ff main hoon naa PART 14 PG 36 * PMS LATER* - Page 24

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Posted: 16 years ago
hiii lekha!
really sorry for not commenting on parts 11 and 12....was on a vacation....
anyways both the parts were awesome, fantastic!
loved them both alot......
thank god nups was fine......
mayu n nups ki shaadi....lol...can't wait for it
thanks for the PM
conrinue soon......
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Posted: 16 years ago
edited my post at page no. 33....plz check...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 13

Before you start reading this I would like to say a big thank you to meela di & Nihu who are two of my closest & sweetest friends@ IF and they have written great updates of Crazy Luv this part is especially for you meela di hoping that this boosts your morale a little

Mayank was so elated with the news of him and Nupur's marriage he goes to the same place where he and his dad used to go Armaan and Riddhima are co incidentally there

Mayank staring at the stars and talking to his dad

Mayank – dad, I'm missing u so much that I had come to say thanks you to you for making me what I am today just then armaan pretends that he is home calls mayank

Armaan – hey jiju accha ghar pe ho kya???

Mayank – nahi Armaan mai abhi ghar pohanch raha hoon just have a stopover

Riddhima - ohhhh mayank I can see your stop over zara peeche dekho

Armaan –Riddhima – hi tum yehan..

Mayank – umm haan main aur dad aksar yehan aaya karte the

Armaan – chalo jijz ghar chalo q ridz (she nods positively)

Mayank - hmm Okie

After reaching home Nupur is so happy to see Mayank that she forgets that his entire family is there she goes and kisses him………. (tussi imagine karo kaisa hoga??)

Mom- hemhemhem Mayu Nupur hum log bhi hai yehan (trying to suppress a laugh)

Mayank - jii maa

Gunjan – Haan mayank bhai bhabhi aap log kitne besharm ho hume pata hai ………

Sammy- vaise bhai bhabhi aap log aaj gaan gaao naa please mere lie

Gunjan- how selfish Sammy sirf tumhara lie kyun hum sab ke liye gaao naa aap dono

My Gaana time in this form now

Nupur- Kissa tera, teri daastan,

Chehra tera khud kare bayan,

Kisi se pyaar tujhe ho gaya,

Tu maan jaa,

Haan maan jaa…

Mayank - Kahin naa laage mann,

Kya hai yeh sunapan,

Aahaa..Aahaa..

Mujhe tum bata do,

Koi to wajah do,

Ahaa…ahaaa..

Har ghadi ab khayalon mein,

Keh raha hai koi,

Har ghadi mere khwabon mein,

Aa raha hai koi..

Is this love?

Maine naa jaana

Aahaa..

Is this love?

Tu hi Bata naa

Aahaa..

Nupur -Tune chuna ishq ka raasta,

Hum safar iss safar mein dudhta hai tu,

Haan baat yeh maan bhi le zara,

Tut kar ab kisi ko chahta hai tu,

Mayank -Raat din meri needon mein,

Jag raha hai koi

Raat din meri aankhon mein,

Bass raha hai koi

Is this love?

Maine naa jaana..

Ahhaa..

Is this love?

Tu hi bata naa

Ahhaa..

Nupur -Tune tera dil kisi ko diya,

Baat yeh sach hai gar tu maan le isse,

Dil ka sukun tune hi kho diya,

Ab haqeeqat hai yeh tu jaane le isse

Mayank -Aajkal meri chahon mein,

Dhal raha hai koi,

Aajkal meri saason mein,

Chal raha hai koi..

Is this love?

Maine naa jaana..

Ahhaa..

Is this love?

Tu hi bata naa

Ahhaa..

Mayank & Nupur (together) -Kahi naa lage mann,

Kya hai yeh sunapan,

Ahaa..ahaaa..

Har ghadi ab khayalon mein,

Keh raha hai koi,

Har ghadi mere khwabon mein,

Aa raha hai koi..

Is this love?

Maine naa jaana

Ahhaa..

Is this love?

Tu hi bata naa

Ahhaa..

Mom - bacchon kya tha yeh??? This was the best thing I ever heard from mychildren today….

Gunjan - we all love you( gives them a big hug)

Armaan& Riddhima and The Gang - hey what about us?? (Group hug)

Armaan –di humein Nihu di & Meela di ko pick karne airport Jana hai na

Nupur- Meela aur Nihu aa rahe hai Oh my god itne saalon ke baad

Armaan - Haan di who un logon ne kal phone kiya tha keh rahe the ke ke humari dost ne shaadi karne ka faisla kiya hai lekin hum dono ko bhjol gaye

Nupur – aa ne do un dono ko aisa mazaa chakhaungi ke hosh udd jayenge

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Posted: 16 years ago
lekha
it was sooooooooooooooooo cute yaar
especially the kiss
do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
kiss was soooo sweet........bechare sharam se laal ho gaye......please continue soon.........pm me😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
very sweeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttttt update jaani.....
yeah the kiss wala scene is sooooooo cute......
waiting 4 d next part...
sorry yaar main teri tarah song dedicate nahi kar sakti..wo kya hai na meri song knowledge thodi poor hai...😆😆
issliye...

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey lekha sweetie!

it was so sweet of u to bring me n nihu in it! for this u deserve a lots of hugs n mmmmmmmmmmuuuuuaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! from me n nihu!

par yaar, thoda dhyan se, nupur se mujhe darr lag rahe hain! pitwana mat haan!

add me to pm list!

luv
di
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Posted: 16 years ago
such a sweet chapter ... ur gana time it so sweet ... i loved them 👏
i loved the kiss and i loved the
bhabhi and jijo dialogues 👏

as u always give me such gr8 poems.... this below poem is dedicated to u .... ( i didnt write this one ..its from net. but i changed a bit for u ....)

My Dad

by Tammy
I am old, but I am young,
In the memories of a distant sun.

talking and Laughing,
Smiles that we share.
It's a Father's love -
None could ever compare.

I am old, but I am young,
As long as childhood memories are sung.

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Posted: 16 years ago
hiii lekha!!
this update was awesome yaar......it was choooo cute!!
loved the gaana time as usual!
awww......u brought nihu and meela in ur FF
loved the whole update!
thanks for the PM
continue soon.....waiting for more!
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Posted: 16 years ago
next part mein zyada besharam scenes honge

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