AR mini *Breaking of a new dawn* pt 3 pg 24 12/06 - Page 17

Originally posted by: cutie13

gr8 part

ar always so cute whenever they fiight lol

cant wait to see ar kiss scene

cont soon

thanx a ton tahira...

Originally posted by: kaavya13

rav!!
its soon gud!
i cnt wait :):)
ur just awesome :D:D
muahh :)
p.s :update fastt plssss !! :)

heyya kav...🤗 and no hunny... YOU'RE awesum....😳😳😳.. cheers as always!!!!

Hey Rav,
I am really sorry for the late comment, I was just busy lately and when I came back their were lots of FF to catch up.
Coming to the parts, I t was really great I really loved it.
It was too good.
AR first meeting was awesome, they really behave sometime like kids.
I completely loved them.
Their fight for chocolate was awesome.
The last bit was amazing. So AR kissed 😳.
I am really looking forward for the remaining flashback and present itself.
Pls continue soon and thnx for the PM.

Kashish

hey!!!

good one yaar...

really liked it....mirchi...cool name ha...

and precap ...ohh plz update soon and pm me plz..

Aww Rav, this FF is amazing too ...
I really really loved the *Cadbury scene* .. After reading it, i so feel like having it .. ha ha .. So Ridhima's married to Abhimanyu :( .. I guess i've to read on in order to find out .. The precap's cool huh ..
Update soon ..

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Rav,
I am really sorry for the late comment, I was just busy lately and when I came back their were lots of FF to catch up.
Coming to the parts, I t was really great I really loved it.
It was too good.
AR first meeting was awesome, they really behave sometime like kids.
I completely loved them.
Their fight for chocolate was awesome.
The last bit was amazing. So AR kissed 😳.
I am really looking forward for the remaining flashback and present itself.
Pls continue soon and thnx for the PM.

Kashish

thankyou a ton kashi... glad u like it hun....😳

*reserved*

will get back once i hv finished reading all the parts...!! =)

*Edited*


Hey Di..!
Finally I am here, sorry for being late...!!

Hmm.. Let's start. I will try and give long long replies just as you do and make you real happy...!! Done??

First the title...Di I loved that. the title just matched the introduction where you showed Ridhima frustrated bcoz of the bad weather. I love the way you started the story. I felt it was like just coming out of a novel or something. Believe me Di it was that good...!

I was really surprised and put my little brain to work on the issue of Ridhima. Armaan and she are friends and she is married to Abhimanyu!! Kuch nahi hota.. you will bring them together since the pair is AR...see my little brain really worked!! 😃

The way you wrote the conversation between Armaan and Ridhima over the coffee was really nice. Calling each other names and tagging them with an 'OYE' was so cute. You used armaan's pet word nicely and smartly..!
I was laughing my head off when I read them fighting over the same bar of chocolate.And the names, MAN!!! They are so so so ______. I don't know....! I like them like them anything..!!
Miss Mirchi was the one I liked more... Armman was grining at Ridhima when he saw her...thinking about revenge..!! I likd the way you introduced Atul and Anjali...I adored their relationship..!

Okay now stop..!! Thanks for this ff DI..!!
Update soon ..!

Love you TONS..!
Swati...



I was like this after reading your story..!!Thanks and LOVE YOU..!!
Muuuaaahhh..!

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!!

good one yaar...

really liked it....mirchi...cool name ha...

and precap ...ohh plz update soon and pm me plz..

thnx a lot dipi... will pm hunny... mwwaaahhhhzzz

Originally posted by: -Rukz-

Aww Rav, this FF is amazing too ...
I really really loved the *Cadbury scene* .. After reading it, i so feel like having it .. ha ha .. So Ridhima's married to Abhimanyu :( .. I guess i've to read on in order to find out .. The precap's cool huh ..
Update soon ..

heyya ruki...*hugs* thnx a ton hunny... oh jus remembered... oh yes u will.....😆😆

Originally posted by: swati939

*reserved*

will get back once i hv finished reading all the parts...!! =)

heyya bacha...😆... will wait..😳