Zindagani~FINAL EPIDOSE UPDATED 3/10 PG54 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ur welcome!!! 😃 😃 😃 anything for a good friend like you!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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This next part is dedicated to guli..thanks u saved me! LOL

Doc: She is now all right...we'll discharge her in the evening. Though she need best rest for ATLEAST a week maybe more depending on how she is doing. She need someone to take you have her and be with her the whole time. She should not walk much as she has fractured her right leg

KSH: thank u doc. Thank u..

Kshitj comes to see Kumud. He takes care of her. He feed her lunch. In the evening he has his sister Muskaan pick Kumud up.

[mu=muskaan]

MU: Hi bhabhie

K: Hi

MU: helps Kumud up and takes her to the car

They reach the hotel

Muskaan drops her to the door n leaves

Kshitij comes from behind and ties s cloth over her eyes

K: Kshitij? is that u

KSH: shhhh...

he puts a finger on her lips and takes her into the room

In the room he has lit candles everywher

He takes off the blind fold

Kumud sees 2 cars

She look at Kshitij

She has tears in her eyes

He takes her hand and kisses it.

Kumud read the first card.....



She looks and Kshitij and smiles

Then he brings her gorgeous roses



Kumud feels a bit dizzy.....

So she lies on the bed

Kshitij sits next to her

She is crying....

K: Kshitij, thanks so much

KSH: Kumud, we dunt say thanks or sorry to the ones we love most

K: You have done so much for me

KSH: it because I love u

They have their first hug.....

😳

For a week Kshitij takes care of Kumud....

They reach back to India...

Kumud is still limping...

A week later Kumud is all better they have the engagement..

Kumud is looking very pretty




Kkusum is happy. Abhay enetrs the engagement house

Abhay and Kkusum bump into each other

Abhay sees Kkusum

Kkusum sees Abhay and He yells

KKUSUM!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
aww such a sweeti pie!!! !!

Please cont soon!!

I wonder what will happen now!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
great job...wonder what will happen next...plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
such a sweet and cute part
keep up the wonderful work
what will happen when kumud finds out that abhay is her dad.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
Brlliant part..... 👏
Post next part soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow i just read ur fan fic frm the beginning!and man omg its gr8!!!gosh all u guyz (u,guli,k+k,etc.)rite soooooo good!truly brilliant!i hope kekta read dis and gets on how to rite a real story!lol neways keep up the gr8 work!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW! THAT IS KIND OF LIKE MINE BUT AWESOME PART. PLEASE CONT. SOON. YOU KNOW WHAT I THINK-- ALL OF OUR STORIES ARE TAKING A SIMILAR TURN. KUMUD GOT HURT IN ALL THE FAN-FICS AND...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kshitij+Khumud

WOW! THAT IS KIND OF LIKE MINE BUT AWESOME PART. PLEASE CONT. SOON. YOU KNOW WHAT I THINK-- ALL OF OUR STORIES ARE TAKING A SIMILAR TURN. KUMUD GOT HURT IN ALL THE FAN-FICS AND...



yea...I guess....great mind think alike..hehehe
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Posted: 19 years ago
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KKUSUM AND KUMUD ARE SHOCKED...EVR1 IS CONFUSED

K: Mama, do u abhay sir?

KK: yea, very well

A: plz Kkusum waaspas ajao

A: Kali tumhe miss karti hsai aab karte hai plz kkusum.. jo tum soch rahi vo naihi huwa tha. Mahi aur mere saath kuch nahi huma

KK: what? how come u never told me this before? I seperated from you, my family and left you! You did not stop to tell me....

A: I tried but u were not willing to hear one word...

KK: I am sorry... ganpati plz forgive me as I made a BIG mistake...

Kumud goes near them to?

K: mama what goin on?

Abhay looks at Kkusum

A: Kya yeh hamari beti hai?

KK: yes...I left u and den I found out

Kumud looks in shock

Abhay touches her cheek

He has tears in his eyes

He hugs Kumud but Kumud is jus to shocked

KK: Kumud he is ur father

K: mama, he is the reason u lived like a widow for 17yrs! He is the reason I had no fathers name. He is the one whom u never told me of

KK: beta....

Kumud interrupts

K: no mama u can forget but.. I cannot

Kumud runs outside...Kshitij goes behind her

Kumud hugs Kshitij and just cries

Evr1 comes home to find none of them

Kkusum get worried

They all search...

Kk: Abhay, I should have told Kumud about u in the first place. If will not forgive myself



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