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Posted: 16 years ago
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soo cute..i loved it continue soon pm me wen u update plz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelz

soo cute..i loved it continue soon pm me wen u update plz



k sure ill pm u
glad u liked it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 2

Half of the college day has passed buh MayUr didnt get time to talk as such coz of the long dragging lectures!!!

Finally,Dey got a recess.

Comin out of the class:

Nupur: By god!!!So boring classes.

Mayu:Well well,Subjects leney se pehle sochna tha.

Nup:Mayank,Is se behter tha ke tum mujhe console kardete ke 'Koi baat nahe.Shuroo shuroo mein its borin' ETC!!!Leken naye.Acha ub mujhe butao.Cafteria kaha hai,I need juice.Da lectures have drained me.

Mayu:Seedhe jao.Turn ri....

Nup:Uff Mayank!Mera matlub tha mujhe waha le ke jao.

Mayu:Buh mujhe library jana hai.

Nup:Kuon??Tumhary aur tumhary GF ke milney ke secret place hai kya?

Mayu:nahe Nupur!Mujhe parhna hai.

Nup:Ohh acha.Tou woh tou baad mein bhe hosakta hai.Actually woh kya hai na mujh se akeley nahe kuch kiya jata.Koi hona chahiye jo meri baatein suney!!u knw...Tou plz canteen chaley.I promise,Kam bolney ki koshish karo ge.leken aggar tum naye gaye tou mein tumharey peeche library mein bhi....

Mayu:Naye naye!!Chalo chalo!!Cafeteria chalo..

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Cafteria:

Both sittin & eating.

Mayank:Okay so teme abit about ur self.

Nupur:Okay!!I jus shifted here from Morena.Parents passed away in a car accident 5 years ago.I live wid my Cousin kam Brother ziada Udday bhaiya & my sister GUNJAN!!

Mayu:M sorry abt ur parents

Nup:Me 2!!!!Buh neways now u teme abt urself

Mayu:M live wid my mum.Mum & dad got seperated wen i was 10.Buh my mum is the best mum in the whole world.She's my world to me.

Nup:Bus,Dats it???

Mayu:Kya matlub?

Nup:Matlub koi larki sharki....??Koi tou pasand hoge na?

Mayu:naye.Mujhey merey type ki ab tak koi naye mile!!

Nup:Acha tou kya hai ap ki type.

Mayu:Umm!!!i believe beauty is in simplicity.Bholi bhole ankhein.Jab woh hasey tou violin bujey...Jab woh....

Nup:Bus bus!!!samajh agaye..Mayank,Jab tumhey aisi larki miley tou mujhey zarur milana..hmm.Abhi chips khao.Thandey horahe hai.

Mayu:Mein kha chuka aur ub mein chalo,library jana hai..Talk to u later.

Nup:K,C u around.

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Later dat day:College day has passed

Mayank Got a bit late doin work in the library.Lookin at his watch

"Shit!!m late.Maa phir ghussey hoge"

He comes out of the library wen he sees Nupur sittin on the Stairs.

He goes to her.

Mayu:Nupur.Tum is waqt yaha.College tou kab ka over ho chuka hai?

Nupur:i know buh mein kya karo.Actually mujhey raasto ka as such pata naye hai na tou udey bhaiya ne mujhe lene ana tha per woh ab tak naye aye hai.Zarur Raastey mein kuch free ka khaney ka mil gaya hoga.Foran khaney lage honge.

Mayank:Ohh..Nupur is tyme pe akeley college mein rehna.U knw india ke halaat...I can drop u home if u want...

Nup:Naye mayank!its fyn.

Mayank:Formal honey ki koi zarurat nahe hai.chalo.

Nup:Acha,Chalo,

Mayu:dats more like it....

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Poorey raate nupur bolti gaye bolti gaye,Aur mayank bechara sunta gaye.Buh sumhow Mayank wasnt irritated by her talks.He enjoyed dem..Filmo se leker Poorey jaha ke baatein nupur kargaye aur mayank sirf sir hilata gaya.Finally ghar agaya

'Ohh!!mayank tum bhe na kitna bolte ho.Mera ghar agaya aur mujhe pata bhe nahe chala",Said nupur

Mayank:Haan.bilkul sach kaha.

Nup:neways mayank.Thanku so much.Ao ghar mein coffee peelo,ab agaye ho tou

Mayank:Phir kabhe,Rite now m gettin late.

Nup:As u wish & thanks

Mayank:Pleasure!!

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Do comment or critisize.😊
Edited by muneefah - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwwwww...the last part was cute...LOL!! Nice update!!

waiting fr the next!! Hurry UP!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
ohh, nice part....already luvin' it👍🏼

hope u continue soon...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheena_12

Awwwwww...the last part was cute...LOL!! Nice update!!

waiting fr the next!! Hurry UP!

aww..
m glad u r likin it..😃
will update soon
😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh wow nice ff yaar . just read the 2 parts plzz continue soon. x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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muneefa sweety...youre ff is fab.......
mindblowing really....
sorry for the late reply...i thought that i had already commented but it slipped my mind i guess..
awesome job...keep it up...n do pm me when u update...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey..........muneefah we met on the paradise
so here i am with my comments
i luv ur ff
i m glad its not love at first sight for mayur
they should find solace comfort in each other gradually
do pm me next time
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HIII READ THE PARTS!!
LOVELY FF!!
CNT SOON SEE YAA!

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