Adolescence of Love - Chap15/Pg136 (11/29)

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#861

Originally posted by: esquisse
Look who's here ;)

Who?🤪

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pickytg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#862

Liar liar pants under the snow.

...chotu ke janamdin par toh update karna tha naa...kaha ho aap??

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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#863

Yaar chottu ke bday par baking karri thi main 😆 after suchhhhhh a horribly long weekend!!!

tehe!

and tune siggie change kiya wifey!!! =))) avi bi!!!! the *** fever is on!!! - all over again 😆

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pickytg

@pickytg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#864

haaa...cuz mein avatar dhundri..rohan-ishan wala ud gaya..toh yeh dikha stock mein :) khoob miss hota yeh banda..and waapis aane ka naam hi ni lera ..uff!

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pickytg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#865

Jhooth bole koel kuke...ache koel ka suno..update kab karogi yeh bol bhi do...??????

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Reine

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Posted: 14 years ago

#866

OMGG!
I can't believe it has taken me this long to finally read the whole part properly!

NJ, I seriously lovee this fic!

Although I only have a few minutes before I have to go, Im still gonna post in a short comment (short by my standards loll) [ *EDIT: now that i look at my comment, it is definitely NOT short =/]

Aitee, I really liked the whole part! I hope I don't have to say anything else now!

JK loll =P

thank you soo muchh for RM. altho they weren't technically there, I did like how you've shown Muskaan's relation with both rahul as well as riddhima. like you said, shes the brother's girlfriend as well as the sister's friend..which I think comes across really well

A-N along with Armaan and atul were greatt! loll its kinda cute how abhi doesn't want to share the attention. and i agree with armaan! abhi had so many chances to be witty but seems like ms.chicken is a reason good enough to not be able to get witty with comebacks loll

Coming to armaan-riddhima, well i can only say one thingg..I want to read the next part ASAP! loll they're pretty intriguing. i cant say much about them without typing out an essay loll. and now that i mentioned riddhima, i have to add, the way you've shown her equation with rahul is something Im waiting to know more about! lol I've always read in ff's how rahul has known armaan's past and is a confidant but now that rahul is riddhima's brother and perhaps knows her much more than others, i really find that interesting :)

aitee i have to go now if i don't want my friends to leave me alone while they go out loll

Cheers,

Sakshi

P.P.P.P.S: I hope the next part comes soon! (Altho now that i have taken such a long time to type out this simple comment on what you've already written, im sure it takes a lott more time and definitely a lott of thoughts to write a part. so Im gonna try and be patient =P)

Edited by ..Sakshi.. - 14 years ago

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 14 years ago

#867

still waiting.......😍 😍 😍 😍

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#868

Shall we move further with this one? Please.

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roshni_A

@roshni_A

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#869

hey ,

i am a silent reader of ur ff......... its just wow ..............its due of update relly long ................pls update............

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#870

Hey nj, read ur post in AN writing challenge so thought u might b baak frm ur not so long hibernation...lol...*jst kiddin* bt seriosly do u hv any plans of updating this one any soon??????????