The Unsolved Mystery(MN) PART-18 PG-141 31/12 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
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RECAP:
MN meet SG & RD.They all go to London.Nupur gets a call from the mysterious man.She is scared & tells mayank.Some cute MN scenes.After dinner Nupur comes back to her room & is shocked & screams.
PART 4:
Everyone heard nupur's scream & gathered in her room.She was too scared & standing with her mouth open.Gunjan was the first one to reach her room.Even she was shocked at what she saw & was trying to control nupur.By the time other girls behind her were busy gossiping about her.Mayank,samrat & RV also came & made their way towards nupur.They were also shocked when they saw what was written on the wall.Someone had written something with blood.It read: "YOU ARE DEAD"
As soon as nupur saw mayank she hugged him tightly & started crying hysterically.
N: mayank maine kahaa tha na koi toh hai jo mere peeche padaa hai….
Mayank exchanged worried look with samrat.Gunjan saw this.
G: yeh tum dono ek doosre ko aise kyu dekh rahe ho???
S: woh…. Actually…gunji….(looking at mayank & questioning what to say)
M(closing his eyes): I'm sorry nupur….main nahi jaan ta tha tum itna dar jaogi…
N(leaving him & looking into his eyes): kya matlab????
M: woh…. Yeh sab…actually maine aur samrat ne kiya….it was just a small prank…
N(couldn't believe her ears): tumne…..tumne yeh sab kiya????
Hearing this all others groaned as to it was a waste of time to stand there & it was a stupid prank.They went away giving stupid looks.Dia was heard telling 'showoff' as she disappeared with the crowd.Gunjan was fuming with anger & gave a disgusted look to samrat & went to her room.Samrat followed her for apologizing.Only MN were left now in their room.Nupur went away towards the window not knowing what to do or what to say.Never in her life had she been so scared & today the person who removes her fears is the cause of her fear.She was too angry with mayank.Mayank made his way towards her.
M: dekho nupur I'm sorry….main jaan ta hu mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha…main nahi jaan ta tha tum itna darr jaogi….maine aur samrat ne yahi socha ki thoda mazaak karenge toh yahaan ki life mein bhi jaan aaegi….please nupur kuch toh bolo….
N: leave..
M: kya???
N: maine kahaan yahaan se chale jaoo….mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni….
M: nahi jab tak tum mujhe maaf nahi karti main yahaan se nahi jaooga….
N(turning around): AAKHIR TUM CHAHTE KYA HO????MERI JAAN NIKAALKAR TUMHE KHUSHI NAHI MILLI KYA???MAZAAK…..ITNA GANDHA MAZAAK KARKE TUMHE LAGAA KI YAHAAN KI LIFE MEIN BHI JAAN AA JAAEGI????MERI JAAN NIKAALKAR SHAYAD TUMHAARI LIFE MEIN JAAN AA JAAGI MR.MAYANK SHARMA PAR TUMHE YEH SAB KARNE KA KOI HAQ NAHI HAI…TUM JAANTE HO PEHLE SI HI MAIN KITNI DARRI HUI HOON…HAR WAQT MUJHE LAGTA HAI KI KOI MERA PEECHA KARTA HAI….AUR WOH PHONE CALL WOH TUMNE KARWAAYA HOGA….KYU MR.SHARMA???
M(shaking her): pagal ho gayi ho kya??main yeh sab karooga???tumhaari jaan nikaal kar mujhe khusi millegi?tum jaanti ho tum meri life mein kya maainey rakhti ho….mera yakeen karo mera tumhe rulaane ka koi maksad nahi tha…tum jaanti ho tumhaare aankh mein aansoo aaye toh mera dil kitna rota hai….mujhe lagta tha tum bahut bahadur ho aur main samrat ko bhi yahi bataana chahta tha ki tum darpok nahi ho….
N: haan main darpok hoon….jab mujhe lagta hai koi mujhe tumse door kar dega tab mujhe darr lagta hai….jab mujhe lagta hai tum mujhe chod doge tab mujhe darr lagta hai….aur aaj kal mujhe yeh ehsaas ho raha hai ki mere saath bahut bura honewalaa hai….kahi kuch bahut galat honewala hai….aisa lag raha hai ki humme koi alag karnewala hai…..par tumhe isse kya?
M: mere hote hue tumhaare saath kuch bura nahi hoga tum jaanti ho…aur humme kabhi koi alag nahi kar paega….maut bhi nahi…..
N(crying): pataa nahi kyu par jabse main yahaan aayi hoon mera mann bechain ho raha hai….tum nahi samjhoge…
M: toh samjhao mujhe tumhe kya ho raha hai???
N: main nahi samjha sakti…mujhe har baar lagta hai jaise koi mujhe dekh raha hai…koi mujhe sun raha hai….koi pal pal ki khabar rakh raha hai….yahaan kuch toh hone wala hai….
M: kya honewala hai?
N: pata nahi par kuch bura…bahut bura…
M: yeh sab tumhaara wahem hai…
N(crying more): main jaanti thi tum yahi kahoge isliye main tumhe kuch bataana nahi chahti thi…
M: tum fikar mat karo main tumhaare saath hoon….aisa kuch nahi hoga…shayad tum thak gayi ho isliye aisi behki baatein kar rahi ho….thoda aaraam kar lo….
N(hugging tightly): waada karo tum aisa mazaak dubaara nahi karoge….
M: pakka waada…aaj ke baad aisa kabhi nahi hoga….
They sat for a while talking here & there.Then nupur saw bandage on mayank's feet.
N: yeh kaise lagaa??
M: woh tumhaare kamre mein aaya tha tab galti se glass vaas gir gaya aur mere pair pe lagaa….
N: bahut achaa hua….serves you right….mujhe darrane ki sazaa bhagwaan ne pehle hi de di….
M(smiling): haan unhe bhi mera mazaak achaa nahi lagga….
N: toh yeh jo tumne deewaar par likha hai woh tumhaare khoon se hai???
M: pagal ho kya???yeh mera khoon nahi balki sauce hai…
N: par tum sauce kahaan se laaye??
M: yaad nahi dinner ke waqt main aur samrat dus minute ke liye gaayab ho gaye the???
N(wide eyed): tab tum mere kamre mein aaye the….
M(making puppy face): sorry…waise main jaanta tha tum naraaz jaroor ho jaogi….isliye tumhaare liye gift bhi saath main rakhaa tha….
N: kahaan hai mera gift???
M: ab zaroorat nahi…ab tum kahaan naraaz ho????
N(faking anger): dekho meri naak(nose) abhi bhi lambi hai aur gusse se fool rahi hai….iska matlab main abhi tak naraaz hoon….meri gift do warna yeh naak lambi hokar tum ko maaregi….
M(chuckling): achaa baba yeh lo…
He removes a box & gives it to her.She opens it to find a beautiful bracelet in it.She jumps with excitement & hugs him.
N: thank you thank you thank you.Ab tum roz aisi harkat kar sakte ho….
M: kyu???
N: toh roz mujhe manaane ke liye ek gift milegi..
M: jee nahi….main tumhe dubara rote hue nahi dekh sakta….par seriously aaj tumse zyaada main darr gaya tha…tumhe kabhi aise rote hue nahi dekha....mujhe lagaa tha deewar par yeh padhkar tum gusse se uss insaan ko dhoondho gi jisne yeh likha aur jab tumhe pataa chalega yeh maine likha hai toh tum mujhse naraaz ho jaoogi aur main tumhe gift se manaoga…..par tumne toh saare plan par paani daal diya….yuhi rone lagi....
N: jo hua usse chodo…chalo ab raat bahut ho gayi hai….jaakar so jaao…kal subah jaldi bhi toh uthna hai…
M: Ok.
Saying this he slept in her lap.
N(shaking him): yahaan nahi…apne kamre mein jaaoo….
M: par mujhe yahaan achi neend milegi…
N: shut up aur apne kamre mein jaoo……warna maar padhegi….
M: theek hai pehle meri good night kiss toh do…
N(kissing his cheek): khush ab jaoo…
Mayank bought his other cheek forward too.She kissed that & pulled him to the door.
M: ek aur baaki hai (showing his lips).
Nupur pushed him out of the room.
N: tumhaari sazaa…aaj ek kiss kum….(& closed the door smiling).
She felt relieved now.Mayank met samrat on the stairs.Even he had a hard time with gunjan.
S: tum nahi jaante mujhe kitna badaa lecture sun na padaa hai….mere kaan abhi bhi dookh rahe hai…aaj ke baad aisa mazaak kabhi kissi ladki ke saath na karoo….
Mayank laughed at his look.
Nupur wiped what was written on the wall with a cloth & laughed at her stupidness to believe it was blood.Then she looked at the side table & saw broken pieces of glass.There were footmarks of blood.She felt bad looking at the footmark.She thought about the pain mayank must have felt when the glass pierced his leg.She felt bad moreover about the attitude she showed to him.Never had she been so angry with him.She looked at the footmark going towards the wall.But she noticed there was another pair of footmark as well.This footmark was going towards the bathroom.She followed this footmark & went in the bathroom.The footmark ended near the washbasin.She looked upwards & was horrified to see something written on the mirror.Something written in shining red blood.It read:"WELCOME TO HELL"
She was once again shocked & then got angry.
N(to herself): yeh mayank bhi na…..bahar ek kaafi nahi tha kya….par iss baar main nahi daroogi….
Saying this she took a bucket full of water & threw it on mirror to remove the writing.Little did she realize there was a lot of difference between the 2 red colours.The red colour of sauce & that of blood were clearly different.
2 days passed by quite nicely.MN & SG got very close & so did RV.Dia was still alone.Everyone got busy attending workshops.They were being taught various things they had no clue about regarding modelling.But like the 2 days the 3rd day didn't last good.Nupur started getting dirty & disgusting messages from 'private number'.She wanted to show them to mayank but thought better of it.She felt it was some random model who might have got attracted to her & is sending these disgusting messages of sleeping with her.She decided to ignore the messages.She didn't want to trouble mayank with something as stupid as this.Not did once she think about the 'serial killer'.But things were getting out of control on the 4th day.The cheapness of messages was increasing.She then started getting calls from private number.Initially she ignored the calls too but the more she was ignoring the more they were increasing.She was so angry that she decided to bash up the person so that he doesn't repeat this.4th Night she angrily received the call.
N(shouting): hello
Man: tut…tut…kitna gussa karogi???itna gussa achaa nahi…
N(still shouting): kaun ho tum aur kya chahte ho????kyu mujhe tang kar rahe ho….
M: sirf tumhe chahta hoon….
N: bakwaas bandh karo warna police ko tumhaare peeche bhijwaa doongi….
M: hahahahaha…….police aaj tak mujhe pehchaan nahi paayi hai toh bhalaa mujhe pakdegi kaise???
N: aakhir kaun ho tum????
M: 26 days….
N: kya?
M: tumhaare life ke aakhri chabbis din baaki hai….jitna jee sakti ho jee lo….
& the line went dead.Nupur decided its high time she tells mayank about this.This guy was getting on her nerves now.Just then she received a MMS.She opened the MMS & was shocked to see a video clip.In the video clip someone(face was not seen) was drinking alcohol & a girl was sitting clotheless begging for her life & crying.The man was in total black clothes but the video didn't reveal his face.The man finished the bottle of alcohol & went towards the girl.The girl begged him to leave her but he only laughed.The remaining part of the video was covered in black & only the girls screams of letting her go could be heard while the man kept laughing.Then the man moved up & the girl's body could be seen lying on the floor.The girl was in deep pain.She couldn't even move.Then the man took the bottle of alcohol he had just emptied & hit it on the girls head.
Nupur was sweating after she saw this MMS.The girls body resembled something but she couldn't pinpoint it.It was something she felt she had seen before.She was scared as well as felt disgusted at the person who did something like this.Just then she heard scream of someone from the same floor.She ran & so did other girls & boys who heard the scream of terror.Everyone were terrified at what they saw.In the last room of the floor a girl was lying naked while her friend who had screamed on seeing the dead body was crying while sitting near it.Her dead body lay in the pool of blood.Nupur was shocked when she realized it was the same girl or rather the model whose MMS she got few minutes back & then it came to her mind the dead body was in same condition as was sapna's.That meant the guy who was after her & calling her was 'the serial killer'.Nupur fainted thinking about this.
Finally part 4 updated.Hope you like it.I tried keeping it not much scary.Thankssss to all those who love my ff & keep commenting.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
finally...........u have updated.
I will now read and then comment. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome. very nice. mindblowing.
I cant wait to read what happens next.
when r u updating?
plzzzzz update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wait so mayank is the killer???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nishithini

finally...........u have updated.

I will now read and then comment. 😃

exctly
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelz

wait so mayank is the killer???

confusion WAT cnt beleve it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
nyc update
trs me u r fab lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ooops pinky it was really a scary part yaar
it was really scaaaaaaaaaaaarrrry..
plz jaldise mayank ko pata cahl jaye
my hands are tremblg as i am typng this comment
by god !!!!..i am gonna have nightmares now
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
Oh no yaar!! This is getting scarier by the minute...but I'm loving the thrill!
This part was really a bit more spooky than before...!
Oh Nupur bhi na jab jo baat batani chahiye woh nahin batayegi Mayank ko!
And Mayank too...what was the need to do that prank...
But that last part when she got that call and MMS...was the most chilling one...
She has to tell Mayank now...!
On another note, I really liked their conversation in the room...cute!
Great job yaar...keep up with the spookyness...lol...
But please don;t let anything bad happen to Nupur!
Thanks for the PM.
Update soon!
Nidhi
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh no.......yaar koi nupz ko bachoa 😭 ....mayank ko woh prank nahi karna chahiye tha......oh god that mms....poor sapna....someone commented that mayank is the killer........is it true😲?if it is oh god iam fainting.....please don't do this.......update soon.pm me.😊

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