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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: princess52

hey.....
i just read ur fff.....n oh my goddddd i just loved it seriouslly

ur ff is so sweeetttt n so funny .....i just feeel likeee likeee keeep on reading itt

i soo love armaan n rahul godhh they crack me upp.......
the black magic thingyyyyy hahahahah i was litreally laughing the whole time i just couldnt stop thinking abut it....
n thn thee wieght thingyy hahahahaha whn he asked her i was lkee......danmmmm...couldnt just stop laughingg
i realllly love ur ff
plzzzz updte sooonnn...thnk god i read ur ff
i still have to read ur other ffs as welll
how many do u have i have read 2....




thanks for the comments habs...i am glad you enjoyed reading this ff...armaan and rahul carck me up too..totally enjoy writing about them... yes rahul is a bit funny in this FF...and my ff made you laugh that's so sweet of you...

loads of love...

Caramel...

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Debadrita Saha

brilliant part dear
loved it
continue soon
n thanx 4 d pm





thanks for the comments dear....i am glad you enjoyed reading this update....

loads of love...

Caramel...

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: urvisaini

hi

i'm a silent reader
and loved your FF
pls post the next part quickly




thanks for the comments dear....i am glad you enjoyed reading my FF...and i am hoping that you won't remain silent anymore....

loads of love...

Caramel...

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Caramel,
The part was really nice, I really loved.
I hope Armaan will realize soon that he really loves her.
The dream sequence was so romantic but on the same time really bad as he got slap, I was glad that it was his dream.
So what's next?? Ridhima was standing at door??? I wonder if she heard something.
Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish




thanks for the comments kashish...yes he'll realize soon...and the slap..haha..let's see if she heard or not...i am glad you enjoyed reading this update...

loads of love...

Caramel...


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

aaa add me to yhr pm list .. it was great




thanks for the comments mischa....i am glad you enjoyed reading this FF ..will pm you..

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vysh_violet

This is great! Looking forward to reading more of it.😊




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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aati1429

nice part.. loved the ideas rahul give..
amazing





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loads of love...

Caramel...

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!!

just catch up with your ff........

it was rocking ......

really rahool is really cool man so funny...

that black magic and all stuff is really ..🤣

and AR ohhh armaan is really sweet....

oh i so hate abhi....but the way they feed him wow...😃

plz..plz update next part soon......and add me in your pm list...





thanks for the comments dipu...I am glad you enjoyed reading this FF...rahul and armaan are cool ..the black magic thing ..haha..even i had fun writing that update....everyone hate after wht he did to riddhima....will pm you..

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Caramel...

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Posted: 16 years ago

here's part 6 after a long time and i don't know how it has turned up as i wrote what all came in my mind...but still hoping that you all will enjoy reading.it ..*keeping my fingers crossed*


Part 6

"I don't know if I love her or ''"armaan stopped as he saw her standing at the door'

"riddhima '" he whispered seeing her looking at him and before he could say or do something riddhima slammed the door on his face and locked herself inside the room..armaan tried talking to her as he banged the door but there was no response'

"riddhima please open the door ..please riddhima..let me explain.." he tried so many times to make her talk to him but all vent in vain'in the end he had no other option but to open the door with the duplicate key and as he was about to open the door he heard riddhima's voice'

"armaan..can we talk about this later..please.." .. the pain in her voice didn't went unnoticed by armaan and he knew that she was crying but he also knew that one wrong step and everything will be over so without saying anything more he left the house'

Armaan and rahul went to the office but whole day it was just riddhima in his mind'. He wanted to talk to her but was scared as he remembered how shocked she was hearing him.. armaan was trying his best to remain calm but when he couldn't he picked up his bag and left the office without even waiting for the office hours to finish..rahul saw him leaving the office and knowing his state of mind he didn't even stopped him'

Armaan entered the apartment and pressed the door bell but getting no response he got a bit panicked 'he shouted her name "Riddhima.." but still no response'he was about to call when Mrs. Khanna, his neighbor, came with his house keys..

"armaan'your house keys".. she said handling the keys to him..

" and where is riddhima?.."

"I don't know ..she handed me the keys and told me to give it to you.." she said and left '.

Armaan opened the door of his apartment and saw everything was in proper place..he kicked the wall in frustration and sat on the sofa holding his head as tears rolled down his eyes..

"how could you just leave me like this..why riddhima?.." he was mumbling this to himself but stopped when he felt someone's hand on his shoulder'

"riddhima.." he looked up with a smile on his lips but his smile vanished as he saw rahul standing in front of him'

"rahul she left ..she left me like everyone .. first mom left me and now riddhima' she too left me ..i don't want to lose her..rahul ..i love her ..." rahul had seen him so desperate , so weak when his mom left and now after so many years he was seeing him in this condition'.. " you know rahul the whole day I have been thinking about her and now I know I can't live without her ..i need her rahul'" he said as rahul saw his teary eyes'

"you really love her..armaan" he asked to see him nodding'

"so what are we waiting for..let's go and find her.." he said and the faint smile was back on armaan's lips'

Four hours passed but still there was no sign for her..they searched every possible place where they could find her but there was no sight of her' it was now close to midnight and even rahul had lost some hope of finding her but armaan knew he'll find her and she is somewhere here only when he saw her at the same bridge where he saw her for the first time' she was standing at the bridge looking at the sky...

"riddhima .." armaan whispered looking at her face with had so much pain ..he had the feeling of guilt inside him as he knew that it's all his fault..he is responsible for her condition'riddhima turned and looked at him and the tears which she was holding back from so long came out from her eyes'

"why armaan? ..why?.." she whispered with so much pain' looking at her miserable state anyone could have guessed that she was crying from several hours and with a thin shawl wrapped around her the cold weather wasn't doing anything good for her'

"riddhima please listen to me..it's not what you think'I was just.."

"I was just what armaan..you know I thought you are different from other's ..but you have proved me wrong' you are just like them'.thank you for everything Mr. Malik'" she said and turning around she started to move'

"it's not me but rahul..he loves you.." he said without even realizing what he just blurted out as riddhima stopped in her tracks' realization came back and he closed his eyes in frustration , smacking his forehead ' "what did I just said..rahul loves you'oh god I am so dead now..rahul is definitely not gonna leave me now..but I had no other option'if I had told her that it's me who loves her ..she'll definitely leave me and this is something I don't want'sorry rahul'" he thought as he saw her coming towards her'

Rahul who was sitting in the car a distance away , saw her coming towards him and got out of the car.. "hey riddhima'everything fine now.." rahul asked smilingly but seeing the look on her face he stopped himself from saying anything further'

rahul I thought you are a good man but you too'" ' hearing her he looked at her confusingly as he had no idea what she was saying'

"riddhima are you alright?... " he asked narrowing his eyes'

"you are asking me rahul..i thought you are a nice human being just like armaan..but no even you are like other'playing with women "'

"but What's wrong with playing with women ..i am playing with them since I was a small kid..and even now I play with them'"

"WHAT?..." armaan and riddhima both shouted together looking at him in shock ..this was something unexpected for armaan too..

"yeah.." he said rolling his eyes'. "armaan why are you surprised even you play with women..just last week we were playing and I'"..riddhima turned and looked at armaan in shock as he shook his head..

"rahul are you out of your mind'.kya bakwaas kar raha hai'" '

"main bakwaas kar raha hoon..acha 'last week who won the match..it was me' now don't say that I am lieing.."

"match 'which match?.." armaan asked as riddhima looked at both of them'

"the basketball match..which I won..remember'" 'now armaan realized what he was talking about and smacked his head'even riddhima understood what he was talking all this while and felt like killing him'.

"Enough rahul'don't try to change the topic'"

"Change the topic?'which topic are you talking about' is there any debate going on'?..."'this was like the limits for riddhima'she was so pissed off that she was about to slap him when armaan came in between and stopped her'

"riddhima let me handle this'" he said trying to calm her down '

"no armaan this is between me and rahul and I know how to handle it myself.." she said and looking at rahul she asked him.. "so.. you have feelings for me 'right..you love me.." she asked looking at rahul as he looked at her confusingly.. he was shaking his head but stopped when he saw him standing behind her , pleading him to say yes by joining his hand' rahul was fuming in anger looking at armaan as now he understood what all was going on'. but he can't say no to him so the shaking was changed to nodding'

"yes riddhima I love you..aur mujhe tumse pehli nazar mein hi pyar ho gaya..jabse maine tumhe dekha hai..mujhe aur kuch nazar nahin aata..har jagah sirf tum-hi-tum nazar aati ho' yaha bhi tum yaha bhi tum har taraf bas tum hi tum, main pagal ho gaya hoon tumhare pyar mein'riddhima..i have fallen truly, madly deeply in love with you ... I love you from the bottom of my heart'.i mean main tumhe apne tan, man ,dhan se bhi zyada chahta hoon' aur mein jaanta hoon ki tum mujhse pyar nahin karti or na hi kabhi karogi'par pyar one sided bhi to ho sakta hai na'and I can spend the rest of my life thinking ki maine bhi kabhi kisise pyar kiya tha..that even I loved you' and now it's your turn..say something.." rahul said in a single breath as riddhima looked at him stunned'even armaan was too stunned to say something as he had never seen this side of him before'riddhima was still trying to digest what all rahul said a moment ago when armaan pulled him and took him to a corner'

"are you out of your mind..and what is all this..tan, man dhan, you just had to say a simple yes..and you'Arggh'.start using your brain rahul'. brainless creature'" armaan was freaking out thinking what if riddhima actually believed him and even she starts liking him.. he looked at rahul who was standing in front of him looking at him so coolly as if nothing happened'

"chill armaan'she is not going to fall for me'" he said keeping his hand on his shoulder as armaan started biting his nails looking at riddhima who was still standing there in shock'

"but how do you know'that she won't fall..what if she actually'"

"armaan it's a tried and tested formula..she is not going to fall for me..infact she'll try to stay away from me just wait and watch..you know this is one of the cheapest filmy dialogue which men use to impress women and women hate this to the core..so just relax..trust me'" seeing the calm and composed look on rahul's face even armaan believed that everything going to be fine'

"btw armaan, you know what does this mean.. right..this time you are so gone buddy'"rahul smirked looking at him'

"yeah..yeah'I'll do whatever you'll want me to'yehi sunna chahta tha na.." rahul nodded grinning even more after hearing him'

"so what should I do now?' " armaan asked looking at her who was still looking shocked'

"you just take her home.. she is not looking good and we'll think about this later"..rahul said giving the car keys to armaan..

"and what about you 'aren't you coming?..." armaan asked seeing him going away'

"no..you just take care of her ..i'll meet you tomorrow'" rahul said and left them alone'

Armaan cleared his throat, closed his eyes and after playing to god started moving towards riddhima'he stood in front of her and called her' "Riddhima'" he said but seeing no response from her , he shook her a bit as riddhima came out from the shock'

"armaan..rahul'he loves me and what all'." She was stammering as she was looking was rahul' "where is rahul?..." she asked looking around as armaan was just smiling looking at her cute- shocked face'.

"rahul..left and I think we should go home too'it's very cold outside.."

"but rahul'"

"riddhima..we'll talk about this at home..i am feeling hungry and I know even you haven't eaten anything'"

"but'" she tried speaking but stopped when armaan glared at her'

The whole journey was a silent one that's what riddhima thought but the fact was throughout the whole journey riddhima was cursing rahul' "I still can't believe I cried the whole day for rahul..idiot sturid moron'.he loves me and I thought it's armaan'I said so many bad words about armaan without even listening to him' I am sorry armaan'and that rahul..you just meet me again..i swear I am gonna kill you'mujhe filmi dialogue sunata hai'what the hell does he think of himself that I am gonna get impressed by him..my foot'rahul you are gone'" she was muttering this under her breath without even realizing that armaan was listening to her all the way'

Riddhima tried talking to armaan about this but he always made some excuses just to avoid talking about this as he himself had no idea what is he gonna tell her' and riddhima too felt it's not worth talking to armaan and she need to talk to rahul personally'

next day as riddhima was busy preparing breakfast the door bell rang'knowing very well that it's rahul..riddhima made her way to open the door but armaan reached their first and opened the door '.rahul entered his house and without even waiting for armaan to say something made his way towards riddhima....and before she could say something' "riddhima..i know after last night ..i mean it's so awkward to stand here and talk with you..but I just wanted to say this.." he said and closing his eyes he took a deep breath, composing himself he opened his eyes and looked at her as she was just staring at him' "riddhima I take my words back'what all I said yesterday..just forget about it'please riddhima..i know you must be hurt but please riddhima..i love someone else..i met her yesterday aur mujhe usse pyar ho gaya hai' you know love at first sight'so I hope you won't take this in the bad away'and"'..SLAP'. without uttering anything she left the two as rahul stood there rubbing his cheek'

"thank god she didn't took it in a bad way'" rahul said as he heard armaan laughing behind his back' he turned and looked at him and seeing the anger on rahul's face he stopped all of a sudden'

"why did you stopped armaan..hass le..aur hass..it's all your fault ..here I am trying to help you and you are laughing at me'" rahul said as if he was really hurt'

There was a moment of silence as they both kept looking at each other but when they couldn't take it any longer they started laughing holding their stomach'.

"what happened to you man'and what is this new thing..you and love'" armaan asked in between his laugh'

"I'll tell you in the office ..you won't believe last night I saw her and she saw me and we both'" he said to himself as he was in his own world and went down towards the car'

As rahul left armaan entered the bedroom where he saw her sitting in some deep thoughts'

"riddhima are you okay..?.." he asked her as to see her smiling faintly'

"yes armaan..i am fine..you should go..you are already late'"

"are you sure..if you want to talk..i mean'"

"no armaan I am fine'"

"okay'" armaan said and picking up the bag left the house'

In the evening he reached the house and pressed the door bell and not getting any response he felt weird as this had never happened before'he asked his neighbor but even they said that they have no idea'he tried one more time and was about to call rahul when his cell rang' he looked at the caller id but it was an unknown number'. He picked it up and was about to say when'

"waiting for riddhima?'" he heard someone saying this on the other side'as he heard him laughing'

End of part 6

Hey people' '.hope you all enjoyed reading this update'and this time no excuse for delay it's completely my fault but I'll try to update the next part quickly😳'.

PS : i PMed everyone but still if i have missed someone then do tell me ..i have to go so it may be possible that i have missed anyone...😳

Loads of love'

Caramel'

Edited by Caramel_21 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

haii dear😃

woowww that really a very mindblowing update yaar
enjoyed every bit of it !!
U know I was like 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 by seeing the way Rahul proposed Riddhima!!
that than ,mann n dhan is really spectaculous 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 u can only write that words yaar 😃🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣😃
n that ending . . hope nothing will go wrong with Riddhima!!
continue sooon this time na'
will be waiting for ur updates!!!
Takecare . . . Lots Of Love 😃
Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago

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