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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: neha9


hey its my sis idea! 😆




SO WHO TOLD U TO FOLLOW ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT, dun temme u do EVERYTHING as mallika says 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: neha9


Kritika ur too much really, and yes he is dead! 😛



hehehe im 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 1000000000000000000000 much but HES NOT DEADDDD
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Posted: 19 years ago
and by the way

😛 >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>> this isnt an EMOTION TO TELL PPL THE MAIN PERSON OF THE STORY IS DEADDD

its should be >>>>>>>>>>> 😭 or >>>>>>>>>>>> or >>>>>>>>>>>>>> 🤢 BUT NOT >>>>>>>>> 😛

VERY HAPPE HUH?

😆
Edited by kool_gal - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
oooops i forgot i wasnt supposed to tang karoing u today but OH HEY, u didnt post 2 parts did u?? 😆

*****EDITED****3 I MEAN 😆
Edited by kool_gal - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: neha9

sweetheart its not the same one. 😆 this is the one where Aaliya and Josh stay. 😆 and i will try and post one more part today! 😛

😆 LOLZ!!! thatz gr8 but imma still hate it cuz angad traped in another hotel if he would have stayed in the beautiful 1 nuthin would have happen 😆!! nvm i take that back itz a neha story n n*e thing iz possible in a neha story lolz! n*e wayz plz do try 2 post 1 more part today i would seriously appreciate it!!

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Pyaar Ka Pal: Part 18

Kripa sat crying. After a long period of three days Kripa had finally taken some type of action. Kripa, had for the past three days laid in her bed, not eating, drinking, talking, sleeping. Doctors said it would even help if she cried but three days nothing. She didn't react since the bomb blast in Italy. She was back at London the following day living with Angad's Dadi. And finally after three days she sat up and cried for hours holding Angad's picture. And no one stopped her because she needed to cry, let it out.

Finally after hours of Kripa crying Dadi came in and sat beside her. Kripa put Angad's picture down and looked at Dadi.

"Are you ok beta?" Kripa tried to smile and nodded. "Come on freshen up and then eat something, you haven't eat for three days now. Come on." Kripa simply nodded once again, and went into the washroom to freshen up. Kripa came back out wearing a white pants with a white turtle neck. Tying her hair up she went out side for dinner. The house was dark expect for one light in the dinning hall. Dadi stood in white as well setting up the table.

"Can I help you Dadi?" Asked Kripa weakly.

"No beta, I'm fine." Kripa sat down while Dadi went back to the kitchen. Kripa looked around when she spotted a large frame of Angad. The picture must have been from at least three years ago. Angad looked younger, less mature. The wrinkles near his eyes weren't there yet, which proved he had worked hard in the past years, ignoring his health. Kripa got up and walked to the picture covering almost half of the wall. Kripa ran her pretty fingers across it, and then remembered when the picture was taken. A year before Angad disappeared for three years Kripa and Angad met. They were going around the city when…

"Hey Angad! Look photo sessions!" Said an excited Kripa.

"Are you mad Kripa? I'm the last person who would look good in pictures, I hate pictures, and this is a full photo session, never!"

"Oh come on Angad. It's free of cost, we just need to go in and take pictures. Keep them if we like them, well I know I will, but you can throw them away. Come on for my sake!" Kripa gave Angad her begging eyes, and a cute puppy, "I know you love me" face.

"Oh fine!" Sighed Angad, rolling his eyes.

"Don't roll your eyes at me!"

"Kripa, shut-up ok. Your making me do something I wouldn't do if god told me to do."

Kripa stood there her arms crossed in front of her body, yet her eyes, soft and relaxing. She leaned in and whispered, "Then why for me?" And then walked away.

At the time Angad loved Kripa, but Kripa didn't realize how much she felt for Angad. She loved him but as a friend. Angad shook his thoughts and walked into the mini studio in New York. What are they doing in New York? Kripa had wanted to move away from London, away from her parents so she decided to come to New York, Queens in search for a college. That's where she met Angad again. He was in New York for a college project, according to Kripa. But really he was under a mission.

Angad and Kripa waited in line for about fifteen minutes. Kripa had two cones of chocolate ice-cream while Anagd just watched her eat. Finally there turn came and they both were asked to change. Seconds later Kripa stood there in a black jeans and a black turtle neck, boots which made her look almost an inch taller. And to add to her glamour she was given a leather jacket, of course black. She looked at her self in the mirror, fixing her hair, when she saw Anagd come out wearing black as well. He wore a baggy v-neck shirt and black jeans, half tucked in and half un-tucked. He looked dashing. Relaxed, charming, in such a way any girl would ready to take him away from the world and make him hers. And that's what Kripa wished for as she looked at him dazed at him. He pulled up both sleeves just slightly under her elbows and then looked up at Kripa running one hand through his hair.

They both looked at each other without saying a single word, until the photographer came there. Angad and Kripa came back to earth and stood next to each other as directed. The photographer, who was Italian, black hair, blue eyes, dressed in a casual pair of jeans and a blue shirt, yet carrying him self in such a way that made him looked relaxed. He observed them for thirty seconds. And then spoke; "Madam, how about you put the jacket away for now." Kripa nodded and put the jacket on a stool near by. And the session started.

The session started with pictures of Angad and Kripa together. First pose, Angad and Kripa stood back to back, hands interlocked. Second pose, when the photographer told them the position both Angad and Kripa seemed uncomfortable. But they had to, Angad stood behind Kripa both arms around her, kissing her cheek. But they weren't as uncomfortable as they thought it would be. The third and last pose together, Kripa and Angad sat on a bean bag, cheetah design, once again Kripa sitting in front of Angad, almost in his lap, and both his arms around her.

The last two pictures were taken of Kripa and Angad alone. Kripa sat between a few million teddy bears, holding a large one in her lap, arms around him smiling like a small girl. Angad on the other hand, sat on a marble floor, one leg stretched out while the other one, knee pulled up, his elbow on his knee, and his hand curled in, with the knuckles on his head. Shoulders slightly bent, and a smile, more like a grin on his face, and *click*!

Kripa stood in front of Angad's picture crying once again. Angad had listened to Kripa.

After the photo session was done, Kripa and Angad changed and went to have lunch until there pictures developed. After having a nice lunch at a small caf in New York they both went back to collect there photos. They got two copies of each picture. Kripa really excited. While Angad, just stood three feet away, not wanting to look at the pictures. "Ae, Angad, come on, they came out really nice!"

"No thanks!"

"Uff…" Kripa stomped to Angad and Stood in front of him, her back almost against him. She took out the pictures and made him look at them, and Angad actually liked them. "Now tell me," she turned around, "how are they?"

"Well, I don't know about you but I look pretty good!" His voice was naughty and he walked away.

"Angad, I hate you." She stomped her feet like a small kid whose mother refused to give her chocolate. "Angad!!!" She ran behind him and stopped him. "Who asked you to take these pictures."

"You did."

"Then?"

"So, you can't change reality."

"So you mean I'm ugly?"

"Of course…"

"Angad?"

"See, your ugly, it's just that my presents makes you look beautiful!"

"Angad, I really hate!"

"Good!" Angad continued to walk sipping on his coke, he turned back to look Kirpa still standing there looking at the pictures. "Kya hua? Meri baat itni buri lagi?" He walked back to her and saw the picture she was looking at, his picture alone. "Kripa? You here?"

"Ya, Angad meri ek baat mano ga?"

"Kya?"

"Enlarge this picture and frame it some where."

"Are you mad? Never."

"Kyun, if you think your so handsome you should."

"No Kripa, I take that back, I'm ugly, hideous, your beautiful and gorgeous. Happy?"

"Angad I know I'm beautiful, but you don't know how handsome you are!" Angad rolled his eyes and snatched the second envelope out of her hand and walked away saying-

"I'll keep those!"

Kripa ran her hands over his face once more when she felt Dadi's hand on her shoulder. She quickly wiped her tears and turned around.

"Are you ok?" Kripa nodded and walked back to the table. She finished her dinner and robotically walked back to Angad's room, where she was living at the moment. She opened the door and started to look through her stuff and finally found the photographs from the session. She looked at them and then holding them close she cried, Why did you leave me at this point Angad, why? Throwing the pictures on the floor she laid on the bed crying holding a pillow. "Why did you do this to me Angad, why?" She screamed, "Why? Why me god. First my parents and now Angad, why?"
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: kool_gal




SO WHO TOLD U TO FOLLOW ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT, dun temme u do EVERYTHING as mallika says 😆 😆 😆

WELL i respect my sis, i do what she says 99% of the times!

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: kool_gal

and by the way

😛 >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>> this isnt an EMOTION TO TELL PPL THE MAIN PERSON OF THE STORY IS DEADDD

its should be >>>>>>>>>>> 😭 or >>>>>>>>>>>> or >>>>>>>>>>>>>> 🤢 BUT NOT >>>>>>>>> 😛

VERY HAPPE HUH?

😆

why im just happy my sis is going to be beaten up! 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: kool_gal

oooops i forgot i wasnt supposed to tang karoing u today but OH HEY, u didnt post 2 parts did u?? 😆

*****EDITED****3 I MEAN 😆

posted two!

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetchick786

😆 LOLZ!!! thatz gr8 but imma still hate it cuz angad traped in another hotel if he would have stayed in the beautiful 1 nuthin would have happen 😆!! nvm i take that back itz a neha story n n*e thing iz possible in a neha story lolz! n*e wayz plz do try 2 post 1 more part today i would seriously appreciate it!!

lol thats true! and i did post one more.

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