Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5 - Page 18

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here goes my updt 3!

Next to Mayank's car

Nupur waves at sajan's already leaving car franetically as a result she misses mayank's opening the car-door for her and waiting for her to enter.

N (hurrying in to the car embarrassed): sorry!

Mayank shakes his head smiling in a 'nupur is gonna be nupur' follows her.

M(igniting the car's engine): manna parega. Samrat ka kuch ideas waqehi rocking hain!

N(enthusiastically): hain na?isi liye hi to main kehti hoon uska har plan me na hume zarur shamil ho jana chahie!

M(snapping): bilkul galath!uska party aur disco wala plans bakwas hain aur for ur kind information main to sirf uska is alag se ghar lautneka plan ka tarif kar raha tha aur kuchh nahin. After a long group outing some personal time really comes really as a breathe.

N (sourly): haan haan! Jaise kitna fikar hain alag se time spend karneka! kabhi kavar to mujhe aisa lagta hain ke agar samrat nahi hota to mere naseeb me date ka to naam aur nishan tak nahin hota!

M(with a getting u sorta gesture): aacchha??? Kiu tumhe wo study ki bahanewali surprise date yaad nahi hain kya (nupur turns pink clearly recalling tht intimate date)ya phir wo studydates? Ya phir samrat ki garden me partywali sham ka wo

N(snaps blushing ,remembering the kiss): wo count nahi hota! Wo thodi na koi date tha.

M(smiles winking): haan date se kuchh zyada tha (nupur gulps for air, mayank's simle broadens) ya phir wo amavash wali sham chand wali date!

N (anger brushes off her blushes): TUM to impossible ho mayank! Agar gunjan ka phone nahi aata tab to main ,,,khair chhoro tumne aunty se baat ki?

M: abhi tak to nahi, (nupur gives him an angry stare, mayank throws an apologetic look in return) kaal kar lunga pakka!

N: pakka! Itne dino se kiu nahi ki?

M (uncomfortably): kya kahu jab bhi maa ki samne confess karne jata hoon to (pauses n sighs) bahat u know wo

N(bursts out of laughter): sidhe sidhe kiu nahi kehte ke sharmateho? Hahaha

M(sourly): haan to? Kaunsi baari baat hain?

N(still laughing cuddles his chin): chhuuchhuchhu,,,meri naye navili dulhaan (mocks to do a kajal tika behind his ear still laughing)

M gets himself freed with shaking her off gives an 'iron-melting' stare for a while but with no use on nupur he shrugs his anger off n smiles looking at her lovingly.

Ben's jeep

R (screaming @ benji's crazy driving): Ben? Kya hua hain tumhe? Zara sidha drive karo na aur haa thode dheere bhi!

B(regretfully): Sorry! Actually bahat tired feel kar raha hoon aur drowsy bhi! Ek coffee pi lena chahietha tab shyad,,,

R: pull over.

B: kya?

R: just pull over. I'll drive.

Switching seats rimjhim starts driving.

R: now now,,, you can have a nap my sleepy head! (waiting for a while for a reply she turns toward benji who is fast asleep already) Incredible! (she notices benji shivering n removes her dupatta n covers him with it smiling)

Sajan's car

G (answering samrat's query): tum samajh nahi rahe ho samrat usdin baat alag tha, kiuke usdin mujhse thik terha se chala nahi gaya aur tumhe mujhe uthana pada (turning scarlet at the thought,samrat smiles at this, she shakes it off n comes back to point)par aaj? Aaj tumne jab mujhe sabke samne bina koi sensible reason bina mere pasand na pasand ko dhyan me rakhte huye(she pauses for a while) itna show-off mujhe acchha nahi lagta aur tum ye jante huye bhi waisa kiya, is liye main utni naraz thi.

S: wo to score ke liye tha chashmish

G: show-off bhi tha

S(surrendering to his ceramic doll): ok, ok,, aaj se show off bilkul bandh ok???

G(giving it a thought for a while staring at 'anything for you, chashmish' sorta samrat smiles affectionately): nahi samrat,,, main ye bilkul nahi chahti ke meri vaaje se tum badal jao

S: par tumhi to kehte phirteho ke jab badalna aacchhai ke liye hota hain tab badal jana hi sahi hain.

G: thodi bahat show-off utna bura bhi nahi hote ke use badal dena chahie.

S(smiling mischievously): to phir license to mil hi chukka na mujhe! Ab dekhna

G(realising the meaning snaps): Samrat!

S (shudders suddenly as if he recalled something painful): ok fine, no more fun for now.

Then he does it again.

G(curiously):kya baat hain samrat? (samrat tries to avoid with an assuring smile but gunjan presses on)

S(sighs giving up): pata hain gunjan? Ab jab bhi main pichhe murke dekhta hoon na tab ek alag sa samrat nazar ata hain. Ajeeb sa ajnabi sa samrat. Pata hain kis samrat ko dekhta hoon main?

G(tentatively thinking samrat is missing tht old version of him becus of her): shyad ek lot cooler samrat ko?

S(curves his brows for an instance then shakes his head smiling): logon ke nazron me shyad haan, lot cooler,lot smarter ya phir kuchh aur,,, mere nazrose dekho to kya dekhogi janna chahogi tum?

G(breathing comfortably once again): kya?

S: ek darpoke, bewakuf aur adhura sa samrat.

G (shockingly): Kya!!! Par kiu!!!????

S: darpoke is liye,kiuke main hamesha pyar se darta tha,kabhi bhi pyar ke liye tyar hi nahi tha,mera ye manna tha ke pyarme insaan girta hain uthta nahi. Is baat pe kabhi bhi dhyan nahi diya ke girne ke baad uthne ke ilawa inshhan ke paas aur koi chara hi nahi baachta.aur insaan ko ser uthake jina sikhata hain pyar. Main adhura tha ,kiuke mere adha hissa jo kit tum ho mere pass nahin tha par phir bhi main khush tha!!! I mean how come tht was possible?? Itna bewakuf koi kaise ho sakta hain ke usse ye bhi pata na chale ke wo adhura hain??? Aur us bache khuche hissa se aise jiye ke jaise he is at the top of the world???Pathetic!!!

G keeps looking at him tearfully.

S(with glistening eyes): pata hain mujhe kab pata chala us adhurepan ka? Jab tum mere zindegi me aake mujhe pura kiya tab ye ehsas hua ke kitna akela kitna adhura tha main tumhari bina. I can't ever thank you enough chashmish for being in my life (pauses rectifying) for being my life.

G: main bhi to adhuri hi thina tumhare bina samrat? To phir ye thnx kaisa? Koi charity thodi na ki maine. Mujhe tumhe pura karna para khudko pura karneke liye.pata hain jab main morena laut gayi thi, jab kuchh pal ke liye ye laga ke

S: sab kuchh khatam ho chukka hain

G:tab to aisa laga ke zindegi jaise

S: khatam ho chukatha.

G: haan ek ek din guzarna mushkil se na mumkin hote ja raha tha

S: jaise ke ek ek suna sa cursed sa empty saal ho

G:puri dunya

S:jaise thamsa gaya tha

G:har saanse

S:aisa zehrila lag raha tha ke (exhales deeply trying to snap out of those painful memory, compsing himself with his jaws tight in determination) ek wada karo tum mujhse chashmish,,,chahe jo kuchh bhi ho jaaye tum mujhse alag phir kabhi nahi hoge! Kabhi mujhe akela nahi chhoge!kabhi bhi nahi!

G(staring at his eyes moved n cautioned by the intensity of his words as if something bad is gonna happen): I promise samrat. Kabhi bhi sath nahi chhodungi tumhara (shrugging off tht dark fear, promises with same determination)

They both smile still moistened eyes which are locked to each other, hand in hand for a moment. Suddenly a pair of headlights flash through the windshield, samrat's 'oh shit' n gunjan's choke get inaudible as the things go slower n world gets completely numb for this pair. Samrat tries to avoid the truck as hard as he can but in vain. At the very last second he gives up looks straight at gunjan's eyes which are reflecting the same horror in his eyes ,screams "chashmish!" n thorws himself on her as if tht will shield her from upcoming monster...

Precap

G (covered in bandage n cables, opens her eyes muttering samrats name): Samart? Samrat kaisa hain? Kaha hain wo di?

Mayur look at each other uncomfortably.

G( getting hysteric): Kya chhupa rahe ho tum log mujhhse? Kya hua hain use?

N (breaks into tears):wo samrat,,, wo samrat

G: samrat kya di?

N cries vigorously at this point hiding in mayank's chest/


**** well, bout mayank's owning a car n sammie's car riding instead of bikes ....in the first update of crazy love1 as far i can recall, nayab portrayed mayank's saving nupur n giving her a lift in his car, so it got stablished in this ff tht mayank is financially rich too (thts my doing matching to nayab portraying his mom as a widow ,managing her husband's bis successfully) \. n for samrat's car thing it kinda happened there in the cl1 , may b for gun's not liking bike riding stuff...n all, dont rem really! it just happened!

so, i m sticking with the car-legacy thing!😉

Edited by amsjms - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg meela di SUPERB UPDATE and Sammy ko hua kya??? precap se bohot dar gayi hoon please tell me that sammy is ok
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing updt........... plzzzzzzz continue soon........ cant wait to read ahead.................
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

omg meela di SUPERB UPDATE and Sammy ko hua kya??? precap se bohot dar gayi hoon please tell me that sammy is ok


agar update utna 'badiya' thi to comment itna chhota kiu???? 😃 dekh rahi hoon jabse nihu gayi hain na tera comments bhi choote se aur chhote hote jaa rahe hain. di kehti hain na mujhko? us haq se kaan ke niche bajau kya ek?😉

well nahi yaar!!! ye to nahi kar sakti to di hineki hasiyat thodi pyar hi jata doon?

kisses
from di!

aur sammie ko kya hua hain aur kya nahin ye to agli updt se hi pata chalega!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjalika Khanna

amazing updt........... plzzzzzzz continue soon........ cant wait to read ahead.................


sure thing! on the 3rd hardly 4th day from today INSHALLAH!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Meela!!!⭐️
Vaah Kya update tha...👏 👏 👏
bahut sweet, touching and romantic....😳
Chalo main couple by couple jaati hoon
Mayur - Sirf mayank hi hai jo Nupur ko
chup karva sakta hai aur aise feel karva sakta hai...
Loved his reminding her of all the dates they had...😆
Benjim - Lagta hai yahan Rimjhim is the more responsible
of the two..Kitna khayal rakhti hai uska
Sajan - Far most aaj ke star couple...Kya perfomance tha dono
ka ekdum real...genuine...Samrat's realization ki whatdid he always miss...
and Gunjan's understanding....But yeh kya naya twist daala...
Favourite lines
The one where Mayu talks abt his dates and where Samrat tells what
does he see when he looks in the past
Jaldi update karna...yeh naya twist jo laaya hai is scaring me...
I just hope Samrat ko kuch na hua ho...😭
continue soon
Loads of Luv
🤗
Tina
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: TINAMALHONTRA

Hey Meela!!!⭐️
Vaah Kya update tha...👏 👏 👏
bahut sweet, touching and romantic....😳
Chalo main couple by couple jaati hoon
Mayur - Sirf mayank hi hai jo Nupur ko
chup karva sakta hai aur aise feel karva sakta hai...
Loved his reminding her of all the dates they had...😆
Benjim - Lagta hai yahan Rimjhim is the more responsible
of the two..Kitna khayal rakhti hai uska
Sajan - Far most aaj ke star couple...Kya perfomance tha dono
ka ekdum real...genuine...Samrat's realization ki whatdid he always miss...
and Gunjan's understanding....But yeh kya naya twist daala...
Favourite lines
The one where Mayu talks abt his dates and where Samrat tells what
does he see when he looks in the past
Jaldi update karna...yeh naya twist jo laaya hai is scaring me...
I just hope Samrat ko kuch na hua ho...😭
continue soon
Loads of Luv
🤗
Tina


wah kya reply hain!

dil itna khush ho gaya ki likhneka mood phirse aa gaya!

haan wo to hain! nupur ka muh me tala lagane ka kam to mayank sharma hi kar sakta hain!

aur benji ka to resposibility se dur dur tak talukat nahi tha tho he is developing some of tht now. aur rimjhim to hain hi aisi!

sajan thing came natural n believable nah??? well may be its becus i understand them very well😉!!or i m a very good writer??😉 aur both😉????.😆

aise hi likhte jana mere yaar!

luv ya a lot



Edited by amsjms - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi meela di! awesome update. plz continue soon. cant wait to read what happens next. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hi meela di! awesome update. plz continue soon. cant wait to read what happens next. 😊


thnx nishi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
update notifier:

the most recent update is on page 25

Edited by amsjms - 16 years ago

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