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Hi Nj,
Glad you updated the part today. Great gift for Shraddha and US tooJ
Hmm..about the part…I 'v learn't something here today….As I had never read any of your fics in parts..but was lucky enough to read it as a whole …. I never had to comment or scrach my head and try prediciting future parts or plots or any other stuff by myself..but it came to me almost served in a plate. But now when I do read them part by part and Analyse predictions or judgements it is so tricky and to top it all ..You never cease to surprise me here…do you? Here I was day dreaming about How AR will react, meet, Ridz-Nikki encounter..some embarressing moment or anything in the world..Except This!... You almost burst the bubble…But that is exactly the beauty of it…Unpredictablity is much better sometimes.
The start with the interlude was confussing for me..and to top it was my impatience…but when it did end with RM conversation indicating Riddhima's inclination towards this one..it all made sense . I could relate to Ridzi's dilemma from two lines worded by muskaan -' The clash of Lord passion…Lady will' and "The timeless battle of head versus heart...". Secondly , her own words of confession -'It's as if the script chose my pen' They definitely had silently reveiled her inner feelings.(oh by the way… loved the mention of harry potter here… especially fred and george..they are my most favourite may be even more than harry or ron)
Oh! Abhi-Nikki again back to square one…I guess there is a lot to be cleared here. Dud! Even I would have been triggered by his attension towards my 'friend' more than me 'even when it was I who risked myself to except the invitation for a game which is as alien to me as hip-hop to Cave man' if in nikki's place.
Ridz –Sumit…. Was that an indication to something in future. Well again I started with my analysis..seriously..I need to stop that!
Ok..But that brief encounter surely made me feel Sumit had some thing for Ridz..I won't say it is liking..too early to speak ,but a concern (as indicated in your previous part too ) or something close to attraction may be and at the same time there was somewhere a recoil from Ridz in case of sumit which was very clear from her actions.
Now our Main protagonists..Armaan and Riddhima. Here though I was dissappointed with no AR ..but still enjoyed them seperately . Armaan in denial about him affected cauz of Riddhima's 'indifference' or 'Absence' i should say..And Riddhima's confusion, and then… her leaving again after she almost reached the venue… As far as their actions are considered ..I feel them to be reasonably right in their own places and that was very natural from both of them. True they have Ego issues..but who doesn't!
But I was surprised how Armaan, finally accepted to himself what he wasn't ready for…though silently that was! Hope he gets to know tht Ridz did visit may be indirectly but she did.
It was good to see Anji there ..and more interesting was how these girlfriends knew each other so well (and Wow! they know exactly how to lucrate Anji)….Same goes for the Guys too..courtesy A-A-A(3A) discussion after the Match.(Glad they Won it..you almost scared me with those initial exchange of words between the three chaps)
One more thing before I forget to mention..Here comes again my presumptions. I thought Ridzi's parents were not with her..so may be they aren't alive or something..all her previous actions made me see it in that light..But today ,when she spoke about RM, and muski and her teaming against Rahul..She mentioned her parents and I was like again tangled in this web. Hope I can understand this whole sequence in a big picture soon.
All I can say is Very well penned ,and a Wonderful part.Plz continue soon this time. Wating eagerly for this normal life to be added with some zinggg.
Thanx.
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