Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 46

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

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PART 58:
Raj light up his lighter & Sonia was standing right behind.. He is about to turn aur jaise he woh piche mudnewala hota hai light aa jaate hai..
Raj: chalo light toh aaye (lift door opened it was 17th floor where Raj wanted to go so came out & started walking away without even looking at the girl..)
Sonia: excusse me..thankx..(Raj stoped hearing this..and turned back with a smile..aur woh shock reh jaata hai qki woh ladki koi aur nahi Neha he hai..par isse pehle ke woh apne sense mein aata the lift door closed..)
Raj: O shitt!! (he went to stop the lift but the lift was already left..he wasted no time and got into other lift..he reached the ground floor & when he saw Neha was walking out of the hotel.. Woh itne teeze se uske peche bhaagta hai ke hotel mein har koi ussi ko dekh raha hota hai par isse pehle woh Neha tak pohach pata woh car mein bethke jaa chuki hoti hai.. Raj breathes were running very fast..so he stood catching her breath with only one thaught that Neha is alive but where he can find her love.. His cellphone rings..)
Raj: Angad ka phone hoga..
(he took out his cellphone and became too serious after reading the name which was flashing it was "SIR CHANDLOK" he quickly recieved the phone..
Raj: goodmorning sir..
CL: goodmorning captain..aap waha pohach gaye..
Raj: jee sir..
CL: raj..tum jante ho nah maine tumhe Raghvan wala case handle karne isliye diya hai qki tum Veer ke bete ho..lekin agar tum yeh case chodna chate ho toh..
Raj: jee nahi sir..mai yeh case nahi choduga..mai usse uske gunaho ki saza dilwa ke he rahuga..
CL: par Raj tum jante ho nah..hum waha London mein uska kuch nahi bigad sakte.. Raghvan bohat chalak hai..usne apne liye ek pehchan bana li hai.. Sujal Garewal uski pehchan..
(yeh sunte he Raj ko bohat bura lagta hai.. Woh jisne uske parents ko maara..woh jisne uske pehchan chenli..woh jiski wajah se uski prem kahani adhuri reh gayi.. Woh ussi ke pechan ke wajah se bacha hua hai..)
Raj: u don't worry sir.. Mai usse India wapas aane par majbur kardunga..
CL: mujhe tumse yahe umeed thi Raj.. Waise tumhari wife kaise hai..
Raj: ahhhh..woh..woh thik hai sir.. Gooday.. (he disconnects the phone..)
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(Raj went into Kripa's room in rush..)
Raj: kripa..
Kripa: kya hua Raj, tumhe kuch kehna tha kya..
Raj: haan kripa mujhe tumse kuch puchna hai..tumne mujhse itne badi baat q chupai..(he said in loud tone)
Kripa: tum kis bare baat kar rahe ho Raj..i am not getting it..
Raj: mai tumhari bestfriend ke bare mein baat kar raha hu..tumhe pata tha nah ke woh zinda hai..
(yeh sunte he Kripa was having a shocked expression on her face..)
Kripa: woh..mujhe iss bare pata tha..but ussi ne mujhe tumhe kuch bhi batane se mana kiya tha..
Raj: wow..usne mana kiya aur tum maan gayi.. Aur tum mujhse itne bare baat chupa kaise sakti ho..
Kripa: chupa toh hum bhi bohat kuch rahe hai..Angad se.. Tumhe nahi lagta hume Angad ko sab kuch bata dena chaheye..
Raj: kya..kya bataege hum usse woh jisse woh apna bestfriend manta hai..usne aaj tak aapne bare mein usse joh b kah
a woh sab jhut tha..yah yeh kahu ke mai ab tak sirf uska use kara aaya hu.. Sujal Garewal tak pohach ne.. Aur tum usse kya kahoge..jab usse humare rishtey ke bare mein pata chalega..(tears came from kripa's eyes)
Raj: nahi Kripa..hum nahi keh sakte Angad se kuch..atleast not now..
Kripa: par Angad mujhse bohat pyar karta hai..agar hum usse sab kuch bataege toh woh zarur samaj jaega..
Raj: kripa jaha tak mai Angad ko janta hu..woh sab kuch maaf kar sakta hai magar dhoka kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta..joh is waqt hum dono he usse de rahe hai..
(they both went into a deep thaught..)

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nice part but too confusing. waiting for more soon

PART 58 B
Kripa: lekin phir bhi..agar usse kisi aur se sachai pata chalege..toh usse bohat bura lagega..
Raj: tum bohat ziddi ho..bilkul apni bestfriend ki tarah..
Sonia: oh really..(a voice came from so every1 turned..) tum mere taarif karne ka ek mauka nahi chodoge nah..
(it was Sonia who said that..)
Raj: tum..zinda ho.. (he asked with a cofused expression on his face..)
Sonia: q tumhe bohat bura lag raha hai..
Raj: tum koi bhi sawal ka jawab seede tarah se nahe de sakti kya..
Sonia: nahi..qki tumhar koi bhi sawal seeda hota he nahe hai..
Raj: ohh great..aur tum kehte ho ke jhagda hamesha mai start karta hu..
Sonia: lekin jhagda start karne jaise harkatte tum he karte ho..
(kripa was trying to stop them..but woh dono kisiki baat sunne tab nah..)
Raj: tum nah..(he points finger to Sonia..)
Sonia: haan mai nah kya..(she holds raj's finger..)
Kripa: Stop itt!! (kripa shouted loudly..they both just saw her & saw eachother..& stopped fighting..) Koi tum dono ko dekhke bol sakta hai ke tum dono ke shaadi ko teen saal ho chuke hai.. (both Raj & Sonia was listening to them like small kids..)
Sonia: kripu..tu itne hyper q ho rahe hai..tu toh janti haina hum dono hamesha aise he milte hai..
Raj: haan..aur yeh toh acha he haina ke humari baato se yeh nahi pata chalta ke hum dono married hai..qki yaha agar kisi ko iss pata chal gaya toh humara sara plan kharab ho jaega..
Kripa: magar kaise..agar sabko tumhare aur Sonia ke rishtey ke bare mein pata chal gaya..kya hoga agar sabko yeh pata chal gaya ke mai tumhare behen hu.. (she looked at Raj..)
Sonia: mai batao..mere dad Raj ko gole maar denge..that's all..
Raj: thank u jane-mann..tumhe pata nahe hai..maine tumhe aur tumhare baato ko kitna miss kiya..
(he goes towards Sonia & huged her from behind & kissed her shoulder..)
Sonia: ohh really.. (she turned towards Raj..and he holds he waist bringing her closer..while Kripa was just looking at them and thinking "Oh god yeh mai kaha phas gayi"..)
Raj: waise jaan kal raat mera bag tumhare saat he exchange hua tha nah

..aur tumne mere sirt bhi pehne thi..
(sonia was shocked that how raj came to know about it..)
Sonia: how do u came to know about..
Raj: ur perfume sweetheart..mai isse kahi se b pehchan sakta hu..aur kal airport pe bhi maine tumhara perfume smell kiya tha..
Kripa: Vahh! vahh! Kya naak paaye hai..army mein toh tumhe he use karte hoge nah dead body dhudne mein..(raj picked up a pillow & trew it on kripa) ouch..
Raj: aur tumhe pata hai maine aaj wahe shirt pehna hai..(he whispered to sonia's ears)
Sonia: raj..u r so naughty..
Raj: yah..but only where u r around.. (he brings her more closer..)
Kripa: stop..yeh tum dono kya kar rahe ho..hum yaha important baat kar rahe hai..
Raj: hum joh kar rahe hai usse b zyada important..
Kripa: my god.. Sonia sahe thi joh tumhe usne uske zinda hone ke baat nahi batae..
(Raj looks at Sonia in a wierd manner..)
Raj: mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karne hai.. (he said sonia in a kiddish way..)
Sonia: q..
Raj: q..(teasingly)..qki tumne mujhe yeh nahe bataya ke tum zinda ho..mujhe yeh baat kab batane ka irada tha..mere sucide karne ke baad..woh toh acha hua joh kal Sanjeeda ne mujhe phone karke sab bata diya..
Sonia: ohh toh Sanjeeda ne tumhe sab bataya..ek baar woh mere saamne aa jaye..ek toh mere oscar ko bhi kidnap karke rakha hua hai..
Raj: ohh wow tumhara kutta..that's great..(he said in joy while sonia was looking her angrily)
Sonia: Raj agar tumne mere Oscar ko kutta kaha nah toh..(she points finger to raj)
Raj: toh kya karloge tum..(he holds sonia finger..)
Sonia: toh mai Kripa ko tumhare photos dikha dungi..
Raj: photos what photos..(with a ? Look)
Sonia: wahe jab tum girl hostel mein pakde gaye the..(yeh sunte he raj ke chehre ka rang udd jata hai).. Kripa tujhe tera bhai pehle kaisa tha..u know what jab yeh KMA mein cedit tha nah..toh usne jhut bolke ek mahine ki leave li aur mere hostel mein ladke banke rehne laga..
(Kripa was shock to know these thing about her brother..jab ki Raj..sonia ko uski pol kholne se rok raha hota hai..)
Raj: kripa tu iski baat matt sunn..tujhe toh pata he hai nah..yeh hamesha bakvaas karti rehte hai..(he looked at sonia..while she was just smilling looking at him..)
Kripa: wow..tum dono itne masti karte the..amazing..but that's really not done..tum dono ne mujhe Sujal aur Kashish ke kahani batai par kabhi apni kahani nahi batae..aur tum dono ko kab pata chala ke tum dono he Sujal aur Kashish ho..
Raj: bata de..
(he looked at Sonia..while she just smile and nodded her head saying yes..)

kitna mirch masala hai yarr.....raj sonia shadi shuda hai woh bhi teen saal se.....sonia ne raj se chupaya kyun tha ke woh zinda hai.....aur woh neha wala drama kis liye tha.....nywyzz jo bhi hai jaan ke khushi hui ke yeh shadi ke bandhan mein bandhe hue hai woh chota chota jo romance tha itni duriyon ke baad very cute tha....kripa raj ki sis hai good lakin yeh sab bichare angad ke saath kya game khel rahe hai... good update....... plz cont soon......luv aarti

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Originally posted by: pinky901

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ye kya twist hai dear

sab kuch gol gol ho gaya

pls confusion clear kro dear

bahut hi jhol hai

pls cont soon

cofusion he confusion hai..solution ka pata nahi..solution ka pata chala toh question kya tha pata nahi..haha..
Yaar Priyu mai tujhe kya batao..part likhte waqt mai khud he kitne confused the ke puch matt..suspence batana b tha aur nahi bhi batana tha.. This cofsion leds to Maha confused part..yaar isiliye toh maine kal pm nahi bheja tha..hehe..
Well ab maine aage likh liya hai..aur shayad iss part se tumhare thodi confusion durr ho.. Ab saare raaz ek part mein fod toh nahi sakte nah..aage ke liye bhi toh kuch bachana hai nah yaar..
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