FF : Dosti se Pyar tak

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This is my FF and I decided to post some of it in the DMG forum so i can get more readers. 😉It's called Dosti se Pyar tak and in this FF, Ridz is Priti. 😆Everybody had the name Ridz in their FF so i changed it to priti but its still the same person. 😊These are the parts and if you like it and want to read more when I update then please Write " Pm Me " in your comment. ⭐️thnx a lot for reading and please feel free to comment Thanks a lot.👏
Neha ;)😛
This is the link to my FF in the FF section : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/20925671
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Part 1
"Ahhhh" Nikki screamed as all the boys around her dropped her to go pick up Armaan. " Oh fiddlesticks , I'm gonna die , I always wanted to meet mommy but not like this " Nikki thought.

She squeezed her eyes shut and waited till she opens her eyes in heaven. " Bhoom" Nikki dropped but this was definitely not the ground. As she opened her eyes she saw Armaan staring at her ......... again.

" OMG, Ammy you gotta stop staring at me it gives me the creeps . " he still stared at her.

Her beautiful olive skin, 24-20-23 figure , her long beautiful chestnut brown hair , It was all so gorgeous. No duh the whle college was cuckoo over her.

A kiss broke him outta his thoughts . Oh my god Nikki justed kissed him.

" Thanks Ammy .You've always been there for me everybody left but You Nupur di , And Mayank have always been there. " he could hear the pain in her voice and see her eyes getting glint . He couldn't see her cry or he would start too .

" Nikki are you OK ? Sweety I was scared like hell when I heard you fell. I thought I lost my only one " Nupur said.

" The full Malhotra family is so dramatic , Ekta Kapoor would hire yall anyday. " Mayank hollered while laughing like a hyena .

" This is not funny Mayank , Sometimes main soch thi hoon , tum mare sath main kabhi safe stay kar pyaon gi bhi ya tum mujhe chor do gay . " Nupur snapped at Mayank's face.

Mayank quitely slipped his hands around her waist , and lightly left a trail of kisses down her cheek.

Nupur knew she couldn't stay mad at him any longer he was like a mirchi achi be lagti hai aur tang bhi karti hai.

" Armaan , you're awesome you saved Nikki's life , " Priti praised as she planted a kiss on his cheek.

' Pritiyangita I did what I thought was right . And how many times have I told you not to invade my personal space seriously ? " Armaan screamed at her face.

" Armaan , stop being soo rude . I'm not going to talk to you . We're all friends here and if I can invade your personal space , Priti can too. " Nikki reasoned.

For Nikki 's sake Armaan knew he had to do this or other wise She really wouldn't talk to him. Why'd she have to be soo Nice ?

" Acha guys remember party at my house get there at 6 . Only 2 hours left so hurry up . " Mayank assured.

" Armaan do you have a date yet ? " Priti asked

" No Why ?

" Will you come with me then ?

" We don't have to bring .......... .. " Nikki cut off in the middle and said "Off Course he'll come "

Nikki knew how much Priti liked Armaan and she tried her level best to get them together.

Priti , Mayank and Nupur walked away leaving Nikki and Armaan on their own.

' WHAT THE HELL Nikki , you can't plan my life out why don't you leave me alone. " Armaan hollered .

That instant a tear fell down Nikki's face. Oh no Armaan's most horrible dream had come true. he made Nikki cry.

This was it she was never going to forgive him.

she walked away swinging her hair in her face. Armaan felt a tear rolling down his cheeks, "Ohh shit , I can't let anybody see me crying and I can't let Nikki cry. Why am I such a jerk ? " Suddenly a idea hit him he picked up the phone and dialed. " Can I have a limo , bouquete of roses ,and a Stella Fabioni dress ready by 5 " Armaan hipped with excitment this was going to be the best night of Nikki's life and she would surely realize how much She meant to him.

Edited by Love_ya - 16 years ago
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PART 2
Ting, Tong , Nikki's doorbell rang . A guy in a white suit with a red rose and a package was standing there.
"This is for you ma'am," He said. Nikki grabbed the package and closed the door.
She quickly scrambled over to her sofa and tore open the wrapping.
" Wear this and be ready by 5:30 at your door" was written in the note with the pack. Inside was the beautifulest dress Nikki had ever seen.It was blue with tickles all over the top , it flowed to her feet blooming out as a flower :
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"What is it Mayank ? Why in the world are we here ? Your party is in a hour and we're at your terrace. " Nupur questioned.
"Patientce , sweety " Mayank said as he made sure her blindfold was tied tight.
As he opened her blindfold , Nupur gawked with aww. The table was right in the middle and the salsa was still spilled on the same seat,. the waiter was same, the light on the left that wasn't working was still not working. Even the books Mayank had been reading were still kept there. This was exactly like their 1st date.
" How'd you like the suprise my lady ? " Mayank asked.
Nupur was still not able to get out of her daze. Without saying a word she turned around , grabbed Mayank and leaned in for a kiss. Her hands climbed his neck as his hands swept her back. She felt as though they were one so close , there wasn't one part of their body that wasn't attached together. Slowly Mayanks lips made the journey down her lips , to her neck , collarbone , up to her cheeks and then back to her cheeks. God knows how long they were there . But finally Nupur thought if she didn't stop now , too much would happen , she wouldn't be able to seperate then. Nupur tried to break through but Mayank held her tighter and dug his face in her hair. The tingle on her skin got deeper but she knew she had to stop now otherwise she had seen Juno. They broke away , embarrased with their actions. Nupur blushed and turned all red. They quitely sat down and stared in each other's eyes. They didn't have to say anything their eyes said it all.
" Hello moto" , Nupur's phone rang .
Who was this stupid person ruining their perfect date.
" Di is Nikki there ? ", Armaan quired.
Nupur looked at the clock , snap they only had 30 minutes left till their party.
" I'll talk to you later ", Nupur said.
" But di .", Armaan insisted but all he heard was the tone.
" Mayank let's go ", Nupur pronounced " We're going to be late ."
But Mayank didn't listen he got a hold of her and started romancing again.
This time Nupur couldn't stop her self either.
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Nikki stepped out looking like a princess. Anybody who layed eyes on her that second would be dumbstruck at her beauty. She was already beautiful enough but this was beyond anybody could imagine beauty. The blue brought out the red in her cheeks, her hair turned from brown to saorta blondish brown , and she graced the floor with stilletoes.
" Ma'am you could step in now" said the mesero in white. Her eyes searched for something to sit in when she found a limo.
Her mouth dropped , this limo was aleast 500 feet long and there were like 10 people to serve her.
" Whoever is doing this for me is soo going to be the love of my life . " Nikki thought
As Nikki sat in she thought of everybody who could do this for her but again and again Armaan's name kept entering her mind. " I'm supposed to be mad at this guy. Nikita Malhotra you can't let a guy get hold of you like this. " As soon as she said those words Nikki felt a tingling sensation .. can't let a guy get hold of you... was Armaan really getting her ? " I mean you're 16 you're going to be seeing boys everywhere Why let one guy keep you abssesed? " Then Nikki thought about Priti with Armaan. Nikki didn't know why but she felt an empty feeling like a part of her was missing and like it was eating her up inside. "Nikki you should be happy , you're the one who set them up "
Suddenly the armrest under her slipped as the door opened. " Oh no" , Nikki was falling again. " This time to Armaan bhi nahi hai , " She thought. But this time around she smoothly slipped into someone's arms and she knew those arms very , very well. She had just fallen in them this afternoon. She looked up and saw Armaan's face in front of her with a worried look. The expression on his face just made her crack up , she rolled out of his arms and onto the ground , she rolled and laughed without stopping.
Finally she got up and hugged him.
" Sooo you forgive me ? " Armaan asked
" Umm sochna parega . " Nikki answered
" Main kuch bhi karoonga but Please mujhe maaf kaf do. "
" Kuch bhi ..... phir will you be my date for tonight ? "
The look on Armaan's face caught her attention.
" Sure , I'll just call Preeti and cancel . "
" No no don't we'll go next time. " Nikki compromised.
Armaan saw the look on Nikki's face . " She's dissapointed , she's dissapointed , she wants to be with me-e-e. , She's falling for me. " Armaan quitely sang on his way in.
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PART 3 Priti couldn't believe she had actually done this . OMG never in her life had she stolen something but today she did and that also just for a guy. BUT not just any guy , her guy , the special one , Armaan. She quickly picked up her pace ran around the coner and into the window of her house. she stared at the beautiful shaadhi ka joda and though " Aaj mujhe saajna hai meri saajna ke liye wo bhi ek shaadhi ke joda mein. " She could already imagine their wedding and everything after that. She pictured this is how he would propose her : She would come back from work and sit down taking a deep breath and saying , " kaam to rooz brata hi jara hain." . Tring, tring, the phone would ring and a voice would come on. In a shattered voice Armaan would say , " I'm deing please come see me , my last wish is to be with you. I'm at Neha's Nursery . " At that moment priti would drop the phone , grab her keys and run. She would jump into the car and turn the key. Brrr , Brr the car wouldn't start. " Oh no she would think with tears running down her face. At that moment priti would feel like a worm squished between 2 logs not being to get out no matter how hard she tried. With all her might priti would get out and run like the wind. She would enter the nursery with a tear stained face . Suddenly she would see flowers fall over her. Armaan would arrive at her feet and , " Will you marry me ? " They would stare at each other and go into flashback mode remembering evrything that happened.
Priti's phone bought her back to reality. Ahh she really hoped that would happen. Nikki screamed , " Where the hell are you ? I've been here for the past 1 hour and you've not showed up." Priti cooly replied, " Nikki party's at 6 right now its 5:45 plus indian time party hai yaar, nobody's going to come till like 8 . Calm down." Nikki knew very well why she was acting all jittery but somehow she couldn't come to accept it . She knew Armaan was the reason sice that evening she couldn't stop thinking about him. Nikki tried to fool herself by saying , " Well duh Nikki he's with you now that's why you're so wierd. When he goes away you're probabaly not even going to care." But Nikki knew she was wrong she always lied to her self , so she knew now never to beleive herself. " Hello ?!!?! Nikki rani aap kahan kho gayi hain. Nikki go get a drink and try calming down it should help and chill I'll be there. " Priti signed off. Nikki thought about all the times she had spent with Armaan and realized if he wasn't there she probably wouldn't be able to recover from Mom and Dad's death even nupur di was totally broken . mayank wasn't even there then so at that point She knew Armaan was a big part of her life wheather she accepted it or not. She knew what had happened to her after her parant's death and if Armaan went away she wouldn't be able to cope at all. Without realizing it tears rolled down Nikki's cheeks and she couldn't stop them. she thought about Priti and Armaan and even thinking about them together made her burn . She couldn't explain any of this it was all so confusing. " Can you believe Mayanks not here yet ? I mean it his party and he's only gayab." , Armaan said waking her out of her daze. Armaan noticed the tears on Nikki's face and thiught , " Not again ! ". Why'd she have to do this ? It was soo hard for him also. Nikki just didn't understand. " Nikki why are you crying ? , Armaan asked. Nikki took a long look at Armaan and then without saying anything she ran . Armaan tried following her but Nikki replied with a sharp, " Don't you even dare coming after me ! "Nikki knew she just couldn't bare being there anymore . She would go out for a bit and feel better and like Priti said no one's going to come before eight . Armaan was totally confused inside. Tring Tring Armaan thought maybe Nikki's back. He opened the door and a swish of air greeted him , 30 poeple walked in with Mayank and Nupur trailing behind. " Where's Nikki ? ", nupur questioned "I don't know" , Armaan replied " What do you mean I don't know ? She was with you na. You can't even keep track of a girl soo much for being a man. you know I never should have trusted you . You;re suc.... " Calm down , " Mayank interrupted her for the 2nd time that day. " She's probably gone for a walk and she'll be back. " Mayank, Nupur , and Armaan heard laughing from the hall. " Ahh chee kis type ki ladki hai .... Shaadhi karne aiyi hai kya.... Kisne isko bulaya.... Kuch bhi paan ke aja te hai .... Typical saathi savitri baan ne se kuch anhi hota..," They heard insults from everywhere. Priti walked in looking like this : suddenly for some reason Armaan felt a burning sensation. " Shut up! " , he screamed " atleast she's wearing something unlike half o fyou people that seem like you're going to walk into a club ! " for the first time Priti felt good this was actually armaan whoi was standing up for her not Nikki. She looked at him admirlingly : ******************************************************************* Nikki began her walk back to the party , She already felt much better. " See ", she told herself " All you needed to do was get away for Armaan . " While being absorbed in her own thoughts , Nikki didn't notice the truck heading towards her. Boom she felt screeched across the street on the side walk. her arm ached back and felt she felt squished. She looked up and noticed a guy , he ahd glasses on with a jacket and jeans. He looked at her with concern :
She got lost in his eyes and couldn't take her eyes off of him. His beautifully carved face struck at every angle , his ears were that perfect oval everything about him was soo mesmerising , she knew she had lost it.
They were down there till avery long time till someone finally said , " You can't go to sleep here you now 1 "
Nikki blushed while still he was lost in her beauty.
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" Mind your own buisness ! ", armaan repeated again.
Suddenly came a voice ' Its the abhimanyu Modi and he's with a girl ! " Cameras flashed everywhere till Armaan was Abhoi enter with his arms around Nikki
" The dare of this guy ! , " thought Armaan
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PART 4

He's actually touching her!!!!!!

Armaan walked up in rage to Abhi who had Nikki clutched up in his arms. Preeti knew what he was about to do she tried to stop him but all in vain.

"Excuse you!" Armaan said in a rude tone.

" Haan kya hua ? " ,Abhi said as he moved to the side.

Armaan gave him the glare

"I said excuse you, Smart Alec!"

" Haan to maine move kia na abhi aap ja saak ta hain ."

Armaan gave Abhi a icy look.

"Don't be smart with me you know what I mean! " Armaan said with his tone increasing with every word.

"You said excuse me so i moved so you could pass What's soo smart about that? Any bacha knows to move! "

"This is enough! I've had it from you! "

"Had what?"

Armaan had had enough this guy was way past his limits. He grabbed Abhi's collar.

"What do you think you're doing ? Nikki tell your pagal friend to get of me. "

" Pagal kisso ko bola ha ? "

"Guys Stop! " , Nikki yelled obviously irritated. "Tum logon ko like koi better kam nahi hai kya. Armaan What's with you ? He moved right so What's your prob ? "

"What's my prob? Ehm for your info someone here is acting like your conjoined twin. And I'm trying to save you from this professional rapist. That's what my problem is."

" You would know ! Well of course everybody knows everyone in their industry. Right ? "

Armaan couldn't believe this was Nikki talking to him . The girl he was supposedly in love with was calling him a rapist. " Well at least I'm not professional."

"ARMAAN! Stop talking about Abhi like that he said what you did. You know what stick with Preeti like you're supposed to and stay out of my buisness. Abhi is here with me and you shouldn't have a problem with that." Nikki stated for the last time as she walked away grabbing Abhi's hand.

Mayank and Nupur stared in amazement this was the 1st time Nikki had ever yelled at Armaan.

Armaan was mad. "What does she think of herself? Yahan ki rani hai kya ? Uska gar thori hai. Aur wo Abhi chup kar ke saathi savatri ke tara stand kar raha tha. "

Preeti came up and grabbed Armaan's hand and stroked it. " Teekh hai Ammie pie she didn't mean it . Nikki ke bhi din ata hain kabhi kabhi. She's just not having that good of a day. "

"Who gave you the right to call me Ammie pie? That's only Nikki's right. Don't ever do that again. Mera din already bad ja raha hai mostly kyunki I'm stuck with you!

Preeti's eyes widened and a tear drop slid down, slowly making its way down her cheeks, on her neck and splat against her hand. Why did he do that to her every single time? She knew he didn't have mood swings cause it's not possible but why?

Nupur and Mayank headed towards the stage and picked up the mike.

"Umm ... Mayu mike choro mera hai."

"Nahi Nupu yeh meri party hai."

"Mayu mein hjamesha se tumse zayada nicely talk karti hoon"

" Hain par yeh mera guests hain aur main nahi chata ke tumara chapad chapad side une dekhna ko mile."

" Haww Mayu tumhe ..tumhe mein to mar doongi. Meri baath karte ho tumne mirror mein dekha hain. kya wear kiya hain tumne." With that she turned smacking him in the eye with her hair.

" Apne baal apne saath rako na. Others ki face ,ein marne ki zaaru rat kya hai."

" mujhe na Mujhe to tumse baath hi nahi kar ni ase logon ko pagal khanna send karne cha hi yeh. Wahan hi tumhare acha hoyaga. Aur plus Mujhe tumse baath hi nahi karni hai. Pata nahi tumhare effect mujhe par bhi par jaya."

Nupur couldn't take it anymore. This time she turned hard and made sure Mayank go 2 tight across his face.

" Acha hai bala tali " Mayank chitttered through his teeth.

Mayank picked up the mike and said, "Thanks for coming guys. Par aaj ke shaam will be fun. Pehle we will play a gam then kahana and Dance. Teekh ha? Our 1st game will be paper dance. "

"Yaayyyy ! . " The audience screamed

Everybody gathered up partners and Nikki noticed Armaan coming towards her and quickly grabbed Abhi.

'KYA? Mujhe baggage samje ke rakha hai kya , " Ammy thought.

He ran to Preeti and picked her up too.

"Isse kya hogaye hai ? Abhi to scream kar rahe that aur abhi. " Preeti thought.

The music started and everyone danced .

Mayank and Nupur got on a paper and started.

" Mayu tumhare paar move karo."

" kyun mera par hai mein kuch bhi karoon tumhe kya."

" Well yeh game mein I'm there and I don't like to lose. "

" To phir koi other partner find karlo ! "

" I wish but I'm stuck with you so lets move."

" MAYANK ! Move your stupid leg . "

" Mera leg aur main uske saath kuch bhi kar sakta hoon , yeh bhi . " Mayank said as he slipped his leg under Nupur's a let her trip."

By the end only 2 couples were left : Nikbhi and Manti .

Nikki scooted closer and closer to abhi she was starting to get uncomfortable but Armaan had to learn his lesson.

Abhi picked Nikki up like a baby and cradled her while they got lost in each others eyes. Armaan stared obviously jealous, " Samaj ti kya ha apne aap ko , that slut ! " . The song stopped and mayank said

" Fold your paper again , Guys This'll probably be the last round because there are only 2 couples left. "

The song started again. Armaan picked Preeti up and Preeti grinned, " Chori kar ne ka acha reward hai. "

Nikki grabbed Abhi harder . Her breath crossed across his shirt as he slipped his hands around her waist. Nikki felt a tingly sensation and goose bumps covered her. She bit her lip trying to hide her embarrassment, " Oh she thought he's strong . " She wanted to look in his beautiful green eyes again but she couldn't. She tried to lower her head and cover her face with her hair. She couldn't control anymore she looked in his eyes. There they were green, she could get lost in them , They had something that gave her chills , she breathed in hard . He noticed her looking at him and for the first time he noticed her actual beauty , her skin , her eyes, her nose , her lips , her ears, everything was sooo mesmerizing. They got closer and closer and if any of them got anymore closer they would be stuck together with their lips. She looked away bit it didn't help. She felt this wanting and this feeling that she had never experienced before.

"Umm Abhi ,, You know we're dancing right now but umm actually I really don't know much about you except you saved my life and your name is Abhi. I mean I really like you and everything but I don't know you. You saved my life and I'll be thankful for that but otherwise you're a complete stranger to me. "

" Well " Abhi replied . " here's my biodata : Age 20 , Name Abhimanyu Krish Modi , Location : Bombay , India , Job : Papa's business , . Aur kuch ? "

Nikki felt relieved ' thnx god he's not a rapist." " I mean I shouldn't have that doubt but it feels good to be happy ! "

All this time Armaan was watching them. He couldn't take it anymore. He dropped Preeti to the ground and ran to Nikki.

" What the heck do you think you're doing ? "

" Dancing ' Isn't that what we're supposed to be doing. "

" You aren't dancing you're getting tempted by this tempty wildress. You aren't going to dance with him anymore chalo ." with that he grabbed Nikki out of abhi's hands.

" STOP !This is the 2nd time you've stopped me . This is my life not yours please freaking mind your own business it's really not that hard. Am I interrupting your night , no so you have no right to do it to mine "

"Nikki this isn't like please sweetie let's just talk you are .. "

"You're not going to tell me what to do and that's it Fine ok "Nikki shouted and ran into Mayank's room. Armaan thought maybe kuch too much hoga ya.

PRECAP

" Dosti se se se ' " Nikki thought what she could sing next.

" Pyar tak oh ho ho " Armaan completed Nikki's sentence together and then sang " Dosti se se se Pyar tak 'a-a ho ho. " yeh safar kabhi tota na" Preeti came in too

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start...hope you continue soon...
can you add me to your pm list plzzz???
thx

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