Opposite Thoughts (AK,SK,AR,KA ff) NoTe on pg 61 - Page 3

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hey... nice character sketch... :)
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my dear... plz stop keeping me curious....
nice promo... wonder who r these people
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Originally posted by: zainab.A

hey... nice character sketch... :)
continue soon... ;)

thnkc for ur coments😊.
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my dear... plz stop keeping me curious....

nice promo... wonder who r these people

thnkx for ur coments😊.
just wait for some time and ll update 1st part 😊.
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thanks for pm

great intro
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

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Part 1 –

We see a room full of motivative posters on one wall, shah rukh khan's poster on the opposite wall and the wall in the back of the bed is full of photographs of the girl alone, with her family and friends. We see a girl lying on the bed and crying.

There is a knock on the door but the girl didn't replied anything. A lady is seen coming inside the room.

Gayatri – beta, beta kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho? Jab se tum Mumbai se aayi ho bahut chup ho aur kuch nahi bata rahi ki kya hua? Sab thik toh hai naa? Tumhe wahan kisi ne kuch kaha koi tumhe hurt kiya?😕

Girl – mom I'm sorry maine aap logo ko hurt kiya hai, maine aapki aur dad ki baat kabhi nahi mani. Maine ridz di ko bhi bhaut hurt kiya hai. Main bahut buri hoon 😭.

Gayatri – nahi beta tumne hurt nahi kiya hai, kripa kya hua?(yes the girl is kripa)

Kripa – mom Mumbai mein mujhe mishti di ke bare mein pata chala. Vo bahut buri hai, she is selfish, rude egoistic, she only wants to be centre of attraction, she wants herself to be the best, she pretends that she is the most simple, sweetest girl in this world. 😭

Gayatri – I told you never believe her but you always did kripa 😕.

Kripa – I always believed her, I trusted her more than anyone else and actually after him I trusted her the most. But she broked my trust mom, she is really very bad mom 😭😡😡.

Gayatri – what you gained by trusting her beta?😕

Kripa – I know I was wrong. What I did to ridz di was wrong. She loved me so much and I hated her .

Gayatri – kripa jo hua bhul jao, aur ridz se baat karo.

Kripa – mom mujhe mein itni gutts nahi hai jo main ridz di se baat kar sakun.

Gayatri – thik hai beta jab tumhe thik lage tab baat karna waise bhi vo tumse kabhi angry nahi thi aur naa hogi you know what you mean to her.

Kripa – okay mom, haan mom is liye mujhme gutts nahi hai.

Gayatri leaves and kripa thinks about her past since childhood, till now.

Flashback – 15 years back when they were in school, and surya was posted in assam.

Surya – riddhima, kripa.

Ridz - papa aap aa gaye. how was your trip?

Surya – haan beta how r u? kripa kahan hai?

Ridz – apne room mein hai, I'm fine. Papa kal se mera 12th ka final practicals start hoga.

Surya – so preparation kaisa hai? Waise toh meri topper beti hai good preparation hogi.

Kripa – papa aapke liye toh sirf aapki badi beti hi sab kuch hai, main kuch nahi.

Surya – are tum dono mere liye ek jaisi ho?

Kripa – haan tabhi toh har imp baat mein sirf ridz hi rahti hai, magar main kahan?

Gayatri – kripaaa kya bol rahi ho? Ridz tumse badi hai is liye jab tum bhi uske jaisi badi ho jaogi tab…..

Kripa – mom tab toh ridz aur badi hogi aur jayada mature, main kahan exist karti hoon aapk logo ke life mein.

Ridz – kripa aisa nahi hai tu toh hum sab ki jaan hai, aur….

Kripa – bas step sister, yeh apna show off kahin aur karna yahan koi zarurat nahi hai.

saying this Kripa goes to her room.

Gayatri – sorry beta vo….

Ridz – mom aap kyun sorry bol rahi hai, kripa mujhe apni step sister treat karti ho magar vo meri apni small sister hai, aur mujhe uski baato ka bura nahi lagta, choti hai usmay maturity nahi hai naa. Aap log kyun sad hai.

Surya – pata nahi kripa kab samjhegi ki ridz usse kitna pyar karti hai.

Gayatri – pata nahi usse kaun ridz ke against kar diya hai.

well my readers of my 1st ff ll defintely kill me for small part 😆

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