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Ranbir Deewani ........

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Posted: 16 years ago

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once i'm done proof reading it'll take me atleast 3 hours part 1 up in 3 hours

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Posted: 16 years ago

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gr8 one yaar

plz continue...hope to see MAYUR scnes in cuming updates

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komal793

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Posted: 16 years ago

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heyy

pls continue soon and pm me if possible.

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GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@ seems very interesting ... add m in ur pm list ... i will be waiting to read more😉 ... btw good advice from father 👏

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Ranbir Deewani ........

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 1

Major Bakshi- Mayank (seeing that he is lost)

Mayank - Sir

Major Bakshi - I have a mission for you I told you about my daughter right??

Mayank - sir gunjan right??

Major Bakshi - yes now that Raghav is after mission milaap I want my daughter safe and sound and you Mayank will help me protect my daughter

Mayank - sure sir but will that help me in finding my half brother samrat and my mom

Major Bakshi - hopefully that'll be possible and here are the details of the college but Mayank mind you gunjan is that type of girl who detests army men so you'll have to go as a student

Mayank - sure sir

Mayank (thoughts) - who would have thought that being in the army, could take me to this sort of situations. Chal Mayank bag pack kar le

GUYS HERE'S PART 1 FOR YU DO READ AND COMMENT😉

Edited by lekhaishwar - 16 years ago

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Ranbir Deewani ........

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Posted: 16 years ago

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INDEX

TEASER- PG 1
PART 1 - PG2
PROMO 1- PG 5
PART 2 -PG 5
PROMO 2- PG 5
PART 3 - PG 7
PROMO 3- PG 9
PART 4- PG 10
PART 5 - PG 10

PART 6 - PG 15

PART 7 - PG 18

PART 8 - PG 21

PROMO 4 -PG 24

PART 9- PG 25

PART10- PG 27

PART 10B - PG 30

PART 11 - PG 31

PART 12-PG 32.

Edited by ranbir_lekha - 16 years ago

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Ranbir Deewani ........

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: jusrockingon
do pm me ur nxt upd8

sure dear you can count on me

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GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

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yaar I don't like that Mayu was born when his father betrayed his wife ... i don't like betrayal .. i hated it the movie also .. and i am against it in ur ff ...😭

@ rest i love it😉 so ... who will be Nups 😆... i can't c her as teacher 🤣

@ and sami will be wonderful younger brother ....😉... according to main hoon naa Gunjan is already his frnd ....😳😛👏

Keep on going good one 👏👏... i already know who shukla ji will be 🤣🤣

Edited by SanaSarwar - 16 years ago

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Ranbir Deewani ........

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: SanaSarwar
yaar I don't like that Mayu was born when his father betrayed his wife ... i don't like betrayal .. i hated it the movie also .. and i am against it in ur ff ...😭

@ rest i love it😉 so ... who will be Nups 😆... i can't c her as teacher 🤣

@ and sami will be wonderful younger brother ....😉... according to main hoon naa Gunjan is already his frnd ....😳😛👏

Keep on going good one 👏👏... i already know who shula ji will be 🤣🤣

shuklaji is prof rasai mrs kakar kaun hongee??? dear chandini's character suits nupur a lot so can't help it gotta go with the flow

Edited by lekhaishwar - 16 years ago