'Chori-Chori' (AK,SK,AR,KA,MP)..Pt 29/pg134,Jan13 - Page 9

fantastic part di

SUPERB PART!!!!!!

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waitin 4 kripa's entry...
cont soon.....

Api...You did it again..Faboulos part!!

Originally posted by: nycdesiqt

wow!!! i come back and this is the first thing i see lol!<br>i hope u didn't miss me much hehe i did though<br>3rd year of pharmacy school got to me this semester...couldn't keep up here in the fan fic world but i will be back in 2 weeks after finals and my comments willl start flowing<br>will also comment on haunting, ami je tomar, and this one later on<br>i love this one already it has all my fav couples<br>see ya soon :)<br><br>btw its Rima aka desiqt8806 (i changed my username)<br>

Hi Rima, welcome back! 😳
Yes I knew it was u by the desiqt in ur id. Howz everything? Exams over?
Ur in pharmacy school? Then I will ask u some questions along the way as AR are pharm students. 😃
Take ur time, Hun, no worries.

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part. Must say U hav managed to show each character very nicely. So Sujal's past is Kashish only. Thats really a gud news.

I'm happy the way Angad behaved wid his Dad. Even he supported Riddhima like an elder bro. This scene was really nice.

And of course Prachi n Riddhima's bond was also very sweet.

W8ing 4 the next part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

Thanks sumaiya!
Yes, Sujal and Kashish loved each other.
Angad and his Dad share a volatile relationship, always fighting. 😆

pallavi

i hope armaan is not part of robbery i don't want him to be like that don't make him negative pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
i like angad's character i want armaan to be like angad i can't take armaan supporting his father pzlzz

good bond btw ppadma-sujal..prachi-ridzi awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeee

and the way u introduces their hopuse breakfast is awsome do update sooon

5 scenes in a part different from one another,great start.😃Starting a fiction with robbery,great work😊Is josh one of the robbers.So Kashish is responsible for Sujal's heartbreak .How r they going to meet?When will Shabbir change,wat's the reason behind his moody behaviour towards Prachi.Well Angad behaviour towards his dad was right,so he lives in that house for his mother and brother😉.Why does Kashish support Kali and give money,can't she see that she is spoiling her. Riddima got caught by Armaan now,how she is going to escape?Does Armaan know about Riddi's love towards him?Continue................

awesum part.......

grt prt....each charater has a diifff past......angad fightin wid his dad funnny.......he stood up for kripa.......sujal n kashish already kno each otha....cant wait for kripas damakadar entry

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

<FONT color=#9900ff>hey di awesome and wonderful 1st part</FONT>

<FONT color=#9900ff>i like the wayu describe each family scene and i can understand it better</FONT>

<FONT color=#9900ff>i just hope that milind and armaan soon realize their love for prachi and ridhima</FONT>

<FONT color=#9900ff>ridz and prachi has nice bond so is with angad </FONT>

<FONT color=#9900ff>kashish's past is sujal wow so many secrets hehe</FONT>

<FONT color=#9900ff>can't wait to read for the next part </FONT>

<FONT color=#9900ff>pleaseeeeeeeeeeee continue soon</FONT>

<FONT color=#9900ff>love ya</FONT>

<FONT color=#9900ff>mittal</FONT>

Thanks sweeetie! 😃
Yeah I divided it into scenes so its easy to write and understand as action is happening in diff places at same time.
Kashish and Sujal loved each other, why they separated will be revealed later. Ridz and Prachi are in love with dumb clueless men. 😆

pallavi

Originally posted by: pinky901

cont soon

Thanks I will update once a week.

Originally posted by: sasik

nice part.

Thanks dear!

Originally posted by: spvd

wow superb part Pallavi di.....loved it...............i jus love the sujal kashish character.......sujal is always handsome and breath takin.....so sujal and kashish were together before.......wonder y they broke.........angad's character is quiet opposite from his dad........great start.........cont soon dear..........<br>

Thanks Deepa! 😃
Yeah I also liked SK a lot! I loved their pair. Why they broke up that raaz wil be revealed gradually.
Angad and Dad dont get along at all, they have diff values.

pallavi