her cute sweet talks that had him bowled over her...

AK- Angad feels everything frozen around them while he gets kripa up and they dance smoothly.

RM- rahul recalls the time when they sat together and talked and became friends, for true his life started with her and ended with her!
Marriage day;

Sab Riste Naaate Haske Tod dun
Bas Tujhse Dil ka Rista Jod dun Jod duun

All the girls dressed in Red lehengas come down looking gorgoues, while the boys in sherwanis stand down and watch them mesmerized and excited.
Sab Riste Naaate Haske Tod dun
Bas Tujhse Dil ka Rista Jod dun

The girls sit next to there respective groom and they steal glances at eachother…

Angad "Im so excited"

Kripa "main bhi, aakhir humaara sapna poora ho raha hai"

Armaan "finally aaj humaara sapna poora hojaayega, we'll be one"

Ridzi blushes "haan aaj hum ek pavitra bandhan me bandh jaayenge"

Rahul "Life ne humaare saath kitne khel khele… itna confusion create kiya but finally hum ek hone jaa rahe hain"

Muskaan "hmmm lekin khete hai na jo ek duje ke liye hote hain aakhir mil hi jaate hain, and we are meant to be" she says and he smiles.
You and I
Will be together til the end of time
I promise I ll never let you go
Now that i know you love me
You and I
Will be together til the end of time
I promise I ll never let you go
Now that i know you love me

Okay guys I had planned to write a short scene for AK and AR since I have been concentrating more on RM in the past few updates but then ended up on a longer then I thought! I just hope you liked it, next part is Wedding! So get ready guys!

I hope all the AR-AK fans are happy this part had more of them!

Luv u all

Nadz😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part!!
Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
One the most AMAZING parts ever...!
Cute writing and AMAZING song selection...
I am really looking forward to the wedding...lets see how beautifully you depict it...
Of course no pressure from me...😉

Will be awaiting your update!
Love,
Imane

Edited by imane568 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey that was an awesome part.

Loved it very much. the song was superb.
cont soon,😊
Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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hey dear awesome and lovely part
love AK and AR with RM scenes
can't wait for the wedding
pleaseeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
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