Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 39

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow very nice part...........so the second half of the story has started.............sonia is neha and neha is sonia???????????????how she escaped the blast and cant wait to know more about sonia..............raj didnt get to see sonia but felt neha's presence............cont soon dear..............
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

wow very nice part...........so the second half of the story has started.............sonia is neha and neha is sonia???????????????how she escaped the blast and cant wait to know more about sonia..............raj didnt get to see sonia but felt neha's presence............cont soon dear..............


Heey Deepa thankx for reading and commenting.. Sonia is Neha ya nahi yeh toh lets see.. Sochna padega yaar qki phir woh kaise bachi yeh b batana padega nah..
See Ya..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice one.....I luved the line...."wo angelic face jisse dekhke har janam me Sujal ko apni Kashish se pyar hota hai"....it was beautiful.....n makes Sk sound eternal........lovely!!! And Raj ko Sonia k aane ka ehsaas hua.....hmm...wo to hona hi tha.....par wo log beech me kyun aa gaye.....my poor Raj kab se udaas hai....agar dekh leta Neha/Sonia ko kitna achha lagta usse.....but however I knw....they r gonna meet soon. But how does Sanjana knw Raj?? Hmm.....is it sumthing I missed or a new mystery?? Eager to knw dear....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice one.....I luved the line...."wo angelic face jisse dekhke har janam me Sujal ko apni Kashish se pyar hota hai"....it was beautiful.....n makes Sk sound eternal........lovely!!! And Raj ko Sonia k aane ka ehsaas hua.....hmm...wo to hona hi tha.....par wo log beech me kyun aa gaye.....my poor Raj kab se udaas hai....agar dekh leta Neha/Sonia ko kitna achha lagta usse.....but however I knw....they r gonna meet soon. But how does Sanjana knw Raj?? Hmm.....is it sumthing I missed or a new mystery?? Eager to knw dear....pls continue soon.


Hmmmm.. Woh angelic face wali line actually mai Aamna ki tarif mein kabi kanjusi nahi karti.. Aur i want to connect SK story in it..
Aur yaar woh logo ka beach aana zaruri tha.. Qki pyar mein mazza tab aata hai jab ashique tadapta hai aur Sujal ke fan itne isliye hai qki uske ashique hi aise thi..
Arre Sanjana nahi Sandeeda Sheikh.. Usse Raj ke bare mein isliye pata hai qki..ahh bata du kya becoz yeh subse bada suspence hai..
Thankx for Reading & Commenting..
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Posted: 15 years ago
kitna suspence hai ismein... yeh sanjeeda ko raj ka kaise pata hai.... neha ne bataya tha rootey rootey ek bar phone pe rite..??? sorry lakin kya neha aur soniya dono ek hi hai....?? jo bhi hai update achi thi very gudd raj soniya kab miley ge kassh woh log bich mein na aatey toh kitna ache rehta khair udas raj ki yeh halat hum se sahi nahi jaati ab jaldi se raj aur soniya ko milwa do ache baccho ki tarah ....... do cont soon luv aarti....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aarti-

kitnasuspence hai ismein... yeh sanjeeda ko raj ka kaise pata hai.... neha ne bataya tha rootey rootey ek bar phone pe rite..??? sorry lakin kya neha aur soniya dono ek hi hai....?? jo bhi hai update achi thi very gudd raj soniya kab miley ge kasshwoh log bich mein na aatey toh kitna ache rehtakhair udasraj ki yeh halat hum sesahi nahi jaati ab jaldi se raj aur soniya ko milwa do ache baccho ki tarah....... do cont soon luv aarti....


Hey Aarti thankx for reading & Commenting..
Yah i know bohat suspence hai mujhe toh lagta hai kahi mai hi nah story bhul jao..
Sonia is Neha.. Woh Neha kyu bani usme aisa q kiya woh toh baadme pata chalega.. Actually i dont want to confuse u guys more..
Hmmmm.. Woh log saamne aa gaye.. Woh toh obvious hai yaar itne aasani se thodi nah bichde hue preemiyo ko milaogi..
Raj ki yeh udas haalat toh mujhse bhi nahi dekhi jaa rahi hai toh mai unhe bohat jaldi milaogi.. Aur ek baat milne ke baad woh Raj ko pehchane gi b nahi..
See Ya..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

nice part......................con't soon


Thankx for Reading & Commenting Samrah..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 54:
Samrat is driving car while angad was talking to Raj.
Angad: "Raj yaar i am very nervous najane mein ghar jake sabko Kripa ke baare mein kya kahuga", he said nervously but Raj was lost in his thaughts.. "Oh god ab tu phir Devdas matt ban jana", he said geting irritatingly.
Raj: nahi yaar aise koi baat nahi hai, tu kuch keh raha tha.
Sam: "bhaiya keh rahe the, ke unhe bhabi", he paused. "i mean unke girlfriend ko ghar le jane se darr lag raha hai", he said amusingly.
Ang: "dekh chote aise koi baat nahi hai mai bas koi wrong step nahi lena chahta"
Raj: i think tum sahi keh rahe ho tumhe sahi waqt aane par sabko apne aur kripa ke baare mein batana hoga.
Sam: "excatly, aur is kaam ke liye kal se acha din toh ho hi nahi sakta,"he said happily.
(Angad got confused hearing this)
Ang: q kal kya hai?.
Sam: "ahh, actually bhai maine socha tha jab aap ayege toh apko surprise dunga lekin yaha toh aapne hi mujhe surprise de diya," he said looking to kripa.
Ang: "cut the crap Samrat baat kya hai?".
Sam: "hmm, toh sunye kal apke chote bhai ke," he paused..
Ang: "ab aage b bolega," angad said furiously.
Sam: "bhai kal mere engagement hai,"he said in a normal way.
Ang: "acha," he said normally when Samrat words clicked to his mind.. "what tere saggai ho rahe woh b kal, kisse? Aise achanak? Ladki kaise hai? Mujhe bataya q nahi?"
Sam: "as if apne hume apne girlfriend ke baare mein bataya tha"
Ang: chote tu..
Raj: "relax angad", he said to him calm down..
Ang: "lekin raj yeh, thik hai ladki kaun hai? kaise hai? Kuch toh bata"
Sam: "uska naam Sanaya hai bhai, woh mere collage friend hai aur hum ek dusre se bohat pyaar karte hai. Aap bas usse ek baar mil le jeye."
Ang: " tujhe toh mai," he said angrily.
Raj: "chill yaar dont overeact. So it's decided kal mai aur Kripa sedhe tumhe Samrat ki engagement pe milege aur tab tak tum apne family ko Kripa ke baare mein bata dena"
Ang: "what, iska matlab tum dono abi humare saat ghar nahi aa rahe"
Raj: "nahi aaj hum kisi hotel mein reh lenge aur kal shaam toh hum mil hi rahe haina"
Sam: "yah, i guess it's a good idea mai aap dono ko hotel mein drop kar deta hu,"
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(In Sonia's car there was pin drop silence.. She was siting behind while her other friends was looking each other.. Sonia felt that something is going between them as she has saw them so quite.. Sanaya was looking at Sanjeeda face while Sanjeeda was looking to her & Sonia was just siting quite behind observing their behaviour..)
Soni: "so, is there something which u guys wanted to tell me," she asked confusingly..
Sana: "yes", she said loudly
Sanj: "no," they both said at the same time & sonia got even more desperate to know about it.. "ahh actually yes", sanjeeda said.
Soni: "what," she said angrily & the two girls again started looking each other.. "oh god now stop giving each other this look & Sanaya keep ur eyes in front u r driving i guess,"she said it with even more anger..
Sanj: "actually there is a good news & a bad news for u, which one first," she said in a funny way..
Soni: "Sanju, i am not in a mood of playing games," she said in a tired way..
Sana: "tell the good one 1st,"sanaya wispered to sajeeda..
Sanj: "ok so the good news is,"she paused.."Sanaya is going to get engaged tommorrow",she said happily..
Soni: "what, with whom, with Samrat? Why didnt u guys told me earlier about it," her whole anger & tiredness was vanished litening this when suddenly the thaught of knowing the bad news came to her mind.. "ahh, ok now what's the bad news," she said desperately & the two girl again start looking each other.. "Oh god now just stop this thing and speak up", she said furiously..
Sanj: "actually Sonia ur came to know that u were not in London from last 6 months"
Soni: what dad ko pata chal gaya par kaise, woh toh usually saal mein ek baar aate hai..ehh, woh kya kehte hai hindi mein, yah sangat ka asar bohat jaldi hota hai but u guys r of no use..bachpan se ek dusre ke saat hai aur ab tak mujhse ek jhute bolna b nahi sikha..i hate u guys for this..
Sana: "aur ab toh tum ghar b nahi jaa sakte tumhare dad joh hoge waha tumhara svagat karne ke liye," she said inocently..
Soni: "oh fish now i cant go there,"she said slowly..
Sanj: "Oh C'mon yaar woh tere dad hai thodi nah tujhe jaan se maar denge", she tries to convince her..
Soni: "huh, are u out of ur mind Sanju. Unke lecture hi kafi hote hai kisi ko sucide attempt karne ke liye majbur karne ke liye. U know what, agar unhe border pe khada karde nah toh samnewale country unke baate sunke hi give up kar denge..he's like Modern Hitler"
Sana: "U never told me that u r from Germany," she said inocently..
Sanj: Soni tu humare saat chal.
Soni: no way, now i can't trust u guys aaj toh mai hotel mein rahuge & tomoror i'll decide how to get out of this mess.
Sana: "hotel why", she said slowly but Sonia was looking her with anger. "Ok, which hotel"
Soni: Parish
(Samrat stops his car in front of hotel & it was the same Hotel where Sonia was going to come..)

Sam: "So here's the hotel"
Raj: "Thankx dude yaha se hum khud hi chale jaege..chale kripa",raj said.
(every1 came out of the car)
Kri: "ahh bye angad", kripa said polietly while angad huged her tightly.. Raj looked at them & stats remembering his past..his love..
FLASHBACK
Neha: "Acha raj mujhe yeh batao..agar mujhe kuch ho jaega toh tum kya karoge", she asked polietly.
Raj: "Hmm..tumhe kya lagta hai", he asked sweetly.
Neha: "Mujhe lagta hai ke mujhe kuch hote hi tum dusri ladkiyo ke saat flirting start kardoge aur Sunita se shaadi b kar loge", she said in a kidish way.
Raj: "Arrey tumhe mere future plans ke baare mein kaise pata chala", he said teasingly..
Neha: "What? I hate u..tum mujhse zara bhi pyar nahi karte..mujhe hamesha pareshan karte rehte ho..dekhna jab mai tumhe chodke chale jaoge nah tab tum roote rahoge", she said innocently.
END OF FLASHBACK
A tear falls from Raj eyes..
Raj: "Tum sahi thi Neha..like always..lekin ek baat tumne bilkul galat kahi hai..ke mai tumse pyar nahi karta balki mai tumse jitna pyar karta hu utna pyar koi b kisi se nahi karta hoga..qki kisi ke paas tum joh nahi ho", he said it deep from his heart.
(Raj & Kripa went inside the hotel)
Recep: "How can i help u sir", he asked.
Raj: "We want 2 room", he replied.
Recep: "Ahh let me check sir..yah we are having 2 rooms but one is at 17th floor & the other on 24th floor", he replied polietly.
Raj: "Can't we have 2 rooms on the same floor", raj said.
Recep: "Actually we r having 2 rooms on 24th floor but the room is not for guest", he replied.
Kri: "It's ok Raj we we'll manage", she convinced him.
Raj: "Ok give me the keys", he said polietly.
Recep: "here r ur keys sir..we'll send ur lugages to ur room", he replied.
(Raj & Kripa went in the elevator & Sonia entered the hotel at the same time)
Soni: "Hey Steve my keys please", she said frankly.
Recep: "Here is ur keys princess..saw u after a long time Sania..
Soni: "Yah actually i was not here..and Steve my name is Soniya not Sania", she replied polietly.
Sanj: "Ahh Sonia r u sure u r gonna stay here..i mean apni hi hotel mein..yaha ke staff ne tere dad ko bata diya toh..",she asked.
Soni: "Well u dont need to worry about that..these people are very loyal not like u guys..now leave",she said angrily & walked inside the elevator.
Sana: "Yah but kal tum mere engagement mein toh aa rahe hona..qki jab tak tum nahi aaogi mai ring nahi pehnugi", she shouted.
Sanj: "Oh hello woh gayi..ab hum chale kal bohat kaam karna hai", saying this the left.
Recep: " hey Mickheal", he called the room boy.. "just keep these lugagage to their respective rooms..this blue bag to the lady room at 1705 & the black bag..oh oo", he got confused becoz Raj & Sonia's bag was totally same.. "ahh keep the left one in 2401 & the right one in 2408..i hope it's right.." he said to himself.
(The room boy left the lugage in their room..while Raj & Sonia bag was already exchange..& were staying AamneSaamne)
END
Edited by afreenaamna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hehe...cool....Raj n Soniya's bags got exchanged....hope at least this causes them to meet. Raj's flashbak was very touchy....I'm al the more eager to knw wats the 'raaz' of this Neha n Soniya.

And Soniya k apne dad ke bare me kaafi achhe vichar hai....hehe. That was funny. And Samrat here is all the more funny....telling his bro abt his engagement so coolly....hehe.

It was overall a very gud part....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
👏Awesome , Mind Blowing ....Razz👏Raj Ka Awesome ...I love it its too good Now Neha aur sonia ki bariiii😛 Thank you for pm & Happy New Year Pl conti soon.
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