You're the one for me(new part pg 31)

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Posted: 16 years ago

Heyy guys im back with another ff,i know many of you think that i already have two ff's and dont update those...But i really had this idea in mind and i really wanted to share it...I will start this fanfic from june 11th after my exams end...Ive decided i will allocate days to my fanfics...But for now im posting the intro ill decide the name later....If u want me to continue do tell me......Ill post the character sketch tomm and then continue from next month 
Other fanfics i write
 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1055498(pyar ki ek kahaani) 
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1127486
(path which led to love) 
Parts and pages 
Intro pg 1 
Character sketch pg 8 
Part 1:PG 12 
Part 2:PG 16 
Part 3:PG 20

Part 4:PG 25 Pm list http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=Preeti_285 http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=KaSu_Foreva http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=DMG4EVER http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=karan%27%27%27%27s+archita http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=susha11 http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=cutie_yachu http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=ammygurl http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=aishar http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=aish_punk http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=nidha1983 http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=Riddss http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=Ranji_0876 http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=riddhima1 http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=angullgrl91 http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=frnd.of.frndz http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=ridzi830 http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=Robin_M http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=karannida http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=disco_diva http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=pari0706 http://www.india-forums.com/pm_new_message_form.asp?name=cutie_mahima

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Alu-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Intro
She walked up to the car park in the bitterly cold night, where they had decided to meet, looking as fragile as a deer standing for the first time. So many thoughts were running through her head asking her why he had sent that text "We need to talk". As she was walking along the desolate street she thought of all the possible things he could say, hoping that it wasn't the worst that came to mind. It was freezing cold, ice and started to settle on the ground as it was hitting 10 o'clock. She was thirty seconds away from meeting him, he was waiting just around the corner, she took a deep icy breath and walked over to the meeting point.
She saw him standing by the lamp post, with a saddened look on his face. She sat down by where he was standing,"Tell me" she said "What's going on?" haven't been completely honest with you, and the guilt is building up so much so I think I'm going to explode". She looked into his dark misty eyes, preparing for the worst. "Just tell me, what is it?" she asked with a tear forming in her eye, her heart racing, fearing the worst. "I'm sorry but, I think I still love my ex". She sat still, stunned. "Well, I'm speechless", a tear fell to the cold concrete floor. She was shaking from fear of losing him, her hands were red raw from the cold. "Your shaking, you must be freezing", he took hold of her hands in attempt to stop the violent shakes. "So, what do you want? Do you want to be with her?" she questioned, with fear in her voice,.."I still love her,and she realized she loves me to,therefore yes i want to be with her i just cant take her of my mind"He said..Tears once again rolled down her eyes she loved him to a great extent... She rose to her feet and whispered in his ear "Thank you for being honest" and turned round as she started to walk down the quiet street. into the distance.

He sat with his two best friends at star bucks coffee shop this was their favorite hang out place,the three were always spotted be at night or at day....A girl in blue salwar suit walked up to him "Heard you two broke up last night"She said...He rolled his eyes signaling his friends to shoo her away...."Can i take a seat"She asked...He dint know what to do and his friends weren't helping him much either......This girl had been after him for ages now and he dint know what to do....

"She ran home crying, "What's wrong "asked one of her best friends..."He broke up with me, he said he still loves his ex "she cried.."I told you he wasn't worth you but you insisted he was madly in love with you" Said her friend annoyed."He did love me until his ex Nikita came back" She said...Come on be realistic sis the word love never existed in his dictionary"...."What will I do now i was so sure that he called me their to propose to me, I told mom and dad that to "She said.."One question did you ever sleep with him "asks her sister."Of course not he wanted to do it now but I told him well have to wait until we get married "She said..."Thank god, else you'd have been pregnant "Said her sister..."Can you stop this constant questioning of yours, its making her more upset" Said her friend..."Do mom dad know he dumped you" asked her sister.."I haven't told them as yet but I will have to "She replies

"We warned you so many times but you refused to listen to us, now you can face the consequences "Said her father…"I never trusted him, I Knew he would dump you one day only reason I agreed to you seeing him was because of your mom "Said her dad...."What did he say why did he dump you" Asked her mom consoling her….She dictated everything that had happened "You're lucky you weren't engaged else we'd have to face the societies questions "said her father…"Can you stop it "Said his wife…."As you promised now you have to do what we say "Said her father…."Dad I promised you and ill keep my promise, I know by dating him I screwed up my life and I've realized I should leave my decisions up to you guys" she says…"I'm glad you've realized your mistakes and that's enough for me" Says her father…They have a family hug and she sheds out all her tears…They tell her its time she lets go her past and thinks about her future….

"Why are you after me, you come down here every day hoping ill go out with you "He said..."I really like you "She replies..."Can you stop bothering him he's least interested in you "Said his best friends...This brought tears in her eyes, she was the chipkoo sort of girls....She had always taken this guys sweetness to be love for her but today his friend had cleared everything out, this guys was least interested in her....She ran out of their hoping that if not love her he'd be a good friend..."That's was not one of the nicest ways to speak to that girl" he said.."Sorry buddy but she had to know that you were least but interested her said "His friend..."You made her cry, and you know I hurt tears in girls eyes "He said...."Come on be realistic she was so freaking pissing of" Says his girl best friend..."Now ill have to go apologize to her because of your rude behavior "he says.....

"Mom, how can you just set me up with some random, girl "He says..."Come on son ,your sheetal aunty knows her well and she said she's very sweet girl very sanskari" Says his mother..." Don't you know I'm waiting "He says softly ..."Waiting for what" Asks his mom over hearing what he said..."Waiting for the love of his life to come "Say his best friends...

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Alu-

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Posted: 16 years ago

So many veiws none want me to continue

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Riddhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

heyy dear,
nice concept
continue soon

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Alu-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyy dear,
nice concept
continue soon

Will start next month but character sketch tomm

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Nidha

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Posted: 16 years ago

woah🤗 its really sound interesting one⭐️ superb dear😍 plz continue it soon😛😉 & thanks for the pm😳

"Difference Between Smile And Your Face Is That
Smile Is Something Nice To See On Your Face,
But Your Face Is Something Nice To See Always,
Even Without A Smile."

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Misha Rai

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Posted: 16 years ago

Aliya .. wow ur on thr roll man .. the next Rohit! He-he .. plz continue this soon! Im so confusd .. plz!

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Alu-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER
Aliya .. wow ur on thr roll man .. the next Rohit! He-he .. plz continue this soon! Im so confusd .. plz!

Your confusions will be cleared by the character sketch
But the thing is my intros the only good thing dont know about the rest
But ill start properly writing next month