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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ILuvArjun

OMG OMG OMG OMG...

lekha..u knw wot makes me smile..dunchya??
1st ur poems,then those diamonds for new thread...then mickey...now ths...👏👏👏
MAIN HOON NA!!!!
ahaaaaa...*SIGH*..ma coochicoo..SRK And..cutiee MAYU in a combo...😳😳😳
muahxxxxxxxxxx to u janu...mujhe tumhari tarah..pix post karne nahi ate. comments main..buh here's a hug*HUGS*🤗
FAB FAB FAB FAB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND WOT IS THS...do i hv to tell u to add me in PM list....???
hmmm...
mayu ko thapadd....hehehehe...nups...kya baat hia??
toh voilins...kab bajenge????
can u belive it..i read all updts so fast.....heehehe...greedy..
do cont and pm me...
now i'll gv u a title..hmmmmm meri..PYAARI PARI..hwz it???
LUV ya
nihu


bolne ki zaroorat nahi nihu cause this was a start because you inspired me to do it because you are the kind of person who appreciates good work an d most of all cause you are a truew friend
Edited by lekhaishwar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Part 4 and Part 5(long part)

Next few days pass with real fun and frolic Mayank, Gunjan, Trishala, Mayuri, Sammy are planning to go out for the weekend Mayank knows that Raghav Datta and his men will be on the trail of gunjan and the gang so he asks Nupur to come with them so that in case there is any situation she can take care of them

The gang r sitting and discussing as to which place to go

Mayank - humein is weekend Kahin Jana chahiye kyun???

Nupur- sure we can go to Goa vaise bhi hamari college holidays dene wali hai and I don't mind Joining you guys

Gunjan- so set hum sub goa jaa rahe hai Mujhe mayank ke saath packing karne Jana hai so see u guys later

0 Sammy- Mujhe mom ke liye paying guest dhoond na hai aur phir hum challenge

Mayank - Sammy if you don't mind main tumhara pg ban sakta hoon and I would love to meet your mom

Sammy - whoa toh tum ne mera ek kaam aasaan kardiya phir chal Na ghar chalte hain

Mayank- tu ruk Mujhe office mein kuch kaam ha mein abhi aaya

Sammy - cool


Office

Mayank - excuse me Mujhe samrat sharma ka information chahiye

Mayank us printout paar picture dekhkar vahin khad reh jaata hai

Mayank - toh itne din main apne bhai ke saath tha aur Mujhe pata hi nahi chala

Well he goes back to the gang and they notice he is a little sad

Gunjan- mayank tum itne udas kyun ho kya baat hai???

Mayank - apne papa ki yaad aagayi bas

Nupur - bus ab is bechare ki jaan loge kya?? Tum sab ghar jao aur hum kal gunjan ke hostel ke saamne miltein hai fine at 11:00 am sharp

Sammy - bye mam bye guys chal Mayank

On reaching home Sammy sees us ke ghar ka fuse nahi hota hai

Sammy '-shoot maa ne bola tha ki fuse theek karo tum andar jao mai fuse theek karke aata hoon

Mayank enters he sees a lady who is setting candles because there is no light

Mom -samrat kitni baar bola hai tumse ki fuse.... (Realizes he is not her son) kaun ???

Sammy - aap ka naya paying guest oh mom yeh mayank hai mayank maa

Mayank - Namaste auntyji sam jaldi packing kar kal jaana ha goa

Mom - holiday ke liye jaa raha hai iss baar fail hua naa toh main......

Mayank -aunty main hoon naa aane ke baad us ko padhaoonga

Mom - chalo dono so jao kal nikal Na hai tumhein

Next day

Mayank - uth naa sam ( idea clicks ) voh us ke kaan ke paas jaake chilaata hai SAMMY

Sammy - uff kya hai ??

Mayank - bewakoof yaad hai na aaj goa jana hai 11 bajne mein sirf 2 minute baaki hai

Sammy - chal jaldi chal please humein ladkiyon ko naraaz nahi karna chahiye

Yeh argument khatam hone ke baad mayank Sammy hostel ke bahar pohante hai aur

Sab apni manzil ki ore nikal jaate hai

Goa scenes

Sab jab goa mein land hotein hai tab airport se nikalte samay ek freak accident group ki in charge

Miss nupur dhamake ke saath gir parti hai

Sab chinta mei doob jaate hai not knowing what to do lekin mayank uses his brains and runs to her rescue

Mayank - aap theek toh hai naa??

Nupur- lagta hai moch aa gayee

There is a brief eye lock session between the two

And both imagine violins playing in the background( for my dearest friend NIHU)

He picks her up ( kya karein romantic sequence ki aadat pad gayi hai)

** Back ground music***

Pehli Nazar ne Kaisa Jaadu kar diya

Tera Ban Baitha hain Mera Jiya

Jane Kya Hoga ,Kya Hoga Kya Pata

Is Pal Ko mil ke aa Jee Le Zara

Mein Hun Yahan Tu Hain Yahan

Meri Bahon Mein aa ,aa Bhi Jaaa

oooo Janejaan Dono Jahan

Meri Bahon Mein AA Bhull Jaa

oooo Janejaan Dono Jahan

Meri Bahon Mein AA Bhull Jaa

Baby I love u

Har Dua Mein Shamil Tera Pyar Hain

Bin Tere Lamha Bhi Dushvar Hain

Dhadkanoo ko Tujhse Hi Darkar Hain

Tujhse Hain Rahatein

Tujhse Hain Chahatein

Tu Jo mili Ek din Mujhe

Mein Kahin Hoo Gaya Lapata

OOOo Janejaa

Aur dono us background music mein mann hi mann mein muskuratein hai aur the gang ke khayaal

The gang- yaar yeh toh sach Mein Gaya (man hi man main)

SAMMY - GUNJAN

Sammy - gunjan tumhe kya lagta hai mayank aur mis nupur ki jodi acchi lagi naa??

Gunjan - un k baat chodo apni socho . kuch seekh mayank se duffer romance hi nahi karte

Samrat- yeh ilzaam main nahi seh sakta(drmatically😆😆🤣)

Gunjan - God is duffer ka kuch karo

Edited by lekhaishwar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
awesum meri jaan
i am the first to comment *pats my back*
wow ....totally gone after reading that sng..
mayank turning more and more romantic...by god !!!
kash aisa sach mein hota
u write beautifully...mast update tha
loved it jaani..
tooooooooooo good !!!!!!!!!...awesum job
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

awesum meri jaan

i am the first to comment *pats my back*
wow ....totally gone after reading that sng..
mayank turning more and more romantic...by god !!!
kash aisa sach mein hota
u write beautifully...mast update tha
loved it jaani..
tooooooooooo good !!!!!!!!!...awesum job


HEYA
mere andar ek creative keeda ghus gaya hai toh ultimate parts me writing you guys commenting
len den ka mamla hai bus me give part you give comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
awesome man.......plzzzzz update soon.pm me.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
haiyeeeeee..........main apne dreamworld main kho gayyi tumhara update pardhke...........d mayur scene was sweet..........and d sajan scene was funny.........yaar nxt time have more of sajan scenes..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
heyyy
very nice part...
loved it..
plz continue soon
plz pm me then
thnx for the pm
luv
komal
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: komal793

heyyy

very nice part...
loved it..
plz continue soon
plz pm me then
thnx for the pm
luv
komal


thanx bol ne ki koi zaroorat nahi komal dear it is ma pleasure writing for all of you
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: lekhaishwar


HEYA
mere andar ek creative keeda ghus gaya hai toh ultimate parts me writing you guys commenting
len den ka mamla hai bus me give part you give comment

u continue writing mayur parts...i'll continue giving u lots of comments
[heheehe..i am greedy when it cums to mayur 😳]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lekha kya update that hugs*** behna and claps*** u rock !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved this line god is duffer ka kuch karo lolz its fab contine soooooooooonnnnnnn loving it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for the pm !!!!!!!

luv u

hema
Edited by hema_sajan - 16 years ago

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