Lost Love2[AR]!~Pt 16 p53 UPD 20/7 - Page 25

Originally posted by: blessing-beauty

hey rohit

da part was exceptionally beautiful loved each n every line of it .👏

I Am glad that you did dear

it was mindblowing

ridz emotions n armaanz feeling was very nicely written

Thanks for compliment

cont soon...........

Originally posted by: dmgaddict

hey rohit

haaaayyhh yeh barish !!!!!

loved the part I Am glad that you did

armaan took care of ridhima soo lovingly

oh nooo he died..you made her dad die🥺 Yeah i had to make him die, or why woudl she leave??

cant wait for the next part

thanks a lot for the pm

~anjie

Originally posted by: Prit_0987

reserv bhai will read it tomorrow

Originally posted by: tzahra

Hey Rohit,

that was awesome yaar beautiful,

aw poor Ridz and where did Armaan went yaar,

and how Armaan behaved with her beast to angel good,

part was greap very nice.

Originally posted by: janu1610

Rohit Significant part dear..I love ur style to listen inner voice of one's own self.

Thanks dear, i am glad that you love it

less conversation yet lots of inner voices.Yes that is what my style is lesser dialogues..

Ridhima's suffering was unbearable nd he found warmth in his arms.
Yes she did, trhat was how love is...Feel warmth in the arms of person giving her that pain

"Absence diminishes small loves and increases great ones, as the wind blows out the candle and blows up the bonfire....."
~ Franois de La Rouchefoucauld

His double mind ,his confusion, shows a human nature .
Armaan reached out to her in her grief to console her.
Armaan love her from bottom of his heart but he committed a blunder to left her alone in the morning.

Yes he did that blunder, he was scared and ashamed to see her after doing that

What was his problem?Why he left her is another question? Yes that was what he did
Ifelt pain for Ridzi he lost all he had her love, her father , her self respect .

I MUST SAY
Yaar tum jab be karte ho kamaal karte ho. Dil hi nikal lete ho.

Awww...Thanks dear, your comment always makes me feel on the top😉





Kabhi..
Jo Ehsas Ho..
Aapko
Mery Ehsas Ka..!
Mery Junoon Ka..!
Mari Mohabbat Ka..!
Fakat...! Itna Kar
Dena,
Mujhe aap
( Apna )
Keh dena....!!

u r going some where dear.?20 days mean?

neah no where, just little busy from now on...!!!

thanks for pm
love n hugs.
ritu

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

it was awesome.plz continue soon.

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

interesting indeed rohit, definitely the turning point in their relationship

Originally posted by: zhasan2

wow ..but did armaan really leave? ugh if he did i soo hate him atm..plz cont soon! thx for the pm

Originally posted by: kshanikaa

hey rohit............. first of all a big thankssssss for updating this ff again 😊 ....thats so sweet of u.

Thanks dear and you are welcome for the update, i cant keep myself from uploading the part. i had written it together but didnt posted it.😆

about the part... i liked that armaan was realising his mistake...... he felt miserable for riddhima.... but sunlight was falling over her face at 10 pm???😆 i think there was some mistake.

Yeah it is a mistake, its moonlight. 😲😆😉
😆
i liked the part overall and specially this line- love her until all d pains apologize to her for even thinking of hurting her...... that line was awesome........ really. He loves her. I liked riddhima's part.

I Am glad that you did,

but i would like to add that i expected a lil bit more from this part........i felt something was missing. Because last 2-3 parts of dis ff have been simply phenomenal......

sorry to disappoint you, even i was looking to expand last scene a little more but to protect it from getting more emotional i just concluded there.


though i always loved dis ff but last parts made myself more committed towards dis ff. But dis part acc to me could not match well upto level attained by those epis......

I Would try to mark up with coming parts

and i just hope u dont curse me for saying this......... am sorryyyyyy if i hurt u. I know u devote a lot of time in writing but i just expressed my views for this part. Plz dont mind. Plzzz

You never do dear, you are free to tell what you feel for my fanfic it only inspires me to write better.

Originally posted by: teju22

hey relly nice update

but really sad that ridz lost everything

so sad :(((

plz cont soon