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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

sookie u didnt pm me fr this

will get back to u soon...

now reading blah blah woof woof..

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

My apologies for replying so late.

@Rabia: Thanks for you comments. :-) I have written many after this.

@sea_nyx: Thanks!

@suhanaSafar: Thank you so much.

@cutie13: Thank you. I am glad you liked the way it ended.

@suvi: :-) Thank you. Amazing? Nah.

@Ridds: Thanks!

@naina: :-) Thank you.

@Ananya: Errr...thats a little overboard don't ya think? I am glad you like my writing.

@Kiran: Thanks for telling me...so late!

@NJ: Why is that you don't read what I actually ask you to read? Really? Anyway, thanks for finally gracing your presence here :-)

I wrote this for an exercise about characterization. How to write about characters without sounding as a monologue or an essay? And I was watching Criminal Minds where the team lead profiles there team and viola! Idea!
Yeah, this is 100% DMG. Its a first for me too :-)

@Suvi: Hey! You have already commented. Looks like you have forgotten :-)

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Had a second read... and I must say.. I loved it again all the way!!! Thanks Sookie!!

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

sookie
u so rock
ur writings always register in the hearts of the readers
trust me if u write a book its gonna be a bestseller
i've read many of ur stories on the blog too
u simply write awesome.

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Kiarahh

@Blushhhh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

tremendously authorized.

i mean it was so interesting.

luved it till the extent.

There were eight people in the barn. But now, there were four couples.

Everything was going to be fine as long as they had one another.

and

Atul says...Armaan would never let Riddhima die

were the best and touchy lines throughout.

and is it a one shot?luved it.

luv

oochita

Edited by riddhzie - 15 years ago

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

hey sookie*
another brilliant fic..
this time spooky naa..its more calculative and imaginative...
wow!!!latuls analysis and how he and rids made their story seem to be so true at the end ..
going by u r (atul) theory..
~he thght that muskaan wud be first..
~then himself..
~nikki
~rahul
~abhi
~anjali
~armaan
ridhima!!!
i wonder how u got this order but it looked perfect and atuls(u r )theory seem to just fit in place..
it was very different i have to say it..
hmm.if this had been a movie/tv series the spooky element have been started by now and the deaths too,,
but they way u ended was really different..
and yes the last lines for sure..

"Atul saw that when he started his analysis, there were eight people in the barn. But now, there were four couples.
Everything was going to be fine as long as they had one another."

hmm..
great analysis..
good wishes,,
sri:-)

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