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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Deizy
heloo! Hi so ane more ff on np2...don'T U THINK guys we are being pampared!!!!! I don't think so... because I love this jodi even though the show ended...
lol

great loved the begining ...waiting for more to read I hope you will love reading this fan-fic like the other ones... 😳

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Mickey P

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: noha450
hihih agree with u!!

Huh! I'm confused in what you agree with! 😕

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Ashii.PrinCess
Heeyj Heye..What's sup?

Ohhhhhhh nice update mickey! Thanks a million for showering me with your love and courage, but I personally love your fan-fic with am_786 😛 and the storyline is also great!thank you

yust keep it up! will wait for part 2 !! I hope you like next part!

Hoping that the hunk is nihaal 😛😳 Could be!

keep going!!I will

love ashii,

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Mickey P

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: zainab.A
hey!!!!!! What's sup?
i really like ur FF... 😊Thank you
plz pm me....
i wanna read more... Alright... I'll pm you each time I update! 😛

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Mickey P

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sheetal00
grt prt Thank you
what about ur otha ff on AK??

tht was allsoo realiii good I hope you received the pm I send you which explains about that fan-fic! 😛

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Mickey P

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

I would like to thank everyone for showering me with your guys love and couragement... thanks for the love! I promise to never disppoint any of my readers and please do correct me if I make mistakes...

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Mickey P

Prerna's teacher assigned them a difficult essay… Prerna came home without having dinner she started working on her essay which prepares them for their midterm. Everyone was assigned different topics… Prerna's topic was about her "Prince Charming". Prerna knew what to write and being writing her paper but halfway she stops and edits her paper.

"This doesn't make sense" Prerna mumbles to herself and throws away her paper. Mahen notice his daughter getting frustrated over some assignment.

Mahen walks into her room…

"Is everything alright beta?" Mahen asked Prerna after patting her head.

"Papa… I thought I knew what to write about my prince charming but after I edit my paper it didn't make sense and now I am stuck. If I can't complete a mini essay within three hours than how will I write my paper two days from today?" Prerna complained to her father non-stop without taking a breathe in-between.

"Beta… first clam down than close your eyes" Prerna does whatever her father says "now visualize your prince charming" Prerna gets weird image of someone but not clear.

Huge mansion is shown in Canada… five in the morning, handsome hunk comes into his room and flops himself on the bed… his face is shown slightly not entirely….

Two hours later… elderly women gets up… does her morning routine… completes her morning prayers… step inside the kitchen to prepare everyone favorite desirable breakfast meanwhile, her husband wakes up and hugs her from behind inside the kitchen.

"Dev, what are you doing?" she complained to her husband.

"Ganga, can't I even say a proper good morning to my wife?" Dev complained to his wife.

"Dev… Hetal will come down any moment for her breakfast so leave me alone." Ganga reminds her husband…

Hetal comes running down the stairs but stops halfway noticing her parent's romances track is still going at this age.

"Did I disturb anyone?" Hetal walks into the kitchen with a smile.

Dev lets go of his wife Ganga…

"Absolutely not… beta" Dev mumbles before leaving the kitchen.

Hetal hugs her mother saying, "I'm luck to have such a cute loving parents who love us the most and each other" Ganga smiles.

Ganga sends Hetal to wake up her brother… Hetal walks into her brother's room… picks up his jacket from the floor.

Hetal watches her brother sleep for awhile than mumbles something into his ear… she notice her brother couldn't take the extra echoing noises and pulls up his blanket over his head.

Hetal shakes her head negatively…

Dev watches her daughter's effort in waking up her brother each day - but nobody tells him to come home five in the morning. Dev gets a new method in waking up his son… Dev runs down the stairs… into the kitchen and starts filling the tea kettle up with boiling hot water.

"Dev what are you doing with the tea kettle and why are you filling it up with boiling hot water which I made for our kids' green tea?" Ganga asked her husband.

Dev left without saying anything and Ganga follows him up to their son's bedroom….

"God… please protect my son from his own father who finds each day hew methods in waking up our son" Ganga prayed silently for her son.

Hetal tries again waking up her brother gently by pulling his blanket off his head, but nothing would disturb his sleep…

Ganga smiles to herself… seeing her daughter's effort in waking up her brother and her husband's effort in making up new methods each day and before he uses his method to wake up our son… suddenly she gets idea and snaps her finger.

Dev gave his son two minutes to wake up or else he is going to pout hot boiled water over him.

Ganga taps her husband's left shoulders and says "why don't you and Hetal go downstairs and I'll wake up our son?"

Dev knew his wife and son pretty well so he never gets a chance to use his method in waking up his son… only one time he got to use his method in waking up his son.

Dev smiled at his wife and left…

Hetal followed her father downstairs… toward the living room.

Ganga gently rubs her son's back… Nihaal placed his head on his mother's lap.

"Nihaal my son… why do you like getting on your father's nerve lately?" Ganga asked him while rubbing his head gently with love.

Nihaal buried his face deep down inside his mother's lap and mumbles "my morning doesn't start without my mother waking me up each day with her motherly love".

Ganga smiled and kissed her son's forehead - afterwards whispered something into his ear which woke Nihaal up widely….

"Mom" Nihaal get's out of his bed "just two minutes" he rushed inside his bathroom but before closing the door he says "I'll be downstairs soon and begin having breakfast without me" Ganga leaves her son alone to get dressed.

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Preview: Hetal isn't excited about moving to India like Nihaal…!

Edited by Mp_Desigirl - 16 years ago

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Ashii

@Barishkiduaa

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

heyy hey,,

waaaaaaaaaaaauww... lovelyy update hun!! keep it up
will wait for pt 3 !!!

love ashii

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Deizy

@Deizy

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

loved it...prerna and dev relacion is great ,nihaal come back at 5 in the morning..awwww.what is the secret!!!!!

afterwards whispered something into his ear which woke Nihaal up widely….

cntn ssonnn

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Noha

@noha450

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Mp_Desigirl
thanks for building up my courage and please can you put my fan-fic link in P2 and Nihaal's fan club so other people can read it too... 😳

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Mickey P

u welcome hun and yes i already add it😃